Thank-you Colourful Darkness! Its great to hear from you again!
I am waiting with bated breath to see what you think, it's tragic, but I think you'll like were I go with this.
This is the next chapter, hope you like it-and to Ashley Davidson, thanks for adding this to your Favorites!
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Enjoy!
Elverthenia clutched her shaking shoulders.
Her legs quavered as she sat in her golden bed, the breeze kissing the curtains draping from the four carved posts. The picture that enveloped her legs glinted in the light as she shook.
If only she could see him again. Maybe she would be strong enough. Maybe she could last a few more hours.
She dared not tell anyone, the consequences for loving a fairy from the Other Side were fatal. She wouldn't last long anyway, but she would risk death without seeing him again. She risked that either way, but there was a chance she could say goodbye.
A crystal tear streamed down her broken face. She didn't want sympathy, just love. The picture that crawled up her limbs was already fading, she was dying, and she knew it.
The golden curtains hanging from her bed danced in the gentle breeze. Maybe she would die here. Elverthenia lent over to close them, if she died here, she could at least make it peacefully. Maybe if Leasterin found her she could tell Delthrond and he could grieve for her, and stroke her hair, and wet it with his tears.
She clutched the fabric. As she pulled the fabric slowly tore, and she fell.
She fell into the soft carpet, the gold fabric billowing like a cloud around her ashen face, until she was lying in a sea of shimmering gold. The pattern on her legs faded till it was an ashen blue. Her lips, that once were as red and rubies quivering with the words lying on her lips: Eltharine, Elshronea, Shawerndai Hurmakandia, Lothlorinda.
She suddenly gasped, her eye's wide. And slowly her head fell back into the pillow of gold, her last dying words in her own tongue:
Eldone adonia, Lothloria marcondia.
Delthrondai Eldone adonia.
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