Well, this got more popularity than I thought it would in just a couple months! I really appreciate the support you guys give me on this site. Well let's move on to some reviews!
XxOmNiPoTent PriMorDial GodxX: Yes, I noticed there were no stories like this so I decided to do one. I hope my mediocre writing skills will please people to an extent.
Zero: The human is Frisk, and Frisk is male in this story. I have never seen so far a NarutoXFem!Chara pairing as of yet. I may perhaps pair Naruto with a female Chara, if I can make up some crap about how she could find a host body or something, like Edo Tensei or Rinne Rebirth. We'll see.
Cf96/Pikadrew9000/WingDingsGaster: Thanks. I really enjoy seeing people actually like my stories. It's just amazing to see.
KHR-Yunalesca: Yes. I'm glad you think this is interesting. I had some trouble being able to write Orochimaru with a conscience as well. The Sans VS. Orochimaru will be a little hard to imagine seeing as they are from differing worlds with differing definitions of powerful.
I am not going to make Kurama good right off the bat, just have him help Naruto when he really needs it, or keep him from dying. Naruto is smart, so he will piece together things quickly, and accept things rather quickly as well, so I won't take much time on having them try to get used to each other. I will not completely dismiss it, however.
As for the errors, well let's just say my parents drilled correct grammar into my head, yet I do make many stupid mistakes, but I usually try to go back and look over it to check for errors.
Austin 'SirAuruda1st' Bass: Yes, of course, I'm trying to at least update this one more than I did Double Nightmare, as I've now dubbed the story.
King of the shadows: Thanks! Actually, I hadn't intended for this story to be for the challenge, I was going to have another story where the Uzumaki's ancestors were half-monster, and Kurama unlocked that part of him. But, I could use this one for the challenge, though you did say the monsters' powers was supposed to be part of Naruto's bloodline. About the other stuff, would you mind if it was no pairing? Just asking. If I do do a pairing, it will probably be NaruHina or NaruHinaFem!Chara.
Thank you again for all the support just in the first chapter! Now, onto the story!
A True "Monster" Chapter 2: Experiments and Training: The Pain Just Keeps Coming!
-Naruto's Cell-
As Naruto ate, he noticed the bare cell was dirty with blood, grime, and other substances he probably didn't need to know about. He still felt that foreign sensation, it covered his whole body. It was uncomfortable, yet at the same time, comforting. After a few hours of contemplating the feeling, as well as exactly where he was, the same boy from before came in, and ushered him out of the cell.
"Hello again, come outside to begin your training." Training, what? Why was he training, wasn't he a prisoner?
He calmly walked outside pondering these thoughts. He was now in a green field with a few obstacles and trees on the opposite side he was standing.
The silver-haired boy was already there. "Good, you're here. Time to start." Before he could object, the boy drew a kunai and flew it at him. Out of sheer reflex, he dodged, narrowly escaping death. His encounters with the villagers helped hone his senses.
The boy continued throwing them at him, forcing him to dodge each time. After a couple hours, he began to feel tired. Then, a kunai came speeding towards him. He was too tired to dodge or block, and closed his eyes in fear.
Suddenly, a clang sounded. Opening his eyes, He found the kunai imbedded in the wall by a bone. Surprised, he turned to the boy, who was smirking.
"Good, you've unlocked your ability." Ability? This day just got weirder and weirder.
"You must be confused. That foreign presence you feel is the ability that you just used. It was injected into you by Lord Orochimaru." Orochimaru was behind this? He heard of the criminal who betrayed Konoha. What would a Sannin want with him?
And why and how was he given this ability? He wasn't a master in biochemistry, but he was pretty sure that DNA didn't work like that.
And the only clan he knew of that could use bones as a weapon was the Kaguya clan, and they were all wiped out. Weren't they?
He was awakened from his thoughts by the silver-haired teen.
"Well, we will continue your training right after we go through a list of what your training regimen will consist of." And the boy went inside, Naruto following after him.
-Next Week-
He grunted as he blocked the chakra scalpel of Kabuto, as he had learned the boy's name was. Everyday, he would eat, then spar with either Kabuto or Kimimaro, the last Kaguya and one of Orochimaru's most trusted soldiers.
Then, he would read on subjects from history of the Elemental Nations, to Medical information, to Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, as well as Bukijutsu, Kenjutsu, Genjutsu, and Kinjutsu.
He had improved quite impressively with his ability to manipulate bones, given the amount of time he had trained in it.
He had learned he could also use orange and blue bones, an ability the Kaguyas did not possess. Blue would not hurt you if you didn't move. Orange ones damaged anything idle.
He also learned that every time he entered a battle, everything would fade to black and white, except his SOUL, as Kabuto had called it, which was yellow.
All objects in the background disappeared for the most part, and he could only focus on the enemy.
He also discovered that he harbored the Kyuubi, and about his true heritage. A quite shocking revelation. It wasn't too subtle, now that he mulled over it. He had yellow hair, blue eyes, his parents died the day of the attack. And his last name was Uzumaki, the last name of Kushina Uzumaki, the wife of Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime Hokage, who was also expecting a child the night of the Kyuubi attack, the exact day he was born.
The Jinchuuriki thing wasn't too hard to believe, either. Considering the villagers called him "Demon brat" or "Murderer." They glared at him and hated him, threw bottles or bricks at him, and did everything they could to make his life miserable.
It made sense, they were afraid of the power he held, yet hated it because of the damage it did to the village, and the people it killed, and they needed a scapegoat. That scapegoat was to be him, because of the circumstances.
He focused back to the battle at hand, as he blocked another attack from Kabuto with his katana. He then tried to sweep out Kabuto's feet from under him, but the silver-haired teen jumped up and then tried a kick to Naruto's face.
Said boy barely ducked under it and kicked up toward Kabuto, who was still suspended in the air. Kabuto blocked with his scalpel and pushed Naruto away. Kabuto stopped, and said,
"Well, I think that's enough for today. I will inform Orochimaru-sama of your progress to see if you're ready for the next experiment."
He figured this meant getting another bloodline to use. It was cool, but he didn't want to rely solely on bloodlines, even many different ones. A good ninja is good in all his skills, and perhaps can excel in a few given areas.
He was led back to his cell by a random Oto Chunin. He sat down to meditate a little. It helped him to concentrate and calm down.
-Orochimaru's Office-
"Hmm… I see. Naruto-kun certainly has excelled at his bloodline in such a short time. Thank you Kabuto." Orochimaru remarked.
" Prepare the next test."
"Yes, Orochimaru-sama." He replied. Kabuto walked out of the office and headed down a corridor, though he could still hear mumblings from a certain snake-related Sannin about "cursed paperwork."
He opened a secure steel vault door to reveal a lab of sorts with all kinds of vats and flasks of unknown chemicals.
He lifted one up and put it in a surgical needle. It had a bluish green hue to it. On it was a label, "Undyne."
Well, that's all for this chapter, tune in next time to see Naruto gain Undyne's abilities. Sorry it's a little shorter. I didn't want to introduce the next set of abilities 'till next chapter. I also will have to postpone the Orochimaru/Sans fight for next chapter, I couldn't find a place to put it in this chapter without putting the next set of abilities in the chaoter. Hope you enjoyed this installment, and I apologize if I took too long to update. Thank you, and, as always, I will see YOU in the next chapter. Bye-bye!
