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this chap will be LONGER. Anyway my first commenter is
GUEST he/she said: it seems u made mistakes like mairajane is supposed to
be mirajane anyway the story is great
Thank you for your comment
Also thanks for the hint on the mistakes my spellcheck is like so jacked up! I
will try my best to catch the mistakes
the second commenter is maixnaru love he/she said:
it's
really good but can you separate the paragraphs because otherwise it doesn't
give me want to read but it's great for a starting
Thank u I totally forgot to do that
bad me but thanks for the feedback
the third commenter is loveprincess he/she said:well i wanna read more ! so good luck
THANK U I really will try my best
oh and I am going to start writing in 1st person so yeah.
RECAP-
''Anyway I think I am catching a cold''.'' Wait Luce should I NO'' yelled Lucy as she answered Natsu's
question before he could even finish it. ''Okay'' answered Natsu clueless to the
hurt in Lucy's voice. He turned and faced the guild with a smile on his face.
But, all he saw was there backs facing away from him in shame. ''What'' asked Natsu?
END OF RECAP
I can't believe that he said that ugh I…I never should of thought I could…CLANK! 'What was that I thought as I slowed down my pace? I slowly crept around the corner only to see Natsu jump through my window and knock down a vase.''That Natsu I am so go to kill''… wait wasn't he at the guild when I left! ''WOW ninja Natsu''! I couldn't help but smile at my remark. Even though they did kick me of the team they would always still be my friends my nakama. I let a tiny smile grace my lips.
''WAIT'' what am I thinking that bum just brook into my house again! With an evil
grin I opened my door ready to kill a special someone and his cat!
''LUCY''! a flying blue exceed tackled my chest and started to talk about how weird
I am. I slowly looked down we looked at each other for at least 5 seconds
before he cried out to Natsu because I was scary.
I slowly wiped my head up so me and Natsu were face to face. ''Natsu'' I asked in the sweetest voice I ''1
could muster. ''Yes Lucy'' Natsu replied while slowly backing onto the wall. ''I was wondering why you were in my house''. ''Well you see I wanted to take a nap and your bed is supper soft and all so''… ''SO YOU DECIDE BREAKING AN ENTRY IS WHAT YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO DO''! Natsu I said softly. ''Yeah'' he replied. I will give youto the count of 5 to get out my house.
over to the bathroom to take a nice relaxing bath.
For some reason they always cleared my mind. I hopped in the bath and let me worries wash away. I smiled at myself
Natsu is so right I am weird. Only a weirdo wouldn't be supper mad at their friends for leaving them off the team. I understood what Natsu was thinking and I would have done the same thing. But, it still hurt and Natsu is to dense to I just have to wait till Thursday and see how the new team Natsu's mission
went.
I woke up the next morning felling rejuvenated. ''Wow it's so hot this… NATSU WHAT ARE YOU DOING STOP BREAKING IN MY HOUSE AND STOP TRYING TO TAKE NAPS IN MY BED''! With that I hopped out of
my bed and did a Lucy kick knocking him on the floor. ''Dwang iwits woshe im sworry''(dang it lucy im sorry)said Natsu who was currently on the floor with a hand over his nose. I couldn't help but laugh I did just scare the crap out of
Natsu. I only thought Erza could do that. ''Darn it Lucy that kick hurt'' Natsu added while standing up. I was only over here to ask if you wanted to play ninja after I came back from my mission. ''Ninja hum I don't think so you don't realize
it but you hurt my feelings yesterday''. ''I did''? asked Natsu while taking a seat
and grabbing an apple. ''Ok you just pushed a button there''. ''LUCY KICK AGAIN''.
''That's what you get you freeloader''! ''Natsu you really are dense''. I had to
laugh at him when he was set flying out the window and yet I wanted to cry.
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you think please review next update will be Monday so see you then