Ok here is the second chapter, I don't know if it's good so please give a review, and constructive criticism welcome.
Chapter 2
Austin's POV
2 hours later
"Hey Trish, where is Ally and what are you wearing," I say a smile spreading across my lips.
"Hi Austin, Ally's upstairs in the music room talking to Selia, she's been in there for 2 hours, they must have a lot to catch up on, oh and I got a job at baby galore, yippee" she replies
"Oh cool." We sit there in silence, when Dez bursts through the door.
"Guess what"
"What" Me and Trish reply
"A jet just landed on Miami Beach"
"Wait what, that's so cool, let's go"
"Austin we have to wait for Ally" I look at Trish and sigh.
"I guess you're right," We wait for Ally, when Selia came rushing in.
"SELIA" we all say
"I thought you and Ally were talking," She looks at me like I'm crazy.
"What no, I finished talking to her 2 hours ago, where is she," I could hear the panic in her voice, I felt cold all of a sudden.
"Ally still hasn't come out of the practice room" Trish replies, Selia suddenly runs for the practice room, I quickly follow behind, with Trish and Dez on my tail.
Selia stops dead in the entrance of the door way, I wonder what she's looking at and then I see Ally on the floor out cold. Selia runs to her, and I'm left frozen in the doorway, staring at Ally, she looked as pale as the dead, and she didn't look like she was breathing. I stare at her and I felt something die inside, I hear Selia yelling, but I couldn't concentrate, all I heard was a white noise as my world came crashing down. I saw Trish calling 911, the rest is a blur the ambulance came, and took Ally away, we got a taxi and followed, Selia called Mr Dawson, and Ally was rushed into surgery, after 2 hours I finally snap out of it. I stare at Selia, who is talking to the doctor. "Selia."
"Yes Austin," Her voice weary.
"Why did you fly all the way to Miami," I could tell, Trish and Dez were thinking the same thing.
"Well I flew all the way here, because Ally looked terrible and I asked her these questions, and I had my suspicions, and I was hoping I was wrong, but as it turned out I was right," she sits down, and puts her head in her hands and begins to cry.
"What is it, what does she has," Trish asks, worry creeping into her voice.
"Ally had appendicitis," Selia sniffs.
"Had what do you mean had," I ask worried and confused.
"Well, because Ally didn't tell anyone, her appendix burst, which left untreated can cause her t…to…" Selia begins to sob harder. Me, Trish and Dez look at her. Mr Dawson then comes in crying, Selia jumps up and runs to him.
"What's wrong, Ally should be out of surgery," Then Selia's eyes widened in realisation, we were all looking at her, then she took off, leaving the rest of us in the dust. I jump up and follow her, she stops outside a private room and looks in I hear her repeating the word No, I look in and see Ally, I stand there shocked because I see what's she's hooked up to a life support machine, I look at Selia.
"What happens if the appendix bursts Selia" She looks at me, her make up running from her tears.
She replies so quietly that I barely hear her, "If a burst appendix is left untreated, she could die." Then for the second time that day, my world came crumbling down.
About the appendix it is true, I looked it up. Don't worry nearly impossible that it will happen, sorry don't mean to scare anyone, oh and please review, I would love to get your feedback. :)