Wow. People actually liked the first chapter. So here's the second one, enjoy!

Chapter 2: Pain Redefined

"What do you mean, send a squad out to find it?" yelled Tsunade.

"What if it caused a fire? What if it contains something dangerous? And if it does, do you really want the Akatsuki or S.N.A.K.E to get it? " Said Naruto.

S.N.A.K.E was the group Sasuke had managed to pull together after he killed Orochimaru.

"Then why don't you go find it?"

"I have another mission with Sakura today." He said sheepishly.

Tsunade fumed.

"Fine. I'll send Hinata, Shino and Kiba to check it out."

The ship was silent. The once mighty Predator carrier ship reduced to ruins by the tiniest accident.

Sparks shot out of destroyed computers while the once magnificent trophy case's occupants lay scattered. The predalien called in a low growl to the other alien children. There were seven all together along with several eggs. A couple of the Predator warriors were crushed and mangled beneath wreckage.

One crawled out of the carnage, covered in bright, glowing green blood. One of his legs missing and his body riddled with shrapnel, the warrior inched forward.

The giant Predalien hissed a horrific, bone-chilling sound and slithered over to the wounded hunter. The warrior coughed the fluorescent blood and looked up at the Xenomorph.

The beast spread it's mandibles in a horrible, mocking grin. It stepped on the Predator's head, crushing it like the shell of an annoying insect.

The massive beast growled to one of the drones. It sensed prey. . . .

But in cryo, one hunter still lived.

Hinata and her team were sent to investigate the crash in the forest, just north of the village.

"This is lame. It's just a space rock." Grumbled Kiba. Akamaru barked an affirmative.

"I don't thing Lady Tsunade would send us out over a rock, no matter where it comes from." Said Hinata.

"Right."

That's when they saw it.



"Holy shit. . ." said Kiba.

Shino nodded.

The wreck was like nothing they had ever seen. Although destroyed they could tell it was once magnificent.

But as they entered, the squad had failed to notice the leathery sacks opening, the alien being crawling forth.

"Look at this sucker! Something crushed his head." Said Kiba, pointing the corpse.

"What's with these burns?" said Hinata softly, touching the melted metal.

There was a low hiss, like the sound of escaping air.

"Hey, Hinata have you seen Shino?"

"No."

"Hey! Shino!"

There was no reply.

"Come on man! This isn't funny." Yelled Kiba.

Something slithered in the shadows.

Kiba laughed but Akamaru shrank away.

"Oh come on boy. It's just Shino playing a trick."

Then a flesh-colored, insectoid creature leapt out and attached itself to Kiba's face.

Hinata screamed but it was trapped in the ruins of the alien craft.

Another insect creature jumped at her and she threw a kunai knife at it. The black blade ripped into its still moving body. The creature's blood sprayed her arm and Hinata screamed again as it began to melt through her sleeve.

Before she could tear the sleeve away, the acid had begun to disintegrate the flesh beneath. And it kept burning and disfiguring until the arm had fallen free of the body.

Hinata activated the homing beacon to signal Tsunade in case of an emergency.

She sobbed into the stump of an arm, not noticing the loud thump of heavy footsteps towards her.

The Kunoichi heard a low, primeval growl. She looked up and was face to face with a mandibled, drooling monstrosity.



Hinata screamed as it lunged forward and grabbed her, holding her against the floor. She felt the cold, clammy figures of a spidery creature crawling up towards her face.

After the endless seconds the being finally reached her face. The thing then muffled Hinata's whimpering cries and set to its hideous, unconscious work. The Predalien released her.

The homing signal reached the Hokage's office.

"It's just a meteor. . ." thought Tsunade.

"Kakashi."

"Yes, Lady Hokage."

"I want you to go check out what happened to Hinata's squad. I'm sending you the coordinates."

"Right."

Kakashi, the copy ninja bounced lightly, from tree to tree. "What could have happen to them?"

"Holy. . ." he said, looking out, at the destruction before him.

"Wow. . What is this thing?" He said, his voice echoing in the alien machine that surrounded him.

Kakashi spotted Hinata. He called to her and when she didn't respond, walked towards her.

"Hinata?" then Kakashi noticed that her arm was gone and her face was surrounded by an unknown thing.

"What the hell is that?" He thought.

Afterwards Kakashi discovered the others.

"Lady Tsunade, you should send out another team to collect them. They've got these things. . . ."

"What things?" she said impatiently.

"Well, they look like spiders or something attached to their heads. And that 'space rock' looks like a space craft."

"So are you telling me these things are aliens?"

"No but it's all very strange. We should really get medics out here."

"Right. Bring em in."

"But couldn't it contaminate the village?"

"Right now we need to help them. Besides we don't know what they are."



"Okay, Lady Tsunade."

How was part 2? Again, ANY feedback is helpful. By the time this is over, there's going to be a high character death toll. . . .

Edit: Thanks to Mermaid Ninja for pointing out the Lord/Lady mistake.