Sri: ha haa haaa sisy. Yeh wonder wali ful kya hota hain! :D you love the kids? Woo…. That's really chweet :-* :) thank you…. :) aab hugs bhi mere liye! :) Lots of love sis…. Muaaah
DnAfan: :D thank you dost… Abhijeet sir ko aap dekh hi chuke ho pahele…. Aab Daya sir ka craziness enjoy karo. I hope u'll like it :) dekha… main plot 2 me apki entry sahi se guess bhi kar li…. Apke batane se pahele hi I guessed it….rightly :D & congratzzz yaar….
crazy for abhirika: awww…. Meri pyari si guriya rani toh bahat gusse me aa gayi! Mmm… mujhe bahat bura lag raha hain beta… yeh toh. Lekin beta, I have so many types of readers na? Kuch readers Tarika ke alawa aur bhi kisi ko kabhi kabhi dekhna chahte hain Abhijeet sir ke sath. As a writer mujhe kisi specific idea pe stick rehna nehi chahiye nah…. mujhe toh mere har tarha ke readers ke bare me sochna padhta hain. I hope you will understand my point beta.
Aur rahi baat apki new story ka, I have read it. But I am really sorry to say, it was a copy-paste concept to me to some extent. Main pahele bhi isi plot pe ek Abhirika story hi padhi thi beta. Mujhe naam toh yaad nehi abhi us story ka, na hi writer thik se yaad hain. But I am sure, main padhi thi aur ff me hi padhi thi. Bilkul aisa hi concept tha usme bhi. Abhirika ka jhagra hua tha. Tarika kidnapped ho gayi thi. Gunde Abhijeet sir ko akela bulaya Tarika ko churane ke liye. Aur they killed both of them brutally. Baad me team ko dono ka breathless body aise hi hathon me hath le kar kisi bandh factory me mila tha. Bura mat manna bachhe, aap soch samajh ke same typed story zaroor likhe nehi honge, lekin same same story line dekh ke mujhe apki woh story achha nehi laga. So I didn't review. Sorry beta…. Mujhe apko hurt karne ka bilkul bhi irada nehi tha…
Anushka Diya: heyyyy dear, your review always gives me a soothing peace…. :D as usual apki over-whelmed review… aap kuch na bhi likho sahi se phir bhi mujhe pata chal jata hain, aap kitna excited ho :) yaar, please don't make me embarrass. Kahan those olden precious days of FF… & the then different taste's sweet n simple stories…. The Golden writers…. Kahan main mamuli sa ek banda! :P apko achha laga yeh concept… mujhe sach me bada achha laga jaan ke. Aab toh age Duo hi honge…. Ek dam last me phir se apko main bachho se milwaungi…. Till then…. Think about your - ;) aur haan… thank you…. for your words for your Bhaiya ;)
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Abhi's Sunshine: hi Dear! chalo chalo, yahi pe chipak ke rahe jaoge kya….! Aage bhi toh story padho…. :) Love yaaa my friend
Sariya: thank you madam :) Aditya sir has twin baby nah? So reminding about them, this time I have included Duo's real kidzzz…. Though they are not kids anymore…. They have already grown up! :P
ABHICHARM: aap nah bare maze me ho. story bhi main likhun, remind bhi main hi karun apko :P yaar, ek toh story likhne ka kast karo aab…. Bahat din ho gaya :( I know you are busy in these days…. I am just requesting that's why :) thank you for your time :)
Priya: thank you ji :)
Guest: soon! Only soon! Kya soon ji? Soon is story ko delete kar doon yah phir update karun :P dear…. ek meaningful piece of sentence likhna chahiye nah ;) kya!
