A/N this site messed up and uploaded only part of ch 1. So this is pt. 2 of ch 1

As she straightened up Aragon could see the blood dripping from her mouth. She then grinned sadistically and struck again with her blade, and again Aragon again parried and countered by swinging his sword with both hands trying to decapitate the Imperial captain, but she blocked his own attack

At that moment two Imperials, one was Hadvar, and attempted to intervene but the captain waved them off. She then attacked again but Aragon dodged and swung at her arm and landing a blow that caused her to drop her Gladius. She then drew a dagger that Aragon immediately noticed was coated with some form of poison. "Light blue, damn, Netch jelly, probably mixed with something else" he thought, recognizing the poison. Suddenly she swung at him, He dodged the first few strikes when he bumped into one of the other Imperial's who then grabbed him, Aragon swung his head back hard causing the man to let go. Aragon took a moments glance at the man whose nose was now broken.

As he looked back to face the captain, Aragon realized the mistake he made by taking his eyes off his opponent when she stabbed him between the ribs. Aragon felt the effects of the poison as soon as he pulled the dagger out. At first his legs gave way and dropped his sword. Next his eyes fogged up and he started to lose sight. The captain wend up to him and said "Ready to join the other rebels now." Then she grabbed his sword and took his sheath off his belt. "This is a fine blade. It will look good on my wall." "I'm getting that back" Aragon thought then his mind then turned to Astrid and Cyrus. "I'll survive for them." The last thing he heard was an Imperial saying "We got the runner, and a few more men snooping around, what should we do cap'n". "Throw them with the others". Then he passed out.

Ok, like I said this is my first attempt at a fanfic. First I would like to say that if you like this it will be a while before I get to write again, probably august or September, but I will write. Second, I would like to say please if you can pm me an advice on writing. I could really use some help. Third, if anyone has an idea for an OC they would like. Either pm me or write a character description in the comments, I only ask that the idea be lore friendly. I need race name gender basic character description and a class if you want one. Finally I would like to say that if you haven't read it already go and read fic The Nereverine returns. I won't spoil it but the basic idea is that the Nereverine shows up and helps the dragonborn in the skyrim main story. I personally really like it. Anyway you will get some more characters next chapter. Anyway see you in a few months unless something changes.