sorry people who have read my plot and who didnt comment making me sad... ANYWAYS i havent uploaded in a while cuz i've been WAY busy with school and all. Third week of freshman year! YAY! its been fun! kk so here goes!
Westchester, NY
The Voss Estate
6:00 AM
September 1st
Mackenzie woke to her alarm, she sat up and slipped off her eye mask opening her eyes to dim lighting. She looked at her clock confused, why am I up so early? Then everything came crashing back on her, Massie, humiliation, her dads new job, and finally the move. She hit the alarm's off button with more force than needed and jumped out of her bed.
Her huge room seemed even bigger without all of her furniture, all that was in her room was her bed, her alarm clock and her ah-dorable plane outfit. She put on her outfit and makeup, then examined herself in the mirror. Mackenzie pulled up her hair in a high ponytail and inserted silver hoops, there she thought, now the look is complete. She was a total 9.8 but the fact that she was wearing it for a plane ride made it a 9.4. She was wearing a silver tank from H&M with a black Chanel blazer and Guess skinny jeans. Accessories include black Gucci wedges, silver hoop earrings, and silver bangles.
"Mackenzie!" her mom yelled. Mackenzie took one last look in the mirror and left, she grabbed her Prada bag and headed for the door. "Brownie!" She turned back around facing her bed and saw the covers shift around, then suddenly a black Pomeranian popped out of her covers, " Come awn." Without waiting for her dog she left the room and went downstairs.
The plane ride was so bah-oring, thank GAWD for magazines. Mackenzie and her family were now pulling into a gated community called Beverly Parks North, where the biggest houses of Beverly Hills are. The driver opened the gate which revealed a HUH-UGE mansion, it was even bigger than their old estate- which was thought to be impossible. Mackenzie jumped out of the Escalade practically bouncing with excitement. "Brownie! Lets go find our rooms!" And with that Mackenzie ran off, Brownie trailing behind her. When Mackenzie found her room she was astonished, it was bigger than her room in Westchester! Immediately she started thinking about decorating her room. She had her mom donate all of her other unimportant furniture from her old room, so she can buy all new décor. Mackenzie reached into her Prada purse and pulled out her iPhone4 and sketched out the layout of her new room. A new room, a new life.
Beverly Hills, CA
The Voss Estate
9:37 pm
September 4
Mackenzie looked at her new and furnished room, finally satisfied. She had her parents hire the best room designer that money could buy, and now she was proud of what her and Natasha accomplished. She had a Ralph Lauren canopy bed right in the middle of her spacious room. The room color theme was pink and white, with random dashes of green, blue and purple. Her Mac pinged, and Mackenzie walked over to the left corner of her room, and gasped when she saw who Imed her.
Massie: Where did you go Mackie? Did my words scare you away in shame and misery?
Mac: Actually, my dad had to transfer jobs. Cause he didn't want to be stuck at a dead end job like your father.
Massie: Oh, I don't believe that. Lying will only make the humiliation worse, wait 'till I tell everyone at school that your a loser and when you show up you will be an outcast.
Mac: The only flaw with that plan, is I wont be going to your school! Did that ever cross your one celled brain?
Mac has signed off.
Fuming, Mackenzie went into her bathroom and yanked the handle on the shower, turning on the hot water. She quickly got undressed and jumped in the shower, letting the exta-remly hot water burn her skin. She finally decided. Mackenzie was going to rise to the top and show Massie what she was missing. And she was gonna turn the best of Beverly Hills into leaders, weather they like it or not.
R&R! please! i need motivation! so review! and i shall continue... and i know this chap is short and boring but what first chapter isn't? REVIEW!