A.S Anjaana: oho l'll friend… now the secret has been already revealed to you ;)
Geet: aap ji wohi ho na…. Geet SHREYAholic? Ji thank you for your time… :) without any sign of Shreya, you give your time for this story…. Really thank you ji :)
AbhiDaya Fan: ha haaa darl! Uske bare me aisa khule aam na kaho… ;) kitni sari uss couples(!) ki pankha(!) hain idhar, pata hain nah apko! Phir? Yaar, saaaab bada gussa ho jayenge :P sab thore hi hum-tum jayse sochte hain ;) haan yaar, Daya sir ke story me Daya sir ko hi udha li maine ;) aab hoga na unka entry…. Cute si angry avtar me :) Duo moments ka guarantee main deti hoon dear. But couple moments ka jada space nehi hain…. phir bhi, dekhta hoon :) Love you tooo
Salja: :D thank you dost. U also TC
NOW HAVE A HAPPY READING…
Flashback
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A specious room…. Marble floored… painted by milky white…. A closed glass window at the left wall…. Some health awareness related pictures pasted on walls…. few machines… a saline stand…. A small stool & a table occupying a tray containing some medicine stripes, injection syringes and many necessary materials…. Beside a bed…. placed almost at the center of that room…. A sofa placed beside the main entrance of that room…. That's all one could notice about the specific space at his very first glance.
Next thing one could notice there was…. A figure lying on bed wrapping a light blue blanket completely from his head to toe!
Let's have a look at the clock hanging on front wall of the bed…. Its showing 7:30 & the slight ting of outside nature from the curtain covered glass window…. It's clear that its day time…. Means its early morning!
The rug wrapped figure slowly moved a l'll for once… giving a sign of his waking up.
Again silence!
After some times, the figure again moved & changed his side slowly…. Gradually a sad yet fresh fair face peeped from the blanket.
A pair of big bright eyes of that face quickly scanned the room first…. Then looked at clock…
The fair faced guy sighed heavily… kya yaar… aaj bhi tum nehi aaye! Aaj toh mera janamdin hain… aur tum abhi tak mujhe wish nehi kiye! He checked his mobile placed beside his pillow.
He tried to get up but failed badly feeling heavy pain of some injury on his right shoulder as well as his arm. Made a weird face the guy pressed a bell switch beside his bed… within a minute a ward boy entered hurriedly…. Daya sir! Aap uth gaye? Good morning sir.
Daya nodded in response.
Ward boy made a sorry face… sorry sir… woh mujhe bhai ka call aaya tha. Bade dino baad unhone call kiya… wo… wo Chennai me rehte hain kaam ke silsile me…. main bas use hi attend karne…. He stopped by Daya's voice… its ok Shambhu… ek call hi toh aaya tha. Main samajhta hoon… aur main apahij thori na hoon! Bas chota sa chot aaya! Main abhi abhi jaga hoon. Tum sorry mat kaho. Giving a pause, slowly….. bhai bada nasib se milta hain kisi ko…. he concluded in dreamy tone seeing some unspecified point at ceiling.
Shambhu confused at Daya's last sentence but told nothing further…. Only he could sense the dare-devil cop was in soggy mood due to some personal reason.
Shambhu stepped forward… sir please aiye… apko main fresh hone me madat karta hoon.
Daya jolted out from his position… nehi nehi. Tum bas mujhe bed se utarne me madat kar do… main dhire dhire fresh ho jaunga.
Shambhu instantly: yeh aap kya bol rahe sir! Abhi apka ghaon kitna taza hain! Teen bullet laga tha apko… aap sahi se hath hila bhi nehi payenge. Aap… aap please aiye… main karta hoon apka madat.
Suddenly Daya came into anger… kya problem hain haan? He raised his voice… tumne suna nehi mujhe kisi ka madat nehi chahiye? Main apna kaam khud kar sakta hoon. Mujhe bas iss bed se utarne me help kar do…. Main kar lunga…
Shambhu stepped back seeing the tough inspector's red eyes… o….ok… ok sir. Aap… aap please aiye. He helped Daya to get up and descend.
