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Friday, the day of the Home Coming Dance
Kimiko sighed as she leaned against her locker. She hated the day before the dance. Everyone was talking about it. People would ask if she was going and she would say yes then they'd ask who with and she had to look like a loser when she said no one. It seemed like everyone had a date besides her. Everyone was excited where she felt like crap. She started talking to her friend Ashley. She didn't see Raimundo come up behind her. He put his hands on her shoulders and said hi. Ashley looked at them, smiled, and left. Uh-oh, Kimiko thought, even though Ashley was her friend, she was also an accomplished gossiper. Kimiko knew that by the end of the day there would be some rumor or another going around the school. Oh well. "What up", Raimundo asked.
"Nothing," she said crumbly. "Whoa who died?", he asked laughing. "No one, I just hate dances." "Why?" "Because I can't get a date." He smiled. "Dont worry Kimiko, you'll have a boyfriend sooner then you think." "Sure, Rai", she said skeptically. "Im serious." The bell rang. "Okay Rai, sure," she said skeptically again. "Bye Kimi," he said as he winked and walked out of sight.
Kimiko sat in Social Studies lost in thought. Why was Raimundo so sure that she would have a boyfriends. What if..no, no... he couldn't...wouldn't, play matchmaker? Would he? She hoped not. Too bad Raimundo couldn't see that she liked him and that she didn't want anyone else. But he was dating Keiko and once again she knew that Keiko would hate her eternally if she showed any feelings towards him. Why were guys so blind?
He loved lunch. Absolutely loved it. Why? It was because it was the only class he had daily with Kimiko. He loved to watch her work. Everyone knew that Kimiko was the one to go to, to handle their problems. She handled every kind of gossip. Particularly the kind that turned best friends into worst enemies and boyfriends and girlfriends into ex'es. If anyone had a dirty little secret she'd make sure it stayed that way. But today, it seemed that no one need her. She was leaning into the left end of the table listening to Clay tell all of his friends what he'd do for Crista, since she was now his girlfriends. From what Raimundo heard Crista was going to be treated like a princess. But he would treat Kimiko like a queen if she would ever say yes to him. He knew the reason why she was going to have a boyfriend soon. He was going to be her boyfriend. He knew it sounded mean, but he was going to break up with Keiko at the dance. Sure she was a great friend, but it didn't seem fair that he would continue dating her when he liked Kimiko. He just hoped Kimiko wouldn't hate him for doing it. Keiko announce that she was going to her locker. She asked Raimundo to come but he politely said no. She got up and left. This was his chance.
He got up and walked around the table and sat next to Kimiko. She said hi and they started talking. Thats what he loved about her. She seemed genuinely interested in what he had to say. With Keiko, she would just reply cool and start doing her nails. Someone sat down next to Raimundo. He glanced over and sighed. Great, it was Keiko's bitchy friend Shenay. "Hi Shenay", he said bitterly.
"Spare me the formalities, Raimundo I just want to ask you a question." "Okay, shoot". "Are you dating Kimiko?" Kimiko hearing this turned deep red and turned away. She never was good at dealing with gossip about her. "Uh no, Im dating Keiko." "Okay then, do you like her?" Before he could reply Kimiko turned to face them. She looked mad and maybe a little upset. "Shenay, shut the fuck up. Why don't you mind you own fucking business and get a fucking life. Jesus fucking Christ." "Okay, okay, chill Kimiko god." Shenay got up and left. Kimiko sighed.. "Are you okay?" "Yeah, Im sorry I got a little mad." "Kimi, thats the understatement of the year." They started laughing as they walked out of the lunchroom.
The night of the dance:
Kimiko: hi Keiko
Keiko: whats up wit u
Kimiko: same old same old
Raimundo: whats up guys
Keiko: I cw 4 the dnc
Raimundo: Keiko shut up
Keiko: why??
Raimundo: because ur like rubbing it in
Keiko: its nt my fault Kim cant get a bf
Raimundo: w/e Keiko
Keiko: excuse me for being excited about the dance, its going to be r first one tgthr
Raimundo: yeah sure
Keiko: wtf happened at lunch Kim???
Kimiko: uh..
Raimundo: nothing, that bitch Shenay just pissed Kim off
Keiko: hmm oh well, I have to go I gt 2 gt ready 4 the dnc byez
Kimiko: bye
Raimundo: bye
Raimundo: holy crap how long does she need to gt ready
Kimiko: lol I no theres 3 hrs b4 the dnc
Raimundo: lol I no
Kimiko: it only takes me like 30 mins
Raimundo: its crazy
Kimiko: thanks for explaining to Keiko
Raimundo: its okay, it's the truth
Kimiko: still thanks
Raimundo: again its ok ur my best friends
Kimiko: ok sry
Raimundo: oh I have to go eat before the dance so Ill c u there ok?
