So how you people like chapter 1?

Do you think Naruto is a little to strong, I mean he broke a human rib with one strike and shattered Hiashi's nose with a single kick.

And before you ask, Yes Naruto is Dark in this fic, but not necessarily evil.

Also as far as pairings go I'm thinking a little Naruto x Temari and maybe one other person, no yaoi.

-spots a lawyer-

I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR DMC

-lawyer gets set on fire by Berial-

Also to address reviews by Kyubi16 and Meech Macko, if you don't like how the story is written don't read it, and just because the manga didn't SHOW Naruto getting abused doesn't mean it never happened. For everyone else I haven't really bashed anyone yet, at least no one specifically.

Now ON WITH THE SHOW!

Chapter 2: The Devil Fox rises...

After opening the door to his apartment, Naruto noticed that the girl seemed to be a little, what was the word, nervous. Sighing Naruto walked in first and sat on the couch, with his feet propped up on the coffee table. Hinata just stood in the middle of the room with her hands clasped close to her chest and looked slightly fearful. Naruto just shook his head and got off the couch, then he patted Hinata on the shoulder.

"You can have the bed if you want," Naruto offered, before he began looking for around for something. Nodding Hinata looked around the apartment, it was small so it didn't take long. The apartment had one bath room, a single bedroom, a small kitchenette, and single couch.

"Can I ask a question," Naruto asked, looking at Hinata with his arms crossed over his chest.

"What is it," Hinata asked back, wondering what his question would be.

"Who was that guy that was hitting you," Naruto asked, no knowing why. It was then he noticed that the girl was looking down and about to cry.

"H-he was my father," Hinata replied, the tears finally starting to come to her eyes. Now Naruto felt his eyes go wide and then he began to sneer, drumming his fingers against his forearm to keep himself from going on a killing spree.

"Why would he do that," Naruto asked, trying his level best to hide the anger in his voice.

"I-i don't know," was Hinata's reply, "he's b-been like that s-s-ince my mother d-di-died."

Sighing Naruto decided to sit down next to Hinata, who immediately enveloped him in a hug and began crying into his shirt. Sighing Naruto held her close and let her cry into his shirt, while he rubbed her back comfortingly. After thirty minutes of crying Hinata fell asleep from exhaustion. Draping a blanket over Naruto decided to use a henge and go buy groceries, after coming back he noticed that Hinata was still asleep. Nodding Naruto began to put the groceries away, before scouting the village for a decent training spot. Seeing a clearing Naruto went to investigate, and the nodded in approval. The clearing had a few rocks here and there, a few downed trees, and a small creek running along the far western side of the clearing.

Raising his left arm up, he began to concentrate some of his demonic energy into it, causing a dark green light to appear on it before a figure materialized in front of him. Now despite his father's disapproval of what he had just done, his uncle had taught him how to make contracts with certain demons to call them to his aid. This demon was a upper B-class demon, the breed of demon was referred to as a Angelous, they only made contracts with people who had a good heart and honest intentions.

This Angelous had black hair that ended at his shoulders, dark purple eyes, a chiseled face, a lean figure, and he was wearing a simple white robe, two gold bands on each wrist, and brown sandals. His white wings were folded close to his back as he looked down with a soft smile at Naruto.

"Hello my friend how goes things with your dad," the Angelous asked, seeing Naruto look away was all the answer he needed.

"So he sent you back didn't he," The male Angelous asked, his face now looking like it could have been carved from stone.

"Yes Razio," Naruto answered, "but I don't wanna talk about it right now. What I need is a sparring partner."

Drawing Flaming Devil from it's sheathe, Naruto looked coldly at the Angelous, who drew a silver sword from a scabbard at his side. Smirking it seemed that Naruto phased out of existence for a minute, but his cross cut was parried by Razio. When they separated Razio charged at Naruto and attempted a overhand slash, only to be blocked by Naruto, who immediately parried the attacked and scored a small cut on Razio's right bicep. Smirking Razio disengaged, then began to quickly spin his sword in a figure eight style, causing a massive amount of mist to cloud Naruto's vision. Sighing Naruto closed his eyes and listened for the flutter of Razio's wings. Quickly ducking Naruto turned and had the tip of his blade resting underneath someone's chin.

"You win Naruto," Razio said, with a smirk on his face, "what's that make it?"

"45-39," Naruto answered, "your favor."

Nodding the angel disappeared and Naruto was left standing in a empty clearing, where he spent the next three hours training with Flaming Devil and his pistols, Sorrow and Mercy.

Meanwhile in another part of the Elemental Countries...