Daya leaned at the edge of that cot and ordered Shambhu to keep fresh towel for him in washroom.
Shambhu shocked very much…. Sir… sir… please… mujhse koi galati ho gaya kya? Sir please mujhse koi bhul hua hain toh main hath jor ke apse mafi mang raha hoon. Lekin sir please… aap aisa mat kijiye. Abhi parson hi apka operation hua hain… aap itna jada hath hilayenge toh jhakham barh sakta hain.
In reply Daya gave only his most angry glare & slowly started to make his way towards the attached washroom.
Shambhu ran behind him & almost folded his hands in front of Daya…. sir please… mujhse kya galati ho gaya sir? Sir, doctor saab ko pata chalega toh mera naukri chala jayega sir. Mai apne biwi-bachhe ko le kar itni badi sahar me kahan jaunga? Sir please…. Aap aisa zid kiun kar rahe hain achanak aaj?
Daya's angry eyes soften to some extent seeing Shambhu pleading. He stopped… aare nehi Shambhu… tum tension mat lo. Main tumhe order de raha hoon… koi tumhe kuch nehi kahega. Abhi tum bahar jao. Main dhire dhire manage kar lunga. Jab tak main na bulaun, andar aane ka koi zaroorat nehi.
Shambhu tried again… sir, mujhse koi galati…
Daya cut him in strict tone… nehi hain koi baat, bola nah. Tum bahar jao aab. Koi kuch bole tumhe, sidha mujhse baat karne ko bolna, phir main dekh lunga kaun tumhe kaam se nikalta hain.
Without dragging more Shambhu silently went outside arranging Daya's clean outfits (obviously hospital dress) and towel in bathroom.
After satisfying of closing the cabin door…. Daya carefully sat on sofa placed there murmuring…. Jab kisi apne ko hi mera parwa nehi… ek ward boy kya khak madat karega mera! Bada aaya 'madat karta hoon sir'…. he mimicked Shambhu.
Again he looked at his phone. No new message or miss call was there. His anger bar rose more this time seeing the wallpaper…. Aise daant nikalke haasna mat Boss. Man kar raha… he stopped for a while. Again started… sach me aaj man kar raha Abhi tumhara daant tod doon! Mazak samajhke rakhe ho kya? Ek hafta se Guwahati me na jane kya kya meeting me baythe ho! Parson mujhe goli laga… operation hua… tum tak abhi bhi khabar pahaucha nehi, yeh main maan hi nehi sakta. Tum dil se mehsoosh karte ho sab mere bare me, mujhe pakka pata hain. Phir bhi ek baar tumne mujhe phone nehi kiya. Aaj tumhara bhai ka birthday hain… aaj bhi tumhara koi aata-pata nehi. Itne dino se koi contact nehi… confidential meeting… 'Daya main tumse aat-dus din se pahele contact nehi kar paunga… dhyan rakhna apna'… huhhh!
He stood up with a jerk and in great frustration kicked the nearby stool hard…. Which fall producing a loud metallic sound.
Bade aaye confidential meeting karne wale… tum yeh thik nehi kar rahe ho Abhijeet. Jitna bhi confidential kaam ho, ACP sir se tumhara koi contact nehi hain …. Yeh main kisi bhi kimat pe maan nehi sakta, tum koi mission me nehi gaye ho. Tum tak abhi bhi mera chot ka khabar gaya nehi, yeh ho hi nehi sakta. Aur tum kya din raat udhar office me baythe ho ki jammer ke wajah se ek baar bhi mujhse baat nehi ki? Aare adhi raat hi sahi, hotel me wapas toh aa rahe ho! Tab nehi karna chahiye tha ek call! Kam se kam ek message toh bhejna chahiye tha tumhe?
His frustration filled muttering stopped with a new message arrival tone of his cell phone.
He narrowed his eyes looking the sender name…. aab ise kya ho gaya! Freddy toh humesha se subha subha mujhe janamdin ka bhadhai deta hain… aaj message! Dekhte hain baat hain kya!
