Thanks for all the nice reviews and suggestions but anyway, onto the story.
-Percy's POV-
I was tumbling down into tartarus for what seemed like forever thinking about the dangers ahead of me, the monsters only tartarus himself my know. My thoughts were abruptly stopped as I entered the realm of tartarus I gazed at the huge landscape with spikes emitting from the ground and monsters roaming the grounds.
I was falling straight towards the river Lethe, as i landed I compelled the river to let me keep my memories, being a son of Poseidon I was able to do so. As soon as I stepped out of the Lethe I was instantly swarmed by a pack of hellhounds, there was about 8 and each as big as Mrs O'Leary apart from one which was almost double the rests with bulging muscles, this was clearly the Alpha.
Not wanting to be surrounded, I backed up to the Lethe as they created a semi-circle around me, sizing me up. Thinking I was an easy meal, one leapt at me but I simply dodged left and swiped at it's ankle, chopping off its foot. I then proceeded to kick the dog in the snout and stab it through the heart with riptide. The other hellhounds looked angry buy scared at how easily I dispatched of their sibling.
"Leave this boy puppies! He's mine." All the hellhounds quickly scampered away at the voice in the darkness.
"Who are you?" I shouted.
"Don't even recognise your own grand father Persues? I'm offended." I looked towards the sound of the voice and saw a hooded figure carrying a scythe.
"Kronos? Your essence should have been lost for at least another couple years." I tried to act brave but I knew he could beat me in hand-to-hand combat easily.
"You only shattered the boy Luke's essence so he couldn't be sent to the underworld, I'm almost at full power and looking for revenge," Kronos said darkly I could see him smirk as he readied his scythe.
He lunged at me quickly and I only managed to block and I could tell he was slowing my movments with his powers. He slashed at me a couple times and I could just block or dodge them but out of no where he hit me with the butt of his scythe and knocked me out.
(:AN - this scene may be gory:)
I wake up to excruciating pain in both my hands and feet, I instantly scream out in pain and look towards the areas of pain. I had two dagger in the palms of my hands and my hands, above my head, stapling me to the wall behind me. Moving my hands forwards or backwards hurt as it pushed the dagger further into my palm putting me in more pain. My feet were shackled together with spikes on the inside of the metal cuffs making it impossible to move.
The room was small with a door on the opposite side from me, the room was made from stone with no windows. I look towards the door and see it slide open, Kronos walks in.
"How are we holding up Persues?"
"I'm great thanks Kronos." I said sarcastically with hate dripping from my voice.
"Bit touchy," he said, he then glared at me sadistically, "we can fix that."
He ran up to me and stared at me, he reached under his cloak and grabbed a knife, with the knife he stabbed me in my right shoulder and left the knife there for a couple seconds before grabbing it again and pulling it down to the opposite hip, leaving a huge open would across my stomach.
"Don't worry Persues," He whispered into my ear as I screamed in pain, "I made it so you cannot die in here, letting me give as much pain as I like." He smiled before leaving.