(FoN: Yay! Chapter two already! Thanks to Carla for the lovely review , and to everyone who read part one . Special thanks goes to everyone who is reading this now! Anyway, to recap, Ebony is a Mary Sue and she's going to date Draco Malfoy, destroy canon and make us all cry. That's about it. Oh, and thanks to Mawile for being awesome.

WAIT! I ALMOST FORGOT SOMETHING VERY IMPORTANT! Somebody amazing online has informed me that hot topic is a real store! Sorry for the mistake!)

Chapter : Fangz (FoN: Oh god please don't say "Fangz" … it is one of the worst puns I ever heard.) 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok! (FoN: What are preps! And you got flamed already? Wow.)

The next day I woke up in my bedroom. (FoN: Nice change from all those times you wake up in skips and dumpsters, right?) It was snowing and raining again. (FoN: IT HARDLY EVER SNOWS IN ENGLAND! It's hardly going to SNOW AND RAIN AT THE SAME TIME TWICE IN A ROW!) I opened the door of my coffin (FoN: Eh.) and drank some blood (FoN:Eh times two) from a bottle I had (FoN: Where did the blood come from?). My coffin was black ebony (FoN: How surprising~!) and inside it was hot pink velvet (FoN: Hot pink? How gothic.) with black lace on the ends (FoN: How does that work?). I got out of my coffin (FoN: I thought you were already out.) and took of my giant MCR (FoN: Would you just explain who MCR are for god's sake?) t-shirt which I used for pajamas. (FoN: Pyjamas, not Pajamas) Instead, I put on a black leather dress, (FoN: How surprising! A goth wearing black! It's as if the world is mostly made out of water!) a pentagram necklace (FoN: You worship… the devil? Weirdo.), combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, (FoN: Ow Ow Ow Ow. I'm surprised your ear didn't fall off) and put my hair in a kind of messy bun. (FoN: Eh?)

My friend, Willow (AN: Raven (FoN: Does she have to be in it? Can't you think up people who aren't based on yourself/ your friend?) dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me.(FoN: Grinning? But aren't Goths not allowed to grin ! How un gothic of her!) She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. (FoN: Hold on, she grinned at you without opening her eyes? Her sense of smell must be good) She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt (FoN: Oh my god, I just laughed out loud) with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner. (FoN: You both wore the exact same make up? Isn't foundation meant to fit your skin tone, so unless you two are freakishly similar…. )

"OMFG, (FoN: Random F-bomb!) I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" (FoN: Random Sentence-bomb!) she said excitedly. (FoN: Random Excitement-bomb!)

"Yeah? So?" (FoN: Sane answer.) I said, blushing. (FoN: Blushing? I said no dating draco! God, PLEASE!)

"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room (FoN: The one under the lake?) and into the Great Hall.

"No I so f-ing (FoN: There was a random F-bomb so I censored it because I'm lovely like that : D) don't!" I shouted. (FoN: THANK GOD!)

"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me. (FoN: No no no no no)

"Hi." he said.

"Hi." I replied flirtily. (FoN: NOOO! GOD! You betrayed me!)

"Guess what." he said. (FoN: He said it … he didn't ask, he said.)

"What?" I asked.(FoN: She understands the rules about asking)

"Well, Good Charlotte (FoN: GC? Not MCR… WHO ARE MCR?) are having a concert in Hogsmeade.(FoN: Is Good Charlotte a muggle band? Let me look them up. THEY ARE! WHY THE HELL WOULD THEY PLAY IN HOGSMEADE?) " he told me.

"Oh. My. F-ing (FoN: More censoring :D) . God!" I screamed. (FoN: Over reaction!) I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.(FoN: WHO IS MCRR)

"Well…. do you want to go with me?"(FoN: NO SHE DOESN'T!) he asked. (FoN: Oh, so you can ask things now?)

(FoN: I looked at him with eyes full of scorn. "No way Draco! Now go back to the land of canon!" I shouted.)

I gasped.

(FoN: Well, that's the end. Please give me reviews! Especially good ones :p)