Kimiko: sigh ok
Raimundo: promise
Kimiko: promise.
Kimiko stared at the computer screen, it was getting close to the dance. She walked to her drawer pulled out her favorite pair of jeans and then mentally thought what to wear on top. She grabbed a black long sleeved shirt. And then a red short sleeved shirt with mini stars across it. She planned to layer it on top of the black shirt. She also decided to leave her hair down. She was ready.
Raimundo stood at the doors of the dance, hoping Kimiko would get there before. He was dressed in his favorite jeans and a white shirt with a long sleeved blue and white striped shirt on top of it. Then he saw her. He walked up to her. She looked beautiful. And he told her so. "Hi Kimi, you look beautiful." She blushed but said softly, "your not so bad yourself." "The doors opened and they walked into the dance along with lots of other students.
Kimiko walked into the dance with Raimundo by her side. They walked into the dance floor where music was softly playing. They talked with there mutual friend Ericka. She said that she was going to see if Keiko was there yet and left them. She walked into the lobby of the gym, smiling when she saw Keiko, looking very fashionable. She walked over to her and said hi. Keiko pulled her over and whispered something into her ear that made her gasped. "Im going to break up with Raimundo." "What, why?", Kimiko asked. "I don't like him anymore. I like that new kid." Kimiko shook her head in disgust. "Do you even know his name?" 'Yeah, its um, uh James, I think." "Whatever Keiko, do what you want." "One more thing, could you break up with him for me, please?" "I'll do it ok, god just go hide in the bathroom with Shenay well I do it." "Okay,", she said brightly almost happy. As Keiko walked away she muttered how heartless Keiko was. She walked into the dance floor and spotted Raimundo. "Uh Rai, could I talk to you for a second." "Sure," he said as she pulled him onto the side of the room. "Raimundo, I dont know an easier way to say this so Im just going to." "Okay." "Keikos breaking up with you." "Really, are you serious", he said smiling. "Um yeah, how come your not sad." "No reason," he replied. He grabbed her hand. "Come on lets dance."
He was so happy. He was so fucking lucky. Keiko broke up with him, now Kimiko wouldn't hate him. He also had the rest of the dance with Kimiko, though he didn't get to slow dance with her because every time a slow song came on, she would walk off the dance floor with some excuse. He decided to follow her. She was talking to Keiko, and they hadn't seen him. He knew it was mean but he decided to eavesdrop. "Kim, tell Raimundo I want to go back out with him." Kimiko sounded outraged. "What!, no, I won't, you broke up with him for another guy." "Well James said on because hes already dating that slut Ashley." "Keiko, shes our friend, you should be happy for her." "Not when she took the guy I liked." What the hell do you expect Keiko, for people to just not like a guy because you do." "Yes , I do in fact." "What if I like someone you liked. Could I not like them or go out with them." "Yes you couldn't." "Whatever Keiko." "Just tell him." "Fine I will." Raimundo quickly stepped back onto the dance floor. Kimiko found him in seconds. "Raimundo, will you go back out with Keiko." He pretended to look outraged. "What ,no, I'll never go back out with her." Kimiko smiled. "Good", she said.
They spent the rest of the dance on the dance floor. She still didn't slow dance with him though.
Too soon the dance was over. They walked out. They stood side by side talking waiting for their parents. They both came at the same time. Raimundos mom got out and started talking to Kimikos mom. They both said goodbye. Kimiko started to walk away when Raimundo grabbed her hand to stop her. He gave her a hug, which she returned. She loved being in his arms. She wished she could stay there forever. She had to pull away before people started talking. She pulled away and smiled up at him as he smiled back. "I have to go," she said." "Will you be on IM tomorrow?" "Yes." "Okay, bye," he said as she gently pulled her hand out of his grasp.
Did you like it. Believe it or not this is exactly what happened at my dance in real life. Minus the hugging and stuff at end. Im not there yet with who I like. This should be a good chapter because I have a bag of Halloween candy mext to me and Im eating a piece like every sentence.Haha but anyways I know there was someone who comment my story and said it was funny, but I promise to acknowledge you next time. But anyways expect a review soon, for both my stories. Bye for now.