Here is my 2nd chapter to the bachelor, Magnus Bane. If you have any comments or if your just mad at the story, feel free to put it in the reviews :)
also what should happen on the dates? And who will Magnus end up with?
Magnus's pov
As I made my way to the main room. All I wanted to do was run up stairs. I was freaking out, is this what I really want? To go on dates with each of these guys until I decide which one I liked best?
I wasn't able to answer that question because before I knew it I was already down stairs surrounded by the gentlemen I would be going on dates with. They were talking quietly to each other.
"Welcome gentlemen" Camille said, and everyone turned their heads.
"I'm Camille, am Magnus best friend and the one helping him threw the competition. But first before I go any further let me tell you the what's going to happen. First each of you will go on a date with Magnus, then after that Magnus will decide the five guys he wants to go home. Then with only five of you left, you will each fight for his heart." She laughed and turned to me, with a wink.
"Ok then." I said, "thank you for the introduction, Camille. Well hello my name is Magnus Bane and tomorrow each of you will get to go on a date with me. But for now each of you can find a room in this house and in the morning you will be given the time of our date. See you then." I finished and walked back up stairs.
Gosh, what is wrong with me? I thought, so many cute guys is probably what Camille would have said. This day has been so long, so much worrying.
As I hopped back into my bed and closed the door, I closed my eyes and remember those eyes.
There were really two guys in that crowd that I thought were beautiful. But I can't know there names, not until tomorrow. They both had that black hair though, and those blue eyes. Those blue eyed boys will be the death of me, I thought before I finally doused off.
Alec's pov
I was standing their next to my adopted brother Jace when he came down the stairs. I could tell just by his walk that this is the man that all of us are fighting for. He walked behind his friend, Camille. He felt weird by this whole thing I could tell.
In truth, I too felt weird about coming here. But Jace told me that he wanted to go. Even though Jace is straight, he still wanted to come. By this I was weirded out, but then I found out a couple days earlier from listening to a secret conversation about why he was going.
* Days before
"Jace thank you, thank you, thank you." My sister, Isabella squealed. From behind her bedroom door.
I knew that she didn't know I was listening but I had kept my ear up to the door anyway.
"Ok, but I deserve a reward for this Isabella" Jace said
"Fine, fine. But please you need to go, just pretend your gay." My sister said
"Ok, but only for Alec." Jace said
"I'm so glad your going to go to the bachelor competition with Alec, I now he wouldn't go alone."
"Ya, ya. Best brother ever. Let's just hope I get kicked off very quickly, I don't want to kiss any guy."
"But what if you fall in love?" Isabella teased
Jace laughed, "Not even then"
I heard a creak in the floor, they were starting to leave. I ran down the hallway and into my room. Jumping into my bed and covering my face. I heard my bedroom door creak open, it was Isabella.
"Hey Alec" she said sitting next to me.
"Hey Izzy"
"So wanted to ask you something"
" yea, what?" I played along
" Jace want to join this bachelor competition but he is too scared to go alone, would you join with him?" She pleased.
"Fine" I said.
After that she left and I laid back down in my bed. The only reason why I didn't tell her about me knowing about her plan is because I didn't want to make her upset, she had put so much work into this plan. I didn't want to make her upset.
And this is how I ended up at the bachelor competition, because I didn't want to make my sister mad, I told myself.
* Normal time
Magnus talked about our new rooms and our dates tomorrow. Then after he finished he ran back upstairs and Camille apologized saying that he didn't get any sleep the night before.
I was worried for him, it would be hard to have to date 10 guys and then decide which one you really want to date.
But after he left all the guys still kept on talking, Jace was still standing next to me talking to this other contestant, this Simon kid. I looked around the room and found Camille talking to Woosley and Ragnor. In the other side of the room I saw Jem, Will and Gabriel. Sebastian and Raphael were the only two standing alone nearly talking only shaking their head yes and no every few minutes.
"Ok" Camille said, " I think it's time that I show you the rooms so you can get settled in"
We all followed her as she showed us our rooms, one by one we all went silently behind our own doors until I was alone. Then Camille turned to me.
"Well I guess your the lucky one." She said, " your room is down the next hallway and you get the hall all to your self."
