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Btw..had to change to RATED M..things got a bit,um "heated".Lol enjoy!
Love you all!Much Lovee!Take care!
~Jenny
Chapter2:Sharing is caring
Eddie's POV
Did she really say she wants to share a bed?
"U-uh..Loren,you know I have a girlfriend."She laughed.
"I said we could share the bed,not I'll suck your dick."She said
I laughed."Alright just keep your distance.I don't think I can control myself though."
She smirked."Me too,you know with that big snake in your pants."
Speaking of my "snake"..He was rising.
But I'm glad Loren made that joke,eases the tension a bit..just a bit.
"Alright,guess I have a bed buddy."We started laughing.
"Wow,that sounded sexual."Loren said laughing.
"So now you're talking sex huh?"I said stepping closer to her.
She laughed and slightly shoved me away."I'm gonna go get your bag."
What was wrong with me?I had a beautiful,loving girlfriend at home.
I looked at Loren bringing my bag and forgot what I was thinking about.
Something to do with a Chloe?
"Here's your bag."She said plopping it down on the bed.
"Thanks."She nodded and grabbed her bag,heading to the bathroom.
"I'm gonna shower."She said standing at the door.
"You mind?"She said.
"No,go ahead.I'll just go watch movies in the living room."I said walking to the door.
She disappeared inside,but couldn't lock it because there was no lock.
This cabin was meant for a one person stay.
"Hey ma,I'm picking a cabin."I said walked into the kitchen.
"Can you help?"I walked up and placed a laptop in front of her.
"A cabin huh?Does your father know about this?"She said smirking.
"No,which is why I'm asking you."We laughed.
"I don't know about this Eddie.."She said.
"Ma,I swear it's just for escaping when things get a little crazy and I want to clear my head."
She looked onto the screen and pointed."This one."
I looked at the bathroom door and it was slightly cracked.
These doors weren't really the best.I began walking up and reaching for the door knob.
I was about to close it shut when I saw a flash of baby blue.
Her baby blue underwear hugged her perfectly shaped ass,her boobs were a nice size and perky.
God damn Loren.
Now only one word passed through my mind.
Squeeze.
No Eddie!Let's get out of here.I shut the door quietly and exited to the living turning on the tv.
I was in the middle of watching Breaking Bad when Loren walked up.
Usually,I never looked away from the screen when Breaking Bad was on,until Loren walked out.
"Sweet!I love Breaking Bad!"She said plopping down on the couch,stomach down.
Her pink sleep shorts was halfway to her mid-thigh,her blue Hollister shirt hugged her body,her dark brown and wet hair was at the top of her butt,and those pink knee high socks made her legs even sexier.
I got up from the couch."Where are you going Eddie?"She said looking at the screen.
"U-uh..s-shower."That was all I managed to say.
When I got out of the shower,I came back into the living room.
Loren was fast asleep on her side.
I gently picked her up and carried her to the bedroom,laying her down on one side of the bed.
Immediately,she turned to her stomach and her shorts were riding up a bit.
I laid down on my side and stared at her,finally noticing something.
Right below her shorts,there was a small purple and black bruise about the size of my knuckles.
I looked up at her gorgeous face,no sign of fear,pain,or weakness.
How does she keep it all bottled up all the time?
I moved a bit closer and moved a strand of hair away from her face.
After I moved my hand she moved closer to me,wrapping her arm around my chest and a leg right below my crotch.
I tried moving her arm and leg but she had a tight I quit fighting and eventually my arm was around her waist,snuggling her closer to me.
Falling asleep was peaceful with Loren in my arms..I just wonder what is gonna happen in the morning.
Loren's POV
I woke up and felt strong arms wrapped around my waist.
I slightly opened my eyes,Eddie and I were wrapped in each other's arms.
Okay,the hell happened?Not that I'm complaining.
I'd like to think I wasn't imagining things but I probably am,otherwise Eddie wouldn't be smiling.
One of my legs was so close to his crotch,making me chuckle lightly.
My eyes trailed up to my shorts and...Oh bruise is totally visible.
I really hope Eddie hasn't seen it.
Eddie was starting to stir,so I closed my eyes again.
He was moving and I expected him to jump and untangle himself from me.
