OK, my last chapter sucked. I hope this one's better.
chapter 2: are we there yet?
It was a beautiful morning, the sun shining through the windows onto Yoh and Anna. It shined in Yoh's eyes causing him to say "mmmff. five more minutes mommy." "What did you say? Wake up!" and with that, she put his headphones over his ears and turned it on full. "YAAAHHH!!! don't hit me grandpa!!!" he yelled as the music blasted into his ears. he calmed down, realizing his grandpa was nowhere near and got dressed. Yoh tried to make eggs and toast, but they burned. After breakfast, Yoh asked Manta "Hey, Manta, how much of last night do you remember?" "All of it." "Even the part where me and Anna.." "yes." "shit!" "don't worry Yoh." Manta made the "my lips are zipped" gesture meaning it was their secret. The rest of the morning slid by without much incident. Everyone piled into a greyhound bus, after waiting at the station for 2 hours. Yoh, Anna and Manta were all packed into the same row. "Hey, Anna I want the window seat." said Yoh. "no, i get the seat. you sit in the middle." "Ok, fine you get the window." From the back of the bus, they heard "NO BAKA, I GET THE WINDOW CHAIR. NOW GET THE HELL UP HORO HORO!!!!" everyone on the bus stared, except for Yoh, Anna, and Manta. They turned to each other and simultaneously said "Ren". Yoh turned around and yelled "REN X HORO HORO!!". Ren shot Yoh a very evil look. the bus trip was unbearably slow. Horo Horo saw this as the perfect opportunity to have some "fun". "Hey driver man, are we there yet?" Getting no reply, he repeated "Are we there yet?" Still no reply. "Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet?" no one could take much more of this. Finally Ren snapped. "WHY DON'T YOU SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH BAKA. YOU FUCKING DUMBASS!!!!" everyone on the bus stared. Parents covered their kids' ears. Amidamaru tried to figure out the meanings of the obscenities Ren just yelled. Horo Horo shut up. "about fuckin time someone said that. I'm just sorry that it wasn't me." Anna whispered to Yoh. Yoh just nodded. He looked nervous, but he was fighting the urge to laugh hysterically.
"I know, lets play a game. Manta, i spy something spiky" said Yoh. "ooh ooh, uh, a sea urchin." Yoh fainted anime-style. "no try again." "uh, that spike strip on the road we narrowly avoided" "WHAT? holy shit, let me see." said Anna as she stared out the window to see a car chase. "not quite" "uh Ren's hair." "perfect. your turn Manta" "i see something red" "uh, that apple there" guessed Yoh. "no, why don't you try, Anna." "police lights." "yes." "OK, Anna's turn." Anna started the round. "i spy something purple" "that pimp's suit?" asked Yoh. "yes you win. lets play later I'm tired." said Anna. "so am i because a certain itako woke me up." said Yoh. Anna had no comment. Anna and yoh slept for the rest of the ride.
so, any better than my last chapter? please, r&r. Note: Amidamaru was on the bus, he just didn't say much.
chapter 2: are we there yet?
It was a beautiful morning, the sun shining through the windows onto Yoh and Anna. It shined in Yoh's eyes causing him to say "mmmff. five more minutes mommy." "What did you say? Wake up!" and with that, she put his headphones over his ears and turned it on full. "YAAAHHH!!! don't hit me grandpa!!!" he yelled as the music blasted into his ears. he calmed down, realizing his grandpa was nowhere near and got dressed. Yoh tried to make eggs and toast, but they burned. After breakfast, Yoh asked Manta "Hey, Manta, how much of last night do you remember?" "All of it." "Even the part where me and Anna.." "yes." "shit!" "don't worry Yoh." Manta made the "my lips are zipped" gesture meaning it was their secret. The rest of the morning slid by without much incident. Everyone piled into a greyhound bus, after waiting at the station for 2 hours. Yoh, Anna and Manta were all packed into the same row. "Hey, Anna I want the window seat." said Yoh. "no, i get the seat. you sit in the middle." "Ok, fine you get the window." From the back of the bus, they heard "NO BAKA, I GET THE WINDOW CHAIR. NOW GET THE HELL UP HORO HORO!!!!" everyone on the bus stared, except for Yoh, Anna, and Manta. They turned to each other and simultaneously said "Ren". Yoh turned around and yelled "REN X HORO HORO!!". Ren shot Yoh a very evil look. the bus trip was unbearably slow. Horo Horo saw this as the perfect opportunity to have some "fun". "Hey driver man, are we there yet?" Getting no reply, he repeated "Are we there yet?" Still no reply. "Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet? Are we there yet?" no one could take much more of this. Finally Ren snapped. "WHY DON'T YOU SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH BAKA. YOU FUCKING DUMBASS!!!!" everyone on the bus stared. Parents covered their kids' ears. Amidamaru tried to figure out the meanings of the obscenities Ren just yelled. Horo Horo shut up. "about fuckin time someone said that. I'm just sorry that it wasn't me." Anna whispered to Yoh. Yoh just nodded. He looked nervous, but he was fighting the urge to laugh hysterically.
"I know, lets play a game. Manta, i spy something spiky" said Yoh. "ooh ooh, uh, a sea urchin." Yoh fainted anime-style. "no try again." "uh, that spike strip on the road we narrowly avoided" "WHAT? holy shit, let me see." said Anna as she stared out the window to see a car chase. "not quite" "uh Ren's hair." "perfect. your turn Manta" "i see something red" "uh, that apple there" guessed Yoh. "no, why don't you try, Anna." "police lights." "yes." "OK, Anna's turn." Anna started the round. "i spy something purple" "that pimp's suit?" asked Yoh. "yes you win. lets play later I'm tired." said Anna. "so am i because a certain itako woke me up." said Yoh. Anna had no comment. Anna and yoh slept for the rest of the ride.
so, any better than my last chapter? please, r&r. Note: Amidamaru was on the bus, he just didn't say much.