Daya swapped the open button of screen with an excitement but when it opened…. His face turned into a white paper…. It's just contained with an apology note from his dear junior cum friend that, due to some urgent emergency work they will not be able to meet their Daya sir in the morning at hospital…. And at the end of the message there was a simple Happy Birthday Daya Sir was written!
Instantly Daya's heart wanted to throw the silly gadget somewhere far from him…. But he checked somehow…. Reminding his buddy…. Abhijeet bought it for him in the last month on his stupid zid for new iPhone!
He inhaled deeply to make calm his mind and went to washroom leaving his mobile as it was on couch.
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(Scene 2)
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From outside of cabin, Shambhu heard well the loud metallic sound of felling the stool on floor with a great force… he wanted to rush inside instantly but Daya's earlier great anger on him, the inspector's red eyes abruptly stopped him to do so while the security personals outside of cabin carefully checked the inside scenario from the small glassy portion of door.
Shambhu was in a dilemma whether he should peep inside ignoring the tough cop's order or to stay outside…. his mobile starting to ring.
An unknown number… made Shambhu irritate to his core.
With a lot of irritation Shambhu picked up the call.
Immediately a cold serious voice barged on his ears… asking him about senior inspector Daya's present condition.
Shambhu's mind alerted within a second as this type of quarry from an unknown figure for a senior police personal to him instead of hospital authority was quite fishy when outside of room two armed constable were there for Daya's protection for 24 hours…. Showing the higher ranking & necessity of tight security of the patient…. Shambhu shocked a bit and silently forwarded his cell to on-duty guards on either side of cabin door.
One of the guards grabbed his phone and attached it with ear with an attitude…. But within a moment the guard's facial expression changed from a confused to serious to alert to shock lastly! The guard immediately stood in an attention position as if the caller was in front him…. Resulted creating confusion for another on-duty guard and Shambhu.
The guard started to fumble now… ye… yes sir. Daya sir is absolutely ok. Yes sir, he woke up already. O… o… ok… ok sir. Sure sir. Jai hind sir! While the other guard and Shambhu was looking at his sweaty puzzled face with a little knowledge of some high ranking official's phone it was for Daya.
The guard cut the call after that & backed the phone to Shambhu with an irritated mood…. Kya yaar Shambhu, tu ne toh marwa diya mujhe! Baal baal bacha hoon! Still a shade of scare was present in his face.
Another guard tried to handle the situation… kiun yaar? kiska phone tha re? Aur hospital walon se baat na kar ke isne Shambhu ko kiun phone kiya?
The guard who attended the call earlier, inhaled deep…. Isne mat bol yaar, inhe bol. Yeh phone Abhijeet sir ka tha. Sayad Daya sir phone nehi uthaye toh unhone Shambhu ko call kar liye.
Another guard stood in his place straight instantly…. Matlab tu keh raha hain, senior inspector Abhijeet?
His colleague nodded his head… haan wohi. Daya sir ka khas dost.
Another guard asked carefully… tu ne sahi se pesh aaya na? Kuch ulta-sidha ho gaya humse toh naukri toh jayega hi jayega…. upar se barabari se Daya sir ka suraksha ka dhyan nehi rakha humne woh charge bhi lagega, woh toh alag!
Shambhu cut them in panicky way… aare tum logo ka naukri toh phir bhi bach jayega. Tum logo ko toh bas bahar khara rehna hain yeh bandook tan ke. Lekin mera kya hoga? Main toh Daya sir ka dekhbhal ke liye hoon. Lekin pata nehi aaj unhe kya junoon charha hain, sab kaam khud karenge bata ke mujhe toh cabin se nikal diya. Aab jab Abhijeet saab ko yeh baat pata chalega ke main Daya sir ka madat nehi ki, woh toh mujhe kha jayenge! Aur unka phone bhi maine attend nehi ki, woh toh alag! He looked up…. Hey Bhagwan, mujhe bacha lena.
The two guards present there turned at him…. Abhijeet sir itna khatarnak hain kya? Tu unhe janta hain? Their voice shook a bit.
Shambhu amazed…. tum log unhe jante nehi? Khatarnak Abhijeet saab kab hue! Wo toh bada nek insaan hain. Lekin jab bhi kabhi Daya sir is hospital me admit hote hain, aur humse agar itna sa bhi galati se bhi koi chunk ho jata hain kabhi… saab pura hospital ko sir pe utha lete hain. Tum log yakeen nehi karoge tab unhe khud Daya saab ke alawa aur koi rok nehi pata, ACP sir bhi nehi! Abhijeet saab, Daya saab ko le ke kisise galati se bhi koi galati bardast nehi karte kabhi hospital me.
Guards gave more attention to his words… tu kabhi kuch garbar ki pahele? Dant padha tujhe Abhijeet sir se?
Shambhu made proud face… nehi. Aaj tak main kabhi apna duty se compromise nehi ki. Kisi patient ke sath nehi. Aaj tak ek bhi sikyayat kabhi kisine nehi ki mere khilaf…. He stopped suddenly. Lekin aaj sayad main toh gaya!
Phir tu aaj kiun dar raha hain? Aaj toh CID wale abhi tak aaya bhi nehi. Bhagwan pe bharosha rakh… Daya sir tujhe kisi ke aane se pahele hi andar bula lenge. Unhone khud hi toh tujhe bahar rukne ko kaha… phir tu darta kiun! A guard questioned Shambhu.
Shambhu nodded his head in disappointment… tum log samajh nehi rahe ho. Wo Abhijeet saab hain… pet se baat nikalna unka bayen hath ka khel hain. Unhone mujhe ek bhi sawal puche agar jab unhone phone kiya, tab Daya sir kar kya rahe the… mujhse chupaya nehi jayega. Unke samne ek minute bhi main tik nehi paunga. Unke ankhen dekha kabhi tum logo ne. Baap re, mujhe bada dar lagta hain jhut bolne me…. pata nehi sab kayse wo pata kar lete sirf chahra dekh ke hi.
The on-duty guards, who never meet earlier senior inspector Abhijeet…. Sighed heavily…. May be to pacify themselves that they didn't do any mistake with Senior inspector Daya's security.
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(Scene 3)
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Daya came out with red eyes from washroom after a good 45-50 minutes of very stressful refreshing session …. Bearing signs of pain…. Both physically & mentally.
He slumped down on bed carelessly with a thud… kisiko mera yaad nehi… jab tum hi mujhe bhul gaye ho Boss, main kayse sochun koi aur aaj ka din mujhe wish karen? Freddy message bhej ke kaam khatam kar liya. Koi mujhse milne nehi ayega… thik hain, kaam pahale manta hoon. Lekin ek baar mujhe wish toh karke jana chihiye tha nah. Sab ke sab bhul gaye… kayse yaar!
A drop of fresh tear rolled down from his cheek…. Kisi ko bhi yaad nehi! ACP sir bhi bhul gaye mujhe! He glanced at clock… which showing half past eight almost. Itni der ho gaya… sir bhi phone nehi kiye aur Dr. Salunkhe bhi nehi! Aare busy toh hum sab hote hain… Humesha se. lekin koi ek sms bhi bhejne ka waqt nehi nikal pa rahe hain! He sadly looked at outside as earlier Shambhu opened the curtains. First winter light hazy weather was seen outside.
Daya smiled ruefully. Aaj toh Sachin ka bhi janamdin hain. Use kayse yaad nehi uska Daya sir ka bhi hain aaj. Use toh atleast ek call karna chahiye tha. Aare hospital me chuttiyan mana raha hoon, iska bhi toh puchne ek call kar sakta tha. Use kahan kaam hain aaj! Wo toh kal subha ghar gaya hain… apne parents se milne…. Jabalpur. Phir!
He felt an urge of hunger…. Siding all his anger for his teammates and the most for his dear buddy Abhijeet…. He pressed the bell to call Shambhu.
This time Shambhu entered with a delighted face… looking a bit confident.
Sir, aap thik toh… his cheerful voice lowered seeing Daya's red face.
Daya turned at him… haan Shambhu main thik hoon bilkul. Achha woh phone jara pass karna mujhe. He eyed at sofa.
Shambhu followed his order and helped him to sit properly pulling the bed slight upside direction.
While clearing Daya's medicine tray, he suddenly heard the tough cop's almost inaudible angry murmur…. Abhi tak koi khabar nehi! Abhi tak na ek phone na miss call na message. Haad hain!
Shambhu astonished very much. Aare, hum toh soch rahe the Abhijeet saab, Daya sir ko phone pe na milne ke wajah se mujhe call kiye. Lekin sayad unhone toh Daya saab ka phone try kiye hi nehi! Tab sirf woh sab baat batane ke liye unhone mujhe call kiye! He thought all in his mind.
A nurse entered at the same time holding a beautiful bouquet made up of colorful roses, in her hands…. Wished Daya as…. Happy Birthday sir. Yeh apke liye humare hospital ki taraf se. hum pray karte hain aap zaldi thik ho jaye…. Aur phir apke apno ke paas….. apne duty me wapas ja sake.
Daya initially felt so much happiness getting this wish…. But the next moment a rash thought over powered his mind…. dekha Boss, main idhar rehne se hospital walon ka hi bhala hain, paysa kama raha hain authorities. Phir bhi inhe mere good health ki fikar hain…. zaldi recovery ki wish kar rahe hain yeh log…. Aur ek tum, mujhe chor ke na jane kahan jake baytho ho!
While thinking all these crazily…. He nodded his head pasting a humble smile in his lips in reply of that wish of the nurse maintained his inspector gesture.
Nurse smiled and went outside along with Shambhu as he had some works in medicine department related to Daya.
Daya was looking outside unmindfully when after some time Shambhu backed there with a covered tray in hand…. Aiye sir, apka breakfast.
Unknowingly Daya made face… breakfast! Tum logoka yeh sadha hua dudh-cornflex aur soup pine se achha hain main bhukha rahun!
Shambhu replied nothing. Instead of he placed the plate in front of Daya adjusting the folding small tray of his bed.
Daya reluctantly opened it and his eyes got fix in utter astonishment. Yeh kya hain Shambhu? Yeh breakfast mera hi toh hain? Tum aur kisi ka galati se utha ke toh nehi laye ho? He asked all in a go.
Shambhu smiled: haan saab. Yeh apka hi hain. Shambhu kabhi apne kaamon me galati nehi karta. Aaj apke liye special nasta aaya hain.
Daya looked at the food plate…. The Upma in it reminding him his Brother's specialty in this recipe for a moment…. And his eyes turned wet immediately.
Shambhu switched on the TV hanging on wall and adjusted it in a news channel…. Which currently was showing some advertisement break…. The lower scroll was running announcing some upcoming BREAKING NEWS. Sir aap kha lijiye… main thori der me aata hoon… doctor saab aane ka waqt bhi ho raha hain…. he turned at Daya for permission.
Sensing what Daya wiped of his eyes quickly to hide it from Shambhu & gave a positive node. Seeing that, the ward-boy moved from there left Daya alone in the room. Daya sighed and took a small quantity of Upma in spoon and placed in his mouth ….In the meantime the advertisement break finished and something came on screen…. Daya's breathing stopped for a moment…. His eyes tried to pop out from its orbit and his mouth stayed open wide…. His body jerked a bit….. and spoon fell from his hand…. In utter shock!
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With regards,
Mistic Morning
