Good morning you beautiful sons of guns,
today I am bringing you an update, i'm still interested in writing this story, i haven't given up...yet. However when i reread this there was a lot of flaws i saw with it. The story goes by a little to fast so im reworking it to go in more detail, or expand on it a little more.
Also i gave no character motivation which was something i personally didn't like, how is the audience supposed to like the character, or relate to them if they have no motivation behind their action.
lastly none of it seemed right to me, i don't know if it was just me criticizing myself, or not, but i know that i'm going to start reworking the entire thing, i'll be keeping the oc the same as i have actually like them (thanks to two that sent them).
Also i would like to apologize to everyone that it literally took a whole 2 fucking years to update, but that's because i joined the army, and i've been busy with what the army wants me to do, i have haven't had much free time, and with everyone now gone because our deployment, and me staying back on Rear-D i have more time to work on it don't expect regular updates as my job still takes priority over this.
This is just a hobby of mine, you know let my mind run wild for a bit, and make a story that i would like to read, and hopefully others would like to read it too. That's the main purpose i do this… but sometimes (Most the time) life gets in the way, and that sucks but it's whatever.
If you read this to the end thank you for hearing me out, it means alot to me that some people still read this even though it hasn't been updated in 2 years. So i ask that you keep up with it and i see you sons of guns when i come out with the revised 1st chapter