I will have chapter 1 now!
Ravenkit lifted her head, She looked around the warm den, her mother was curled around her.
"Duskflower, when will we get to eat?" Ravenkit was hungry, it was leaf bare, there was little prey.
"I don't know, little one, I don't know." Duskflower looked down on her kit with love, but sadness.
"When will Lightpelt come back" Ravenkit asked her mother.
"At sunhigh" Lightpelt was Ravenkits father.
"Wha-whats going on?" Falconkit asked, bleary eyed with sleep.
"Hush Falconkit, go back to sleep" Duskflower said softly, nuzzling her kit.
Ravenkit lowered her head to the ground, and slept.
"Let all cats old enough to win a battle gather here beneath the high ledge for clan meeting!"
Ravenkit, and her brother, Falconkit stepped out of the den, to find that Duskflower was waiting for them.
"Come, my kits, you re to be apprenticed."
"Ravenkit, come forward" Hailstars eyes were cruel.
She strode forward, cautious, but proud.
"You will be known as Ravenpaw, your mentor will be," He paused, a glitter in is eyes,"Me"
She stared, it was now her doom to become leader.
Oh Starclan, why? is it my destiny to become leader? why? why?
"Well?" Hailstar said, a cruel glitter in his eyes.
"I am grateful of the honor you have given to me by taking me as your apprentice, I thank you"
He smiled, a cruel smile,"stand with the apprentices, Ravenpaw "
"Falconkit, come forward, your mentor will be Hollyspring"
Falconpaw dipped his head to Hollyspring, and stepped back.
Oh Starclan, what is my fate?
Glad to update!