She smiled and we walked down another hall to another set of doors.
"Here you go, and do you know what makes this room even more special, it is the closest to Magnus's" she laughed and continued down the hall and opened the last door at the end.
Shaking my head I went into my room and thought about Magnus and his beautiful appearance. Then unlucky I had to try to go to sleep.
Without success may I add.
Magnus's pov
I heard my door open and close. Looking up I could see Camille standing in front of me.
"Well your rude" she said sitting next to me.
"Thanks, I love waking up and being called rude." I said then yawned.
"The least you could have done is talked to some of them, they probably all think your stuck up now"
"Well if they aren't wise enough to see beyond my freak out- ness then they aren't the person for me." I said
"Wasn't there at least one cute guy?" She asked.
"Yes.. Maybe?" I stuttered
Camille smiled and kissed my forehead.
"Good, then you should have a lot of fun tomorrow" she said as she walked to the door, "night mags"
"Good night, Camille"
After that I couldn't sleep, so I decided to pay a visit to my second most favorite place in this house. The library. It was a big part of the house filled with all types of books I couldn't wait to get my hands on.
Walking down the hall I could see the light on in Camille's room but as I kept on walking I could also see another light on in the first room.
I wonder why Camille would have put anyone in this hall? I thought but kept on walking.
Finally, I made it to my destination. Walking in, I could see that I wasn't the only one who decided to visit the library at this time of night.
As I got closer I could see a man with dark hair, he was sitting in one of the chairs with his head buried into one of my favorite books, the tale of two cities.
I kept getting closer until I was almost right next to him. Then the flooring creaked and he jumped looking up at me.
"I'm so sorry" he said standing up.
"No, it's fine" I smiled, then stuck my hand out,"I'm Magnus"
"Oh I'm Will" he said taking my hand and shaking it then sitting back down.
"What are you reading?" I asked taking a seat next to him.
"Just a little of the tale of two cities, I left my copy at home."
"Ah, so we have read it before?"
He laughed, he had a beautiful laugh that made my heart melt.
"I would say so, if you call reading it seven times 'reading it before'"
"Wow, I don't think I could ever read that much"
"It's a gift, I have a lot of them." He said.
And this time I laughed.
"Oh how so?" I asked
"Well first off, my stunning good looks, my amazing intelligence, my always happy-go-lucky mood, my wonderful kissing abilities.."
"I don't believe you" I said.
"Oh really you don't believe that I'm always in a good mood, just go ask my best friend, Jem. He will tell you, we joined the competition together so he is just down the hall.." He said then I cut him off.
"No, I do believe that your always this arrogant and cocky, but what I don't believe is that your a good kisser."
He smiled, "Oh really?"
"Yes, really. I mean you talk so much about yourself , and you are very big headed. But I think that's it. All talk, nothing more." I smirked.
He was just staring at me.
"Fine, Magnus. But just to let you know you asked for it." He said as he put the book down and moved closer.
-Warning boy+boy( don't read unless you want to)-
Then all of a sudden his lips were on mine. He kissed me and I kissed back with the same force. My hands went up to his hair and I could feel his hand move down around my waist pulling me closer.
I pulled away after a few minutes.
"Believe me now." Will said breathing hard.
I laughed, "Yea, I believe you."
Will sat back, laughing.
Then his cell phone vibrated making us both jump.
Picking the phone up and looking at it, he then turned back to me.
"I'm really sorry Magnus. I have to go, my friend Jem I was telling you about, is having some medical problems again, so I have to go. But I will see you later." He said standing up.
"Ok" I smiled, "I will see you tomorrow for our date"
We both laughed, as he walked out the door.
Only sitting there for a few more seconds,before I too got up and went back to my room.
But before falling asleep, I looked again at the schedule for tomorrow.
My first date will be with Jonathan Morgenstern , then the next is with Alexander Lightwood, then Jace and Simon and Jem and then finally Will. And then again more people, but not as important as Will.
I thought with a smile before I fell asleep.
lastly before I go, I just want to let you know that Jace isn't gay in my story. He is just trying to help Alec. I just wanted to make sure that it is clear so I don't get alot of peoples mad reviews.
also please write in the review about what should happen on the dates? And who will Magnus end up with?
:) thanks