Dragon Ball Z in the time of Super Goten character development

by redlightningwarrior

What the writers of Super could do with Goten. I don't own dragon ball Z or the characters. It is just what they could do with Goten. First time writing fanfiction! So a review or anything would be appreciated. The newest chapter is the best so far story wise and how it is written.

2. Chapter 2: Goten's Great Journey

Trunks "Mom what is it?" "Well why are you training so much?" "Your father isn't around." Trunks sighs "Well It's Goten he tired of being Quote on Quote 'Overshadowed' by his father and brother so he wanted to get stronger and noticed." The phone rings. Bulma picks it up. "Hello it's Bulma speaking."

Chi- chi- Is Goten their he needs to be coming home soon. Bulma- "Okay I will send him over." She hangs up. "Goten it is time for you to go home." Goten flies off. Trunks- "Hmm that's weird he just flew off."

Goten- "Not going home. Not today." "Being overshadowed again I think not. Here I can be somebody. Somebody important." "World tournament this will be fun." Flies down there. Hello I would like to register for the world tournament. Goten said flatly Okay name? Goten- "Ummmm Put down saiya. S-A-I-Y-A. ." Register Person- It starts in two days at 9:00 am. Goten- I'll be there. Walks off. Start counting his money. "I should have enough to buy some new Gi.

Chi- Chi "Goten should be home by now. Where is he?" She sits down. "Let's call gohan. He may know. She rings his number. "Hello Gohan. Do you know where Goten is?" Gohan- "I don't know. He's lost?" Chi-chi "Yes I don't know what I should do!" Gohan- "I'll look for him don't worry.