A little girl, no older than six or seven years old, was running for her life. She had just turned a corner thinking she was safe, when she felt a bit of drool land on her shoulder. Looking up with horrified eyes she saw a monster with black skin and yellow symbols etched into it, a mouth filled with razor sharp teeth, a head that ended in a rounded snout and with no eyes, razor sharp silver colored claws, a tail with a black stinger that whipped through the air, and black spikes coming out of it's shoulders and spine. (A/N: if you need a visual reference simply imagine the Aliens from AVP but with silver claws and yellow symbols)

The girl was about to scream in fear, when a large amount of sand shot up from the ground and wrapped itself around the monster, just before it was crushed by the sand. Turning and looking at the other end of the alley the girl saw a boy around 12 years old with blood red hair, teal colored eyes, a red tattoo that was the Kanji for Love over his left eye, and he was wearing a tan sash over a red shirt, a ninja mesh shirt underneath that, black pants, black ninja sandals, and he had a large gourd strapped to his back.

Deciding to not take her chances the girl ran for the opposite end of the alley and somehow managed to get home safely. However the boy, known as Gaara no Subaku, spent the rest of the night eradicating any other creatures he deemed a "threat to his existence". When the morning came the people saw the bodies of dead demons littering the streets, the bodies however immediately vanished when the sun shone on them. Gaara was now sitting in his room meditating, seeing as how he couldn't sleep without letting Shukaku out. After an hour's worth of meditating Gaara felt a presence far off that felt strangely like his, but subtly different.

Getting up from the lotus position, Gaara began to think on what this strange presence was, causing his brow to crease in frustration. Growling Gaara shot his sand at a nearby bird and crushed it in his sand.

"I shall exterminate this threat to my existence," Gaara said coldly, "then I shall be the one to stand at the top."

In Konoha the next morning...

Naruto woke up on the couch, and he felt a strange weight on his chest, looking down Naruto saw Hinata curled up on the couch next to him with her head on his chest. Sighing Naruto let her lay there for a few more minutes until she woke up.

"Sleep well," Naruto asked politely. Hinata's answer was to smile and snuggle closer to him. Sighing Naruto was about to toss her off of him, when a alarm clock rang causing Hinata's eyes to go wide as she bolted off the couch and out the door. Sighing Naruto ran a hand through his hair before walked to the Ninja academy, and leaned against the wall outside the door.

In the classroom...

Hinata sat in her usual seat, panting for breath as she just barely made it to the classroom in time. It was at this moment one Kiba Inuzuka began to look at her lecherously, now it may not seem like it but Hinata despised the boy with all her being. All he he ever harped on was women were good for only two things, and that they should know their place, this having been a heated argument with one girl named Tenten. Also he claimed to be one of the strongest guys in the class, funny how he never showed it in taijutsu. It was at this moment that Iruka walked in and used his secret Demon Head jutsu, silencing the arguing going on between one Sakura Haruno, or the flat chested banshee as most kids in the class knew her by, and Ino Yamanaka, about who would get to sit next to Saskue Uchiha.

"Well class seeing as how this is our last year together I have some interesting news," Iruka announced, "we have a student who will be joining for this last year."

It was that moment the door blasted past Iruka's nose and slammed into the far wall, after the door slammed into the wall Naruto decided to make his entrance, causing a lot of the girls to immediately began drooling and the guy population of the room began to become jealous. Smiling coldly Naruto took a seat next to Hinata and then put on his headphones and drowned out the lecture.

Meanwhile with the Root ANBU...

"Danzo-sama," a faceless Root ANBU said on bended knee, "we currently have eyes on the Kyuubi."

"Good," Danzo replied, looking at the nearly constructed Hell Gate, "make sure he does not interfere with our plans."

"Hai Danzo-sama," the Root ANBU said, just before he left the presence of his master. Danzo then began to chuckle darkly at how magnificently his plan was coming together, when he felt a dark presence enter his office.

"Ah Lucifer I did not expect you so soon," Danzo greeted, before turning and looking at a man in a dark black cloak that seemed to absorb sunlight. Lucifer just chuckled darkly as he walked over to the window Danzo was standing in front of.

"Yes Danzo it has been," Lucifer replied, eying the Hell Gate, "is it near completion?"

"Another month or two and it should be finished," Danzo stated, causing Lucifer to grin behind underneath his cloak.

"Good," Lucifer stated as he overlooked the construction of his ticket out of hell, "Soon I shall have my revenge on that insolent whelp Dante and that ungrateful demi-fiend, and you shall be richly rewarded."

Danzo smiled evilly, imaging having the powers of the Devil himself and bringing the old fool Sarutobi to his knees, just before taking the title of Hokage and leading Konoha to it's rightful place as ruler of the elemental nations.

Well I'm ending this chapter here.

So what you guys think so far?