Ok, well I hate this chapter, its so random. I have re-written this like 4 times in the last 3 days, and everythime, i hated it. Ill be re-writing this again, but for now, im posting the jist of what the chapter is sopose to be like. And don't worry, when i post the redone chapter, ill post ANOTHER chapter. Please be kind, I am mainly doing this to work on my descriptions and how to express action and appearence.

The Begining.

The sun gleamed through the half open window the beams cascading down landing on a tanned cheek emphasizing the three whisker marks adorn there. The clock blinked 7:15, counting down the minutes till it would rudely awaken the slumbering blond. Five minutes later, the clock alarm went off, and said blond tumbled out of bed, while spouting off some colorful curses.

Sitting up, azure eyes stared at the clock with hatred. With a sigh, the young blond got to his feet, and headed to the kitchen for breakfast.

It was the first day of school, but not just any first day. Today was the first day of Naruto's senior year. The last year in, as Naruto referred to it, the prison. (1)

Now, Naruto didn't hate school, he just hated the people, the conformity, and the pressure that goes along with it. Naruto is an outcast, a loner, a person who refuses to conform to the norm, and is rejected for that fact, but it's not the only reason why he is alone. From an early age, Naruto was alone. He didn't chose to be alone, he just was. He never knew what happened to his parents, they just weren't there.

Everyone in the town seemed to hate him. Ever since he was young, the hate was there, but when he asked why, they would just brush him off with an "I don't talk to monsters" or, "you should know why!"

Day after day, he endures the insults and ugly glares, all the while smiling and pretending it doesn't bother him; though deep down its tearing him up inside. Numerous times he has thought about taken his life, ending his pain, escaping from the hell of the life he lives. But Naruto knows, dying is taking the easy way out, and it's what everyone wants. He has vowed to prove himself, vowed to get the respect, and attention he deserved, after being deprived of so much.

With the invisible mask plastered upon his face, Naruto took a quick glance around and exited the apartment to being another long, drawn-out, obnoxious school day. With his head bowed, he trudges the eight mile hike to Konoha high.

Now you may ask, why live so far away from the school when there is an apartment complex right next to it. Why would you put yourself through the troublesome task of hiking those eight miles everyday, enduring more glares and whispers? Naruto chose to live so far away because he didn't have to live close to the other students. By living in the apartments or houses next to the school he risked the chance of running into the kids he disliked so much. By living in an apartment farther away from school, he distanced himself from the torture the other kids put him through. A man can only take so much of being called an "idiot", "loser", "monster", "good for nothing."

He knew he was not an idiot; he just acted like one, because if he showed who he really was, he would be vulnerable. Yes, Naruto is no idiot. He is actually quit intelligent, always receives good scores, but made sure to they weren't too good, other wise people would get suspicious. But who would care anyone, again he is alone.

At an early age he developed a liking for music. He can play any instrument, from guitar, to violin, to clarinet and flute. With the money his parents left him he further explores the wondrous world of music, and forgets all worries when creating works of art. No one knows of his passion, it would just be another thing to tease him about.

As Naruto slowly makes his way to school, lost in thought about how much his life sucks, he doesn't notice the onyx hair young man coming up from his right until they collided.

(1) This phrase is what i say about my school. Im seriouse though, it IS a prison, theres no windows in the main building!

So horrible. TTTT What ever. I am currently trying to kill my self for my low vocabulary and idiocy for starting this story, when I clearly have no writing tallent.(ahem, and no spelling talent etheir) Im starting to loose the story line as well because I keep comming up with other ideas of how the story should go. Sigh Anyway, the rating might change some, and in the next chapters, theres going to some major OOC. Hope you are not currently trying to claw your brain out after reading this.

Oh and if anyone wants to be my beta I am currently desprate as you can see!

3 Ella Crain