Ok, this is second part to my story Priceless, I hope you enjoy it. Please leave feedback in the review box, and favorite. ;] I don't own ANY of Stephenie Meyers work or the Twilight books, but THIS story is MINE. I created it and thought of it and I'd like to keep it that way. Thanks.
A moment I was shivering from the freezing night in Oregon, but now my shivering turned into shaking and me being in burning agony. I didn't understand how pain like this ever existed, or even existed in hell. Was I in hell burning my soul away? I shouldn't be in hell; I don't deserve to be there. I was so confused; I didn't find any pieced of my body on fire. I rushed to open my eyes when I couldn't feel her sharp teeth slicing into my neck anymore, and sure enough I was still in the cold forest. This beautiful woman no longer lingered over me; instead she was standing at a nearby tree. When I blinked I saw her jump from tree branch to tree branch in incredible speed. This must be a dream, no not a dream, a nightmare. What the hell is wrong with me?
Everything seemed so real including the burning in my veins. I wanted to yell and scream but if I do that the woman, animal, creature, or whatever she is might return. Or what she had called herself a...Vampire. I decided to despite of my pain, crawl to a nearby tree. The wood was wet and bugs most likely crawled around in it, but I didn't care. Closing my eyes and resting my head on a root of the tree I tried falling asleep. Asleep? I thought I was already in this nightmare. A horrible shiver ran through me and I knew that this nightmare wasn't a sleeping nightmare, but a living one. Sleeping was impossible but still I closed my eyes.
When I opened my eyes after what seemed like an eternity, I saw a lot more clearly. I could see a single ant on a tree branch, a deer really far away, and a spider digging a hole in the soft dirt ground. It was not dark anymore but now morning, I could tell by the sun and the cool breeze. My veins still felt like an inferno match between the devil and his assistants, and this made me really furious. I stood up and flipped out. I screamed and swung at the huge tree in front of me. I kicked at it and actually bit into it. The tree had huge dents in it and looked as if It was about to collapse. Freaked out by my strength I started running towards no particular direction. I was extremely fast and had incredible senses. I'm a freak. An extremely fast and strong good-vision freak. I stopped running and collapsed to my knees and then fell on my back. The burning exhausted me and I tried standing again but failed. I couldn't even sit up I was so weak all of a sudden. My life is over and now I'm dying, I hope. I wish I were with my Dad, but I can't accomplish the impossible.
Taking all the pain I stayed at the spot I fell for a very long time. The sun appeared and disappeared 4 times and when I stopped thinking of my destroyed life, the pain went away. The burning in my veins completely dissolved. My eyes fluttered open, and it seemed like the sun rays were visible. Using the tree for support, I stood up. The forest was in details once again. But this time my surprise was interrupted by fire inside my throat. I don't get it. What the hell is up with me thinking I'm burning? Is this physical pain, or am I just having mental pain. The stab on the inside of my throat answered that question. Definitely Physical, what should I do? My life is damned. I don't know what I'm still alive for. I lost nearly everything, including my sanity. Please, oh please someone help me. I don't understand how to get rid of this pain! I'm going to go complete mad if I have to live like this any longer!
"Well, Well, Well...lookie here." a familiar voice spoke. It sent a shiver down my spine. I turned around and sure enough it was...HER.
"What the hell are you? And what did you do to me?" I shouted in frustration. I can't believe she actually shows herself after what she has done.
"Correction What the hell are we. I just changed you up a bit." Those words sent another violent shiver down my spine.
"Just a bit? You changed a lot! What am I?" I spit at her. Who is she to decide whether I needed change?
"We are vampires, like I told you before." I gasped in surprise. A…vampire? Are you kidding me? I think im nuts because I actually just a little bit believed her.
"Yea, sure. And George Bush is a mermaid. Seriously what the hell is your problem?" My words triggered her anger. I think she... hissed at me. A wave of grief passed through me when I remembered she had killed my friends.
"Why did you kill my friends? Did they happen to be wandering in a forest like me too? Or did give them a 'change' like me?" I shouted again.
"Honey, those kids weren't your friends. They actually LEFT you in the forest hoping you'd die. Besides I only killed one of them." she grinned and put her hand on my cheek. I shook it off and she looked at me shocked.
"Look kid, I did YOU a favor when I changed you. You were a worthless piece of shit and this is how you return the favor? Maybe I should of let you die, or I should have just ended your life myself." she spit at me. Grabbing my arms she threw me into a boulder about three feet away. What was I going to do? I stood up and she then charged at me tackling me through a tree. I followed my instincts and flung her up in the air, and she flew up pretty high. She did a back flip and dived at me but before she did that I yelled.
"PAIN!" Like a shot bird she crashed straight to the ground, screaming and shrieking in pain. What the hell is she doing? Am I doing this to her? Even though she was in complete pain we both kept eye contact. I looked away and she stopped screaming. Then I slowly looked back into her eyes.
"Pain..." and BAM, there she was laying again in extreme pain. Wow, now I really feel like a freak. I tried stopping her pain without looking away. After about 5 minutes of trying it finally stopped. I slowly walked over to where she was now sitting up. Her eyes were wide and she was terrified of me.
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