I only got one review... not acceptible guys... anyways, i decided to update for those who are reading and didnt bother to review... shame on you...
"Welcome to John's car dealership! The only good store that would be open on Christmas Eve... and when ever Hanukkah starts or finishes... what the hell, we're open everyday except Christmas, got it? Get a car here for that whiny daughter of yours!" The P.A. system was on loud speaker all through the lot where only a few people were there.
John's car dealership was the most expensive, and one of the only, car dealerships in town. Jacob loved his job, but not getting costumers mad, which was often.
Jacob checked in with Mustang-Dash and he walked into his office to drop off his coat that he never really needed. He planned on getting a lot of tips for that chain, but he knew it wouldn't be easy.
Jacob walked into John's office as he was yelling at someone on the phone, as always. He waited patiently until he hung up.
"Um, sir, I was wondering if there are any holiday deals I should know about?" John shook his head.
"You know there's never a 'deal' here." John lit a cigar, Jacob held his breath not to catch the horrible smell. "Why should today be any different?"
"No reason, sir." he hated calling John sir, but he always forgot his last name for some odd reason.
He stood there, waiting for him to say something else, sometimes he'd ask him to get a coffee or something.
"Jacob, why are you just standing there?" John yelled. "GET TO WORK!" Jacob ran out and put on his vest, uniform for the job.
Embry also worked there and he was talking to some costumers about a used Honda. The couple buying were arguing and Jacob decided to give Embry a hand.
"Hey, Embry, need any help?" Embry sighed in relief.
"Yes! Jacob, you can!" Then he gave him a look. "Why though?"
"I need a lot of tips today to get Nessie that chain for Christmas!" Embry rolled his eyes.
"Just forget it! Why not get the ring from Billy and propose already? It won't cost a penny."
"Because, I'm saving that for new years eve." Embry rolled his eyes and walked out so Jacob could take care of it.
"Um, hello." Jacob said as a little introduction to the couple. They stopped fighting instantly. "What happens to be the problem? Is it the price?" The man shook his head.
"No, actually, it's the colour," said the female. "Our son spacifically said he wanted a red car, but this is blue!"
"Do you see any red cars here?" said the male.
"Justin, you and your cheep walet!"
They argued at the same time until Jacob thought of a good solution.
"Okay, um, sir," they looked at him, silent again. "Tell me, what's your son like, exactly? Is he good in school?"
"Yes, Mr..."
"Jacob," he confirmed. "Well, how old is he?"
"He's turning seventeen tommorow, his birthday is the same day as christmas so we decided to get him something special." Jacob nodded his head in understanding.
"Okay, so the way I see it we have two options." They looked at Jacob, carefully listening. "One, we can spray paint it for fifty dollars more and you can pick it up by opening time tomorrow, or we can get another car like this one for the same price, but in red to your son's liking, but with that option you'd have to pay now so you can tell your son he's getting a car for sure, just about two weeks late, just before the holidays are over."
The two whispered to each other, Jacob waiting patiently and smiled to himself about how well he was doing. Finally, they turned around.
"I think we'll go with the shipment." Jacob smiled wider.
"Perfect! Just come with me to my office, I'll print a picture for you to show your son and we'll sign some papers."
They followed him and did as promised. When they finished, they looked so happy.
"Thank you, so much! You have no idea how much you've helped us." Martha, the female said. "How can we repay you?"
"It was nothing, I'm just glad to help." Jacob knew she was offering a tip, but he had to be polite.
"No, really! Our son will love his car and you've helped us more then that other bafoon..." Justin added. Then Martha had a smile as if she got an idea.
"Say, did I over hear you telling that other man you were trying to get a neckless for your fiancee?" Jacob shook his head.
"No, ma'am. She's my girlfriend, but I'm popping the question in a few days time."
"Well, with your pay check, you're not going to get that neckless in time."
"How much is it?" Jacob didn't have it in him to tell them the price of the chain, it felt like he was robbing someone.
"Sir, ma'am, as much as I appreciate you trying to help me, I'm only accepting small tips at this time."
"But it's christmas, times are so hard." Martha looked surprised he would turn down their offer of buying the gift.
"Really, ma'am, I can't accept such a huge tip..."
Martha and Justin looked at each other, then Justin took out a check book, wrote a check for the car and left with another thank you. Jacob filed it with the papers, then noticed there were two checks. One for the fifteen thousand car they just bought to John's car dealership, and another for one hundred dollars to Jacob Black.
