Is this a good story?


They had gotten the call of suspicious activities in the cornfields a little outside of Jump. They didn't know what to expect, but none of them had any notion to what they had found.

A girl sat there in the grass trembling, the goosebumps on her exposed skin prominent. She had her knees hugged up to her chest and looked up at them, eyes wide with despair.

"Do you even want to imagine what could've happened to her?" Cyborg whispered as they stared at her.

Robin put a hand behind his neck. "We should let the girls handle this since she's.. in an uncomfortable position."

What traveled through their thoughts about what they assumed happened to her was something very dark. They were trying to put two and two together: A naked girl sitting in a field late into the evening. Scared out of her mind...

Raven waved them off. "I think we got this enough. Just go back to the the tower."

Starfire had made her way over to the girl, sitting in front of her in the same position. She gave her a small smile.

The boys understood, making their way out through the path between the corn stalks.

"Hello," The alien greeted, the girl watching her in horror. "Do not be frightened. I am here to help. What is your name?"

The girl looked down, jerking back when she spotted Star's hand reaching for her.

"Don't scare her." Raven warned from the distance, scoping the area out.

Starfire nodded and turned back to look at the girl, who was shaking vigorously now.

"Are you cold?" She asked as softly as she could.

The dark eyes of the thin girl had went blank. Before Star could question it, she turned to the side and spat up water and blood.

"Raven! She is vomiting!"

When she had finished spilling the nothingness in her gut, her eyes rested on the female before her. She was obviously scanning her as she took deep breaths, wobbling.

Star had jumped up when she saw the empath rushing over with a bunch of cloths and jewelry.

"Where did you find those?" The Tamaranean questioned, her eyes darting between the two since she was confused on what to focus her attention on.

Raven pointed far out behind her. "I think they're hers. I don't think she's from here."

The girl caught their attention again as she began a coughing fit, her body still swaying. Starfire panicked. "We have to take her to a hospital!" The way the foreigners eyes fluttered, she knew this wouldn't be good. "She coughed up blood."

The empath took a deep breath. "Calm down. We can get her help but should call an ambulance. Do you know what she could have? It's not even confirmed how she got here."

Starfire gasped just as Raven finished. No, she was not going to listen to her anymore. With her bare hands, she scooped up the girl's limp body delicately.

"What are you doing?"

The alien princess ignored her friend, grabbing on of the cloths and wrapping it around the girl.

"Where are going?" Raven asked loudly as Star began flying in a direction that she knew wasn't the hospital.

"To get this poor girl some assistance right away."

Raven shook her head. If she was doing the immature thing the empath guessed she was gonna do, then this would not be good.