But all he did was pull me closer.
My lips curved into a smile as I moved my leg down and wrapped it around his farther leg.
"Morning."Eddie said.
I looked up at him and smiled."This is probably the weirdest way I have waken up."
He laughed."Is that a bad thing."I shook my head and unwrapped myself from him.
"So you wanna grab some breakfast?"I said grabbing some clothes.
"Not such a good idea."I looked at him strangely.
"We're missing,we should probably stay out of sight."He said.
"How about I'll go grab breakfast and bring it back here."I suggested.
"You sure?"I nodded,he walked to his wallet and pulled out two-hundred dollars.
"Eddie.I'm not taking that."I said backing up and leaning against the wall.
He put his arms near the sides of my head,trapping me in between."Yeah you will take it."
"Okay."I whispered.
He winked and stuffed the money in my hand,then walked into the bathroom.
I slid down the wall and sat there for a good twenty minutes.
I smiled and started to pick my clothes.
White loose tank top,maroon skinny jeans,gray leather jacket,and black booties.
I was in my underwear,because I always strip down before putting on clothes,when I heard the door open and shut behind me.
Eddie's POV
I was in the shower,thinking,when I finally realized I was using the whole California reservoir,so I decided to get out.
I dried off and pulled on a pair of black boxers.
I walked out and found something..well um,different to say the least.
There was Loren,turned with her nice ass facing me.
She slowly turned around.
Her bra was maroon with black lace at the top,her underwear was a matching set.
"U-um Eddie?"She stuttered.
I don't know what came over me.
One minute we're on the opposite sides of the room,the next I have her in my arms and I'm kissing her passionately.
She wraps her arms around my neck and her legs around my waist.
I walk to the bed and lay her down,without breaking the kiss I crawl on top of her.
I broke the kiss and looked deep into her eyes.
"Loren before we go any farther I have two questions to ask you."I say supporting my weight with my arms next to Loren's sides.
She nods and I continue."Will you be my girlfriend?"I ask.
Loren smirks."Of course Eddie."She unwrapped her legs from my waist and wrapped one around my leg going up and down slowly.
"Anything else?"She asks seductively.
"U-um..a-are you..uh.."I stutter.
"Oh,sorry."She says giggling and unwrapping her smooth,toned legs..focus Eddie!
"Are you sure you want to keep going?We don't need to rush."I say.
"I know we just began dating,but I feel something special with you and I want to be closer to you."She said.
I dove back in for a kiss,but with Loren's momentum,she flipped us over straddling my torso.
Her hands made her way down my chest to my fingers pulling at my waistband.
I broke the kiss."Um,Lo?Can you get a condom from the drawer."I asked slightly embarrassed.
She laughs,crawling over me,making sure she passes her womanhood over my head.
She threw it on my chest and pulled down my boxers.
I rolled it on and crawled on top of her,pulling her into another kiss.
Every time I reached for her bra strap,she moved my hand away from it.
I cupped her breast and she moaned into my mouth.
At this point I didn't ask for anymore permission.I went behind her ripped of her bra and threw it behind me.
I pulled her panties off and threw it behind me along with the bra.
I slowly moved in and out pushing us both over the edge after a few thrusts.
I collapsed beside her and pulled her into my arms."We're dating right?"She joked.
I kissed her on the cheek and closed my eyes.
Then I felt Loren remove herself from my grip."Where you off to babe?"I said.
"I'm gonna get us that food."She said putting on clothes.
When she finished she walked over kissed me on the cheek and left.
I couldn't stop smiling as I pulled on some boxers and sweats.
Before heading to the living room,I got a phone call.
Chloe was calling.
Just a second before the phone automatically sent the caller to voice mail..I picked up.
"Chloe?"I said hesitantly.
Another chapter finished:)I know..I know.A little to early for sex but I want to show how strong of a connection they have in a short amount of time.
And what will happen with Chloe?
Will she be concerned and happy he picked up?Or furious that he left her?
POLL:Should Chloe:A)Have been cheating on Eddie and never really cared about him?B)Not Cheat and completely love Eddie?C)Love Eddie and cheats on him?
Let me know:)
Love you all!Much Lovee!Take care!
~Jenny
