A/N: Ehm, okay… I only got one review, wich i saw today (Thank you Manax) And since that is as much reviews as i will get with only one chapter, i will update this story!!
Now hopefully someone will review… Warning: Major spoilers for SSBB!! Do not read if you want to hold on to the excitement about the game!!
An adventures arrival
Story written by: Greyfirestorm
Idea: Greyfirestorm
The world's coolest name: Greyfirestorm
Chapter 2: The beginning
"Hmm, let's see, if the stadium is here, then the mansion should be over there…"
A cloaked figure were examining a map over Nintendo City, trying to find the whereabouts of the legendary Smash Mansion, the home of the 40 greatest warriors in the galaxy.
"Ah, there it is! I think…" The figure were looking at a huge black and white building with windows sprayed in at random places. "You'd think the designer did'nt have eyes the way that building is made…" It said.
"He didn't." A tall man clad in green replied. "You don't say…" The figure said. "So this is the Smash Mansion?"
"Yes, designed by Master Hand himself." "That sure explains a lot…" The green clad man snorted. "Ah, I'm Link by the way! Humble resident of the Smash Mansion." Link raised his hand. "Ah, so you are the famous Link! My name is Dak, i am looking for the Master Hand." Dak shaked his hand.
"Ah, I'm sorry but you're too late, Master Hand left a few minutes ago. He said something about Hawaii and floated away…" "You gotta' be kidding me… I traveled for two weeks to find him and…and…" His speech drifted away into mumbling about hands to know their place.
"Well, what did you want to ask him about? I'm sure that i can help you!" Link said optimistically.
"Heh… Well, I guess it won't hurt to try… Could I come in??" Dak said.
A/N: Okay, I know the last chapter sued but I've tried to improve my writing. And plus. It's a year since my last chapter… PLEASE REVIEW!!