Ok so here is chapter 2. Thank you for all of the reviews, I wasn't sure if anyone would like this story or not but thank you so much for all of the encouragement. Shout out to xxfluffedxx for being my first reviewer (your comment made me laugh too :) )
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters (Btw- if anyone has done a story like this before (which I have read a few) I give you credit for any parts of the plot line similar to yours)
Tris Pov
I swing the doors open with a woosh and take in the sight before me. Everyone is laughing and joking, throwing food or stuffing their faces with dauntless cake. I hear a small giggle and look down at Kitty, who has a grin plastered across her cute little face.
"This looks like fun. Come on Mommy!" With that she drags me into the cafeteria. We make our way over to the food line and grab some cake because I have missed it since I left. Think about it- 3 years without dauntless cake! Torture! I reach down and pick Kitty up, placing her on my hip, the take our two plates in my free hands.
"Where are we gonna sit Mommy, I don't know anyone here." I hear a little whisper in my right ear.
"Don't worry Kitty. I know lots of these people" I say to her, whilst scanning the cafeteria for my group of friends. I didn't tell anyone that I was coming back today because I thought it would be a surprise. A sudden worry pops into my head- what I they don't recognise me? I mean I look completely different than 3 years ago, I have a kid and I'm a pop star… I guess we will just have to wait and see. I notice them on our usual table, all gathered around Christina and Will. I wonder what's happened.
I make my way over to the table getting a few looks and gasps as I walk past them-they must recognise me. I just continue walking with purpose towards my friends; keeping my head down. As I arrive at the table I decide to sit in my old place, that isn't occupied, and everyone turns to look at me.
"Excuse me, but that seat is for our friend, so I'm sorry you can't sit here" Uriah says solemnly. I smirk and pull off my sunglasses I was currently wearing.
"Uri! How could you not remember me?! Your good friend! What tragedy!" I say dramatically, with mock hurt. He gasps and runs round the table, engulfing me in a huge bear hug. I squeal as everyone else does the same.
"Mommy who are these people?" I hear Kitty ask me after everyone has settled down.
"Well, sweetie, these are Mommy's friends. This is your Auntie Christina, Uncle Will, Auntie Marlene and Uncle Uriah" I say as I point to each one in turn. Uriah squats down beside Kitty and not so quietly whispers in her ear.
"But between you and me, I'm the best" She giggles and nods her head with a big smile. We all talk until near the end of lunch, and I found out that Christina and Will are expecting a baby, Marlene and Uriah are engaged, Shauna and Zeke are married with a 1 year old daughter and Tobias is just the same as he was before I arrived at Dauntless, 4 years ago- miserable. I'm glad I came back to Dauntless, not because I'm touring, but because it is my real true home. I feel as though I should bring Kitty up here because she really fits in with her stubborn attitude and fierce strength for a 3 year old.
I check the clock on the wall and see that it is time to kick off my tour with a surprise concert in the cafeteria. I lean across the tabe and whisper to everyone what I have planned. They all nod along and sit back to watch the show unfold. Someone runs up behind my and passes me a microphone. I step up onto the table as the music starts to play my newest song Jump (A/N: this song is by Rihanna so I take no credit for it). The lights go off and everyone cheers as a red spotlight focuses on me. As the song kicks in I start to sing.
Tell me that you love me when you know you don't love me
But I guess I guess I guess it's all good
I find Tobias' face in the crowd and sing the first verse looking him dead in the eyes. Zeke sits next to him and cheers when he realises it's me.
You can play the game, I'ma still do my thing
Ain't no better way for it to be put
When you do them other girls I bet they be wondering
Why you always call my name
You think I'm gonna wait around
I ain't got all day
I start to walk along my table and step onto another one.
You don't need another lover
Don't you let it go
I already got it covered,
Let the others know
I stand still and the lights star flashing blue, green and red as the chorus starts.
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
I start dancing on the table with my backing dancers either side of me.
Jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, jump...
I walk up to Tobias and squat down in front of him; singing to him. His eyes widen as it clicks that I'm Tris. His mouth goes agape and I shut it before standing up and walk onto another table.
Think I give a damn, boy don't you know who I am?
I ain't running around chasing no dude
Think somebody else like me gon' come around
Boy you got it misunderstood
Put it in your face but you're actin' all scared
Like you can't recognