So, I actually did not like how I original designed Ghost. This version is much better. Also, actuale spacing in between paragraphs!
It has been ten years since Nixus and Mary were killed. Their body's had only just began to rot, and the suits with them. Mary's suit was only slightly dirty, with some mold beginning to form. Nixus's suit, though, was horribly torn due to it being a older suit. The whole body was pure white, now a dull titanium white, and was made from plastic with faux fur coating it, the only eye left being a dull purple. The jaw was missing the suit piece, the right hook, along with its arm, had merged with Nixus's arm, the hook embedded in between his middle finger and ring finger's knuckles. The endo had destroyed his arm bones. His left hand had been entirely destroyed, replaced by the endo hand, with some flesh clinging to it. Almost his entire head was destroyed, only some of his head remained, thanks to the endo skull being mostly broken. now, though, all that's left of his head was the left side of his head. His chest had a large gash from his lower left to his heart, now stored in a animatronic core, a small orb of stainless steel, with a small purple stone, carved into a diamond shape, witch laid dead in his chest, covered in dried blood. The endoskeleton had carved into his body, and all his internal organs had been stolen by William, leaving him a empty shell. His legs had both been destroyed, leaving only the endo legs covered in dried blood and rotting flesh. The suit itself was ancient, having a thick layer of dust covering it, and was covered with rips and tears all over. The hole body was like Foxy's suit, but springlocked and albino. The suit had a pair of old black torn trousers on its legs.
Suddenly, a spark flew from the suit, and it began to twitch rapidly, the old dead core coming to life with a beautiful purple glow, illuminating the inside of the suit. Nixus sprung to life, letting out a hellish screech of metal and blood. he fell to his side, his nerves reativating after a full ten years of being dead. The nerves of his brain being reactivated through the CPU crammed into his skull, said metal device wiring into his nerves, bringing back some of his functions. Nixus kept letting out that hellish screech, until it stopped, and he slumped to the side, twitching. Slowly, the twitching stopped, and Nixus rose to his knees, stuck in shock. He could feel the cold springs and locks digging into his rotten and leathery flesh. He slowly stood, falling to the ground, due to his knees joints locking up. Slowly, once again, he tried to stand, succeeding this time. Stumbling over to the desk that was across from him, covered by William's blueprints. On the table was a cracked hand mirror, with Nixus picked up, and looked at his "face". Reaching up to a small switch next to the head of the suit, and flicked it, flipping open the mask. His face was horribly malformed, with the springlocks forcing his mouth into a eternal scream, also keeping his eye open. His skin had gone from its almost lush pale-ish tan to a dead white, with spring locks all over his face. His neck was ripped wide open, exposing the endo spine in the back. Nixus noticed how tall he was, a full 8'7. He tried to say something, but all that came out was broken static. Reaching into his neck, he pulled out a broken voice box, coated in blood and almost completely shattered.
He couldn't believe it. He knew he was dead, but he felt alive. Looking over at Mary's corpse, he walked over to it and opened the suits head. His heart felt a pang in it, looking at how mutilated her face was. He had to admit, he had always had a crush on her, as she was one of his few actual friends. Moving away, he looked down at himself, taking in the view of what his unwanted coffin looked like. He slumped to the floor, looking at his hands. Then, a metallic ting! Sounded from the safe room door, alerting Nixus. Standing, he walked to the door, pressed a few buttons on a keypad on the side wall, and opened the door.
I am not sorry for this cliffhanger. Also, sorry for the horrible explanation for Nixus's suit, as of recently TDA:R has drained me, just a bit. If anyone has a FNAF OC they would like to see in this story, please do send them to me. As of now, this will be the form for OCs.
Name:
Age:
Hight:
Species (human or animatronic or ghost):
If animatronic, what type of suit (Springlock, new age, funtime):
Appearance:
Personality (must be a detailed personality, not a list of words.):
Abilities (short range teleportation, A.I manipulation, ETC):
Backstory:
Soul's name:
Soul's backstory:
This is a pretty simple format for anyone to follow. Anyways, please do send a OC, as right now, the stock characters are just a tad bit boring, eh?
Anyways, this is FXCF, and you have just read chapter two of "HWWAPOH:R".
(Holy fuck that acronym.)