Hello everyone if I have posted this next part of the story then I have seen a review. I know the first chapter was boring and a little short but I am setting the scene. Please bear with me for I have never wrote anything except for my college classes. This is a trial in character development. This story is one that I have thought of for a long time and I hoping to get it published some day. Please enjoy, and feel free to give me suggestions!
Chapter 2
Adam raced through the streets trying to get away from his prison, The Order (a group of highly intelligent and strong leader immortals) had imprisoned him as they had for every one of her lifetimes, some times he made it to her before she was 21 sometimes he didn't. There was always a defeat when it came to his Ella ka. Like when she was in ancient Greece under the name of Helena and he had made it to her before they did but she thought he was sent by Zeus to punish her so she in her true Greek nature at the time had cast him away just for him to just missed stopping her killing. She never has a memory of him but the memories of her throughout the ages a seared into his heart never to be forgotten and the knowledge of what he did to cause this painful chain of events to repeat itself ever 200 years or so, and the lives they were suppose to have together. The first life in which he met her was in Egypt when she was Queen Nefertiti's best hand maiden. She was beautiful and she had just been changed by a mysterious Nordic girl in his village and had stumbled to Ella ka away from his travels to have her blood call out to him. Soul mate was the word that came to mind.
Run Adam Stop thinking! He had figured out where she was about 6 months ago but unfortunately so had the Order, so they captured him to keep him from fulfilling the prophecy. She was the key, not only to the prophecy but to my heart.
Hopefully in this day and age the people in America were open enough to except him and let him help her before history repeated. A modern American woman would not believe in his race but she most likely wouldn't freak at the sight of him and think that she was cursed; people are not as superstitious as they once were. Adam bumped into a homeless man on the street as he rounded the corner in Chicago to find where he had at last found Ella ka where he found out she did in this modern day and age go by Ellen. Ellen and her roommate Andrea both worked at the Museum in Chicago later in the day and by the fact that it was winter and the nights were longer they would both be there.
Her birthday is in a week and she had to convince her that she was in trouble before she turned 21 or else she would be lost to him as she had fro every lifetime before this one. Please let this be the one and I can be done searching for her.
"Come over here." Ellen beckoned to a group of college students to show them the ancient Greek artifacts.
"This is a Corinthian Mask could have been worn in the battle of Troy, and over here you will find replica's of Statues that are truly Greek like the Nike of Samothrace. The Nike was sculpted in the Hellenistic period, roughly 3rd century B. C." Ellen said as she was trying to keep the attention of the Students "Nike is the goddess of Victory and since she had wings is the reason that Nike's sports wear has a swoosh sign, or so it is thought."
Ellen always has a special place for the Nike which really resides in the Louvre in France but this is a very good replica. The Nike had a feeling of familiarity, like she had touched it as it was being made. Like she had been involved in it's creation, but that's just crazy considering it was sculpted over 20 century's ago.
Ellen led the patrons out of the Greek section into the Ancient Egyptian section. She had a special affliction with Ancient culture and Egypt was one of the strongest loves of her life.
I am so pathetic, no boyfriend but I can dream of men long dead! God, girl get a life!
While she was showing an ancient Ka of one of the affluent people in the ancient society, a young man walked in with silver blonde hair and in a very expensive looking black blazer with designer jeans. He is gorgeous.
The mystery man was tall and strong that much she could tell and there was an air of danger around him like a pent up panther ready to pounce. Then he looked at her and the floor underneath her gave way.
Those eyes! He is my dream man!
Please everyone let me know what you think… Ellen has finally met her angel. Adam is her soul mate obviously and he has come for her. I wonder how it will turn out, only one way to know please review and I will write more.