And here's the rewrite of chapter two, enjoy.

(Percy's POV)

Chiron looked at us all, and then he sighed.

"There are some things which have happened in the last couple of months. Around a week after you left, three new demigods appeared, and behind them was a hydra. We rushed to help them, but by the time we got there the hydra was already destroyed. They were all claimed on the spot, Mark Garlend a son of Poseidon, Mary Davies a daughter of Zeus and, Alisha DeMarco a daughter of Hades. We orientated them, and we found out that they were all sixteen. We don't know why the gods suddenly recognised them, but it would seem that you three weren't the only children of the big three that have been around."

My mouth hung wide open, I opened and shut it a few times, trying to think about what to say but Chiron continued.

"They've got themselves all settled in. They've…well…they've become quite accustomed to being the strongest Demi-gods at camp, and they might not take it lightly to be pushed down."

"What do you mean?" Nico asked. Chiron looked down for a moment, and when he looked back at them, there were tears in their eyes.

"Jason came from Camp Jupiter to visit; he didn't know that you were on a quest. When he found out he had a new sister, he was overjoyed, but Mary didn't like the fact that he was older and more powerful. She challenged him to a duel. And Jason accepted. They went to the arena and fought, Jason won, the duel, but just after there was an attack on camp by some Earthborn, Jason was the first to get there, but we can only assume that he was weary due to the duel, I'm sorry Thalia, I am so sorry.."

As soon as I realized what Chiron meant, I immediately turned to Thalia. She said nothing; she did nothing she just stared at a blank part of the wall. I put my hand on her shoulder consolingly, and she reached up and took it her hand, Nico wrapped his arm around her shoulders and she burst into tears and cried in Nico's arms. Chiron was silent throughout all of this, but then he said.

"Reyna says that Piper is returning to Camp soon so we've been waiting for the both of you to be here to give him his last rites. But I'm afraid that's not all, Hades has decreed that no more Demi-gods can come and go from the Underworld, he says its getting to risky of souls being able to escape." Nico looked up sharply, his face aghast.

"What!?" He cried. Nico now looked as upset as Thalia; he could no longer visit his father, check on Elysium, or make sure the right people went to their place in the Underworld, but not only that, Hades had said Nico could become the Prince of the Underworld, he would finally be closed to his father, have a proper family, he's even reconciled with Persephone

"I know it seems harsh, but you have to understand, with you going in and out of the Underworld, it might make it easier for Minos' rebellion to succeed." Nico looked absolutely distraught.

I looked at Chiron expectantly, wondering what could have happened in my life even though my heart was already bracing itself for the worst.

"Percy, I'm truly sorry, but the Minotaur reformed. He remembered the smell of your mother. He found her, and Paul. I'm sorry Percy, but they've gone to the Underworld. There was nothing we could have done." I jut sat there, thinking about what Chiron had just said. The barrier my heart had put up just shattered leaving it bare and raw. I wanted to hit something, but then I felt the feeling ebb away, what was the point, it wouldn't bring them back. Nothing would. Chiron looked at all of us sympathetically.

"I'm sorry that you all have to come back to this, I wished I had better news for you all."

"It's fine Chiron, thanks for letting us know." I said. My voice was hoarse, filled with the grief that was digging its way into my body. Chiron nodded, and then Mr. D looked up from his card game. He looked at us three, and sighed.

"I'm sorry for your loss." He said in a voice that actually sounded genuine. Those words from Mr.D were possibly the most kind I've ever heard from him. Chiron led us to the door in his wheel chair and he clasped each of our hands, telling us it was going to get better. We barely paid attention to what was happening around us as we walked towards our cabins. We arrived at the cabins of the Big Three, for some reason they didn't look so much like home anymore. I looked at Nico, and Nico looked back. We walked towards the Hades cabin.

(Nico's POV)

Why? Why would this happen to my best friends? The ones they loved the most are gone. Me and Thalia had no one but each other. Percy at least had Annabeth. I wish I could say that I could make sure they all reach Elysium, that they would be rewarded for being so honourable in life. For being heroes.

We stopped at the entrance of my cabin, well, not entirely mine. I felt rage brewing in me. It was thanks to Mary, Mark and Alisha that Jason was dead. I pushed the door slowly open, and then I froze. WHAT HAD THAT BITCH DONE TO MY CABIN?!

Heavy Metal was screaming from five huge speakers set up around the room, their wires criss-crossing the floor madly. Graphic posters now covered every wall, and where my bed used to be was a small stage with many different types of rock guitars, and most of them broken. I searched desperately for my box. It contained all of my photos with Bianca, all my good memories. I suddenly saw a large pile of ash at one end of the room. I dropped to my knees, and sifted my hands through the ash. I found a partially burnt photo of me and Bianca, another photo of me, Percy, and Thalia, a photo of the heroes of Olympus, and then I found the lock of the box, the catch snapped in half. She had broken into my box. She had seen the photos and everything else that used to keep me happy when I was down, and she had tried to burn them all. I couldn't control my anger. I raised five armed and armoured skeletons through the floor. I sent them to each speaker, and they stabbed their swords into the over-sized noise makers. They burst with static and then fell silent. Percy walked up to me and placed a hand on my shoulder.