Jacob ran outside just to see them off. They waved and drove away.
"Thanks! Merry Christmas!" Jacob called.
"See you in two weeks!" Justin called back.
Jacob shoved the check into his pocket and gave Mustang-Dash some water since he looked thirsty after a long nap.
The rest of the day went on like that, everyone had a problem with the car that Jacob would be able to fix and they'd leave large, and sometimes small, tips. Not all of them heard about the chain he wanted to get, but when they did, they were the ones to leave the big checks.
All the salesmen working there heard about Jacob's story from Embry and almost always passed their costumers to him, all knew except John.
Almost closing time and Jacob did some math in his office.
"Hey, I think I'll have enough for Nessie's gift after all, Mustang-Dash!" Mustang-Dash barked happily and Jacob gave him a treat.
Jacob suddenly got a light knock on his door, he got up and opened it. It couldn't have been Embry since he would've just walked in, and John's knock was much louder. This was a customer.
A bald man, who covered it with a baseball cap, and a plaid vest stood there with two other boys.
"Hello, are you a sales man here? Jacob Black, I hear you're the best." Jacob laughed.
"That's me."
"Well," said the smallest, and better dressed, boy. "We need a beautiful, not too expensive, car."
"Nothing too elegant-" the dad was cut off.
"But nothing too simple either!" said the tallest, with a Forks High jacket that only basketball players get to wear.
"Now, are you guys looking for a car?" They all turned to John, who just threw out his cigar.
"Um... yeah, why else would we be here?" said the tall boy.
"Lucky for you, I have the best cars that were just shipped out back! Let me show you!" The two boys and man followed and Jacob went back into his office.
Jacob packed his things and paper clipped the checks together and shoved them into his pocket. Dash-Mustang followed him out as he locked the door, he was the last one out.
As Jacob was heading out, he heard John's voice and decided to see the "new cars" himself to see if he was being ripped off. He had the perfect car in mind for this family.
"Dad, are you sure we can afford this? It costs more then my tuition to college!" he heard the tall boy say.
They were looking at the most expensive cars on the lot that John's been dying to sell this Christmas. Jacob kept the keys to the car they'd want in hand and eves dropped without being seen. Mustang-Dash did the same by just sitting there.
"Is there something less expensive here... and less flashy?" the well dressed boy said.
"I'm sorry, these are the last cars I have that haven't been reserved!" John lied. Jacob rolled his eyes.
"We're kinda on a budget, Mr John, no more then fifteen thousand." the dad said.
"Oh, that'll be fine... for the first month or so, just pay the rest later on... just sign these papers here!"
Jacob walked in, unnotised then, the boys looked at their dad with hope in their eyes, either to sign the papers or to come back later when they had something else, he wasn't sure. The dad hesitated, reading the fine print carefully, then Jacob cleared his throat.
"Um... sir?" he looked at John, who looked like he was going to yell at him for interrupting. "I found a car in the back at a reasonable price of ten thousand, it hasn't been reserved yet." he covered John.
The family looked at him with hopeful eyes and the dad stepped forward.
"May we take a look?" Jacob smiled and gladly showed the way. John practically broke the clipboard in his hands out of anger.
The family loved the Lexus Jacob found, even if it was used. They bought it as soon as they saw it and gave Jacob a tip of fifty dollars. It wasn't Jacob's smallest or biggest tip, but he thanked them anyways.
When they drove away with their new car and yelling merry christmas to them, Jacob added the fifty dollar check to the checks. But right behind him, John saw the money he had.
"I HAD THEM SET FOR A MUSTANG!" Jacob shrugged, but then he took the checks right out of his hands.
"HEY! You can't do that! I earned that!" Jacob yelled back.
"From what? Stealing other people's customers all day?"
"John, give me back my money! It's Christmas!"
John then shrugged and lit a cigar, lit it, then burned the checks, every one.
Jacob wanted to phase right there, he could've. He was so angry right now, it was his only hope to get the chain for Nessie and John ruined it. He wanted to quit, but that wouldn't make John hurt in any way. But somehow, the way Jacob shook with anger, scared John enough to scare him for life.
Jacob checked out, grabbed his things and smiled about how John was scared stiff... but still, he had no hope of getting Nessie the chain in time before five.
AN I imagined Kurt, Lenny and Finn from GLEE (BEST SHOW EVER!) as the family to buy the car xD PLEASE REVIEW!