Hello it is Allison again and I just got to the school and oh my god it's a castle i odn't have to put too much description in this because people know what Hogwarts looks like and since this is a Harry Potter fan fiction lets forget about description even though in stories even fan fiction you should be writing as if the author is learning about it for the first time. so yeah we are in boats crossing the lake and i am still with everyone i was on the train with and i feel sad because people have been calling me ugly even though i am 11 years old and people are generally awkward looking at 11 and people don't make fun of people for their looks at 11 but okay whatever. all these kids are making fun of me for being ugly. you would think beauty is the eye of the beholder but apparently not in this story.

So we get out of the boats and follow this giant man to the castle and his name is Hagrid and then we climg the steps where McGonagall is waiting for us. I should tell you who McGonagall is but since you've read Harry Potter books you already know who she is. she leads us in and we are all gasping about how amazing the entrance hall is but we don't need to capitalize that since who cares about grammar or punctuation. no need to describe it either since you already know what it looks like.

We go into a side room off from the Great Hall and somehow I know that even though I am muggleborn and I don't know what the castle looks like but since you do know that I don't have to explain that to you. Around me people are aruging about how we are going to get sorted even though we already know after McGonagall leaves after she explains the four houses. Notice how I am summarizing all this?

Okay now we are leaving the side room and OH MY GOD THE GREAT HALL IS FULL OF PEOPLE. It has house tables and ateachers table. I am scared because I am shy even though eventually I am going to be awesome i look around the Great Hall and then one of the kids stands up and throws ups and I am wondering if they are sick but then it turns out that its because of me because I am just that ugly. don't worry people my awsome personailty eventually will make up for my supposed ugliness because apparently everyone in the world thinks I am ugly even though that's impossible but whatever.

so the students pukes and everyone wants to know if they are okay and they nod and point at me.

"OH MY GOD THAT IS THE UGLIEST 11 YEAR OLD I HAVE EVER SEEN!"

Chaos breaks out in the great hall as every eye falls on me. i am wishing so much I could show them a crystal ball to let them know how awesome I am so people will forget my ugliness.

eventuenally the hat starts to sing and then names are called. i am soon called up and the hat is put on my head. Even though I'm suppised to be a MAry Sue I am put into Hufflepuff house which is weird since every OC goes to Gryffindor or Slytherin but I guess the author wants to be unique by picking the loser house. I guess they thought if they picked Hufflepuff no one would guess their character would become a Mary Sue. Thats the only explanation I can think of BECAUSE WHY HUFFLEPUFF OF ALL HOUSES! LIKE SERIOUSLY NO ONE WANTS TO READ ABOUT HUFFLEPUFF AS IT IS BUT YOU ARE ACTUALLY PUTTING YOUR OC IN HUFFLEPUFF!?

Okay so now i guess I am HUfflepuff.

Next CHapter is Eleanors story.