What i dont really understand is why girls like yaoi all of a
sudden! Really? Why? Homosexuality used to be considered gross!
WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED! Have you ever seen normal animals that are
in the wild being willfully gay? Didnt think so, *sorry about the
rant! Plz continue!

When it rains, it pours!

Chapter 2

While me and Temari were strolling towards my apartment, it was
getting late, we hadnt eaten since breakfast and Ichiraku Ramen was
right around the corner.

So we decided what the hell! Of course I had to pay, but i really
didnt mind, especially since what happened just a few hours earlier.
(Plus what might happen tonight).
*wink wink

Ayame was there with the two not-so-clumsy-anymore clumsy guys.
Amazing ramen, payed, waved, left, the whole time while we were eating
Temari was staring at me kinda funny. I mean, weve been friends for
years and never anything before this! It just happened, and i could
tell the more time we were eating and not at my place she was getting
more and more restless! When she got out of the ramen stand, she lept
at me and of course we started kissing again, this time a little more
dirty and... Whats the word? Ravenous? Maybe ;)

I dont think that either of us could wait untill we were home. The
second i closed the front door she tackled me onto the bed and started
to unzipp my jeans, I just pulled her skirt off with one small gesture
and we were off like a bullet! I dont really know what happened
between the bath house and here but man o man! She was wild! Lasted
longer too! Wink*

But inevitably, she reached her peak and screamed with exctatic
pleasure when she had to stop,
I thought stop alltogether but no! She just jumped a little lower
down and started to lick the head of it, it felt so amazing! Then she
started to suck full on and I felt ready to burst, I couldnt handle
it! She stopped just as i reached my climax and it shot up onto her
face, she moaned and she licked it off blushing deeper and got on all
fours on the bed pleading for more. I gave it to her and after when
she reached a massive final moment she was screaming my name and then
I came too, then she told me to summon a shadow clone... (ooh yeah!)

A threesome with two people! One on bottom, her in the middle, and me
on top! She still wanted more so I got yet another clone for the
front! A FREAKING FOUR WAY! I dont really know why but I was kind of
jealous of the other clones but when I cancelled the jutsu and I
experienced all three climaxes at once I went crazy! She screaming
for more and me giving it to her! After a massive trip lasting more
than 5 hours nonstop, we fell asleep!

We woke up around the same time, god damn she is so beautiful! How
have I not noticed this before? We slowly kissed as I whispered to
her...

"I love you"

So, what do you think of this one? Too short? Not enough characters?
To rough? Please comment!
Thanks :3