Ch. 2 The rise of a Heroine

Edited Out: The rise of a heroin. Honestly.

AN: Jazzie-kun, please don't get mad at me because you're not in the story yet. You'll appear soon, don't worry.

Starkit woke up and saw sunlight in the branches.

Sunlight was in the branches, you say? What the Hell?

She closed her eyes again, because she was still tired; but her mom would not let her sleep in today.

Edited Out: Buttermom.

"Sweetie, it's time to get up," said Dawnsparkle, her eyes shining.

Edited Out: Shinning eyes.

Dawnsparkle? Dear God, spare me from one of the most Mary Sue-esque names in history.

"What is it mom?" Starkit was already awake.

Since when do the kits refer to their parents as "Mom", "Dad", "Momma", "Pop", etc.? They always call them by their names. Just saying.

Then the she-kit remembered what was happening today, "Om my gosh! It's my ceremony today!" She squealed excitedly.

Edited Out: Excercisedly squelling

Also, why on Earth is Starkit saying 'oh my gosh'? Since gosh is a 'polite' way of saying God. The cats don't HAVE a God. Wouldn't she say, 'Oh my StarClan'?

Today was the day she would become an apprentice!

She's a kit! Isn't there an age requirement?

She flitted outside, not waiting for her mom.

Edited Out: Starkit flicking outside.

Her mom quickly caught up to her.

"Sweetie, you know that the clans don't except cats like us sometimes." She said.

Starkit glared. She didn't like being told that. Just because her Mom used to be a ShadowClan cat, and her dad was Jayfeather the medicine Cat didn't mean that she was different!

Erm, yes it does. Medicine cats aren't allowed to have kits. Jayfeather is either the medicine cat, or your dad. Pick one!

"Starkit, come here." said Firestar from the ledge. He jumped down.

"Starkit it's time for you to become an apprentice," he said, "You're a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor you."

Edited out: Firestar mentoring with Starkit.

Everybody gasped. Starkit did too. She heard her mother say, "Wow!"

*Fireheart liked her shoulder.*

1) Firestar decided to not be clan leader anymore. He liked Starkit's shoulder.

2) Firestar used the Doctor's TARDIS to travel backwards in time, before he was leader. Thinking back, he then decided that he really liked Starkit's shoulder.

3) Firestar gave clan leadership over to Brambleclaw for the hour. He then decided that he really loved Starkit's shoulder. What a hot shoulder! Whoo!

He whispered into her ear, "You'll be the best there ever was Starpaw, I know it."

Ewww, now he's flirting with her. What will Sandstorm think?

Surprised, she walked away when they were done howling for her.

Who was howling? Were there dogs nearby?

Then she went over to Jayfeather and Dawnsparkle. They were very proud.

She wasn't even officially named 'Starpaw'! What's going on!

Xdarkrosesx is going on.

…erg…

"Daughter we're very happy, but we have to say something," said Jayfeather, his chest puffed out, "You see, there is a prophecy that Starclan gave me. It said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and the holly."

He's already talking to her! Why is he telling her that he is going to talk to her?

Starpaw gasped. What did it mean?

It means you're a bloody Mary Sue.