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Aubrey glared at the dog sitting in her usual spot move she growled but bee didn't even look up quite content where she was.
"Chloe the mutt is in my spot"! Aubrey called.
"Her name is bee bree you don't like it when people call you Audrey".
"That's because that's not my name" Aubrey said in frustration.
"Well mutt isn't bee's name so she won't respond to it".
"We don't even know her real name it could be alt dog for all we know" Aubrey said irritated that Chloe had made a valid point on why bee wouldn't listen to her.
What makes her "alternative" Aubrey? Chloe asked in confusion.
"How can you not see it"? "The plaid collar the hole in her ear she even looks like she's wearing eyeliner".
"It's not her fault she has a hole in her ear Aubrey maybe someone did it to her in her old home" Chloe said gently scratching bee behind the ear much to the dog's enjoyment.
"Fine"! "I'll just sit in my room on my own then some friend you turned out to be Aubrey exclaimed storming off".
"Don't worry Chloe whispered to bee conspiratorially to bee she will like you eventually she just doesn't like change" Giving bee one last pat on the head she wandered off missing the contemplative look in bee's eyes.
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