Hello everyone. I decided to redo chapters 1, 2, and 3. So...yeah.
Chapter 1
"Oh...Ouch," Danny slowly opened his eyes. He was in a cave, like last night's. He saw cats staring at him, two females, both gray, one older than the other. "Are you alright?" the younger one asked. "Shush, Mintpaw," the older one said. These cats weren't dead like Skywatcher and all those cats last night. Then something hit him. Where was he? He rolled onto his back, then shook himself. Wait. Something wasn't right. He looked down at himself. He was a cat!?!?!? He had black paws, a black tail, black ears, and was white everywhere else. He turned to the cats. "Who are you?" he asked.
"I am Echosong," the older one said. "I am SkyClan's medicine cat. This is Mintpaw, my apprentice." The younger one padded up to him. "Hi!" she said. "Hey," Danny said. "Where am I, exactly?" he asked Echosong. "You are in SkyClan's gorge," she replied.
Mintpaw bounded up to him and prodded his side with her paw. "Why were you in the Whispering Cave last night?" she asked.
"I…I can't remember," Danny replied. "Where's Skywatcher?" he asked blankly. Echosong gasped. "You saw Skywatcher?" "Yeah," he said. "Who was he?"
"Skywatcher was the last living member of SkyClan who could remember his ancestors. However, when Firestar and Sandstorm came from ThunderClan, they had rouges and some kittypets come, and most joined. Skywatcher died after his Clan was rebuilt," Echosong replied.
"Oh," he said dumbly.
"Echosong! How's he doing?" A brown-and-cream she-cat with amber eyes walked in. "Oh, good, he's awake."
A dark ginger tom walked in. "Is he fit enough to come out and explain himself?" the cat asked.
"I believe so, Sharpclaw," Echosong told the tom.
Mintpaw looked at the she-cat. "Leafstar, should I fetch him something to eat?"
"Of course," Leafstar answered warmly. As Mintpaw bounded away, Leafstar looked at Danny. "Now, who are you?" she asked.
"My name is Danny," he replied uncertainly.
"Why are you here?" Sharpclaw asked.
"I was walking home, and then I ended up here," he said.
Sharpclaw spat. Echosong turned to Leafstar. "What shall we do with him?" she asked.
Danny gulped. He wasn't getting out of this easily.
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Jayfeather's blue eyes opened to see Yellowfang, Spottedleaf, and a cat he hadnever seen before. He was dreaming; if he was awake he would have been unable to see anything.
Before Jayfeather could ask the strange tom who he was, the cat said, "I am Skywatcher. My Clan, SkyClan, was rebuilt by Firestar and Sandstorm years ago." A smirk appeared on the tom's face. "You may have seen me talking to Firestar giving him that prophecy that night you entered his dream."
Jayfeather's pelt burned a bit as Skywatcher continued, "SkyClan and the four lake Clans are going to face a terrible threat, Jayfeather."
"But," Spottedleaf added, "Nothing can prepare you for the evil that will pounce after that."
"Find Phantom," Yellowfang instructed. "The black cat with glowing green eyes will save ThunderClan."
"Only tell Lionblaze and Dovepaw," Spottedleaf instructed.
And with that, the three starry cats dissapeared as Jayfeather's eyes reopened into darkness.