This is one of my first fanfics. Please be nice to me in your Critiques. I still would like to hear what you actually think so that I can improve my writing skills. I do not claim any of the characters in this fanfic as my own, except for Rina, who is my character forever and always.
Kankuro's puppet, Crow, was holding her.
"Kankuro, I'm going to hurt you if you don't let go of me, right now!!" Rina screamed. The whole room went silent, except for
Kankuro, who was snickering in the corner. Rina glared at him, then Temari appeared beside Kankuro and punched him square
in the face. Crow let go of Rina and she barely managed to catch herself before she hit the ground. She immediately stood up
and walked out of the door. She slammed the door behind her.
That annoying little twit had got on her last nerve. She stood outside of the door for several minutes, then a breeze hit her and
she realized how cold she was. She began to shiver. The door behind her and she heard a voice mumble "Jerk", but before she
could turn around, she was knocked to the ground. Before she knew it, a hand was lifting her up. Then she came face to face
with a green-eyed, red-haired, male. Her face quickly became florid. She felt her stomach rumble.
Rina backed up, covered her mouth with her hand, and took off into the trees. She managed to get about a kilometer away
before she had to stop. She turned when she heard noises behind her. The red headed boy had followed her. He landed next to
her and just stared at her. She looked at him through the corner of her eye. Her stomach lurched again. When the feeling
passed, she stood up straight. Then, the male spoke.
"Are you okay?" He asked. Rina just stared at him."Did I hurt you?" he asked. She blinked. "Wow, he has really red hair",
she thought.