"Come on, let's get out of here, you can sleep in my cabin." He said simply, and he led me out of the cabin. When we left the cabin we heard the conch horn blow for dinner. I looked at Thalia and Percy and they both shook their heads.

"Let's go down to the beach" Percy suggested. We nodded and walked towards the beach. We walked the long way around the camp so that we didn't get seen by any of the campers. No one knew we were back yet. We had planned to make it a surprise at dinner, but now none of us felt like having fun. We arrived at the edge of the beach when we heard some people talking. We hid along the trees and peeked out.

(Thalia's POV)

We peered out of the trees and saw four campers standing on the edge of the beach, and in front of them were three people I did not expect to see here. Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades. Nico gasped, and Percy looked shocked. We moved closer so we could hear what they were saying.

"…sorry that we didn't discover you sooner, we promise to make it right with you, we all swear, the wars we've had has just been at the forefront of our minds, and it's easy for us to forget things, could you forgive us?"Poseidon was saying.

"One of the other figures, a guy replied for them.

"We'll see." He said. The Big three each nodded in acceptance of that, and in a flash they had disappeared. The guy, who I assumed was Mark then said.

"What dumbass', we've got them wrapped around our fingers." Causing the others to laugh. Two of the campers who I guessed were Mary and Alisha walked off together, leaving Mark standing with another girl with blonde hair. They were talking in whispered tones so we couldn't hear them, and then Mark took her hands. Mark leaned in and then kissed the girl and she stepped back looking shocked. It was then that we saw it was Annabeth. Percy looked like he was going to go rip his head off, when suddenly Annabeth took a step forward and kissed Mark, wrapping her arms around his neck. Percy froze, his muscles twitching at the sight of his girlfriend making out with another guy. He then suddenly started forward.

I tried to pull him back down, but Nico stopped me, shaking his head.

"He needs to do this" He said quickly. Percy pushed his way out of our hiding place, and started to walk towards Mark and Annabeth. Mark saw him coming, and stopped kissing Annabeth.

"Who the Hades are you?" He demanded. Annabeth turned to see who it was, and then her face bleached.

"Percy! You're back! This isn't what it looks like" She cried looking from Percy to Mark. Storm clouds suddenly appeared in the sky and the waves were becoming more and more vicious.

"NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE! I SAW EVERYTHING ANNABETH AND YOU HAVE THE CHEEK TO TRY AND LIE TO ME! I NEVER THOUGHT YOU'D DO THIS OF ALL THINGS, DO I DESERVE IT? HAVE I DONE SOMETHING WHICH MAKES THIS ALRIGHT? Percy roared. Annabeth staggered back as if she'd been struck. Mark ran at Percy a sword appearing in his hand. He swung it at Percy he caught it in his hand, and then he clenched his hand into a fist, breaking the blade. He then punched Mark in the middle of his chest, sending him back ten, twenty, thirty, forty, fifty feet into the sea. I've never seen Percy so angry, or so strong. Rain was now pouring down, the wind was now blowing so hard me and Nico was struggling to stand up properly. Annabeth looked absolutely terrified. Percy stepped closer to her, and whispered, but loud enough for us to hear.

"I never want to see you again." Then he turned and walked back towards us. Me and Nico stood up, and glared at Annabeth; she looked shocked to see us, and tried to run towards us. But I pushed her back with the already powerful wind. I turned my back on her and followed after Percy, I looked at Nico, and he just shook his head at her and said.

"Errete es Karakas" (Go to the crows). He then turned and caught up with us.

We walked around camp again and found ourselves outside our cabins again.

"I'm leaving" Percy said. I looked at him and nodded; Nico looked at us both and held out his hand. I placed mine on top of his, and Percy put his on top of mine. We grabbed of still packed bags from our empty cabins, and Percy brought out his Minotaur horn.

"I'll leave it for Chiron." He said simply. I took my bracelet off. The bracelet that I had got whilst travelling with Annabeth and Luke, Chiron would recognised it immediately. Nico pulled off his wristband, which had a skull and underneath it said. "You haven't been to hell…yet" It was a birthday present from Chiron himself.

We walked to the big house and placed our mementos at the foot of the main door. We then walked up Half-blood hill. We stopped at Thalia's Pine, and looked out at the camp. We had arrived that day, and we were leaving that day. This place was no longer home for us. Not anymore.

And there we go, the second chapter re-done, it changes the flow of the story for the better I hope now.