-1DISCLAIMER: I do not own Harry Potter, and I never will (obviously). I did not write My Immortal — I'm simply rewriting it and (TRYING) to make it better.
LISE NOTES: Pffhaha. This story is way too easy to fix — for me, anyways. Yeah, I'm horrible, but hey, if I don't do it, who will? (it's already plagued the "Threesomes" section on … holyshit)
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Chapter 2 of the Abridged My Immortal
AN: Thanks to bloodytears666 for helping
me with the chapter! By the way, preps,
quit flaming my story! Okay?
The next day, I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing once again. I opened the door for my coffin and drank some water from the bottle I had. My coffin was a solid black color, and lining the inside was hot pink velvet. Stepping out of my sarcophagus, I took off my MCR shirt I used as pajamas, and slipped my robes on. For the final touch, I put four pairs earrings on my ears and styled my hair into a messy bun.
My friend, Willow, woke up following this and grinned at me, opening her forest green eyes. She, too, put on her uniform, and the two of us put on our makeup.
"I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly, as I put the final touches on my eye liner.
"Yeah? So?" I shot back, hoping she didn't notice my strawberry-shaded face.
"Do you like Draco?" Willow questioned as we left the Slytherin common room, heading for the Great Hall.
"No! I so fucking don't!" I shouted.
"Yeah, right!" she bellowed in an equally loud manner. As Willow finished her sentence, Draco walked up to me, seemingly out of nowhere.
"Hello," he said.
"Hi," I replied, trying my hardest to sound like I was flirting with him.
"Guess what?"
"What?"
"Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade," he told me, obviously aiming to hide his excitement.
"Oh my fucking God!" I screamed, right there, in the middle of the fucking Great Hall. I love Good Charlotte, even if I am in Britain and GC's an American band from Maryland.
"Well Ebony, do you want to go with me?" Draco asked uncertainly.
I gasped.
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LISE NOTES: Well, that's the end of Abridged! Chapter 2. Comments, flames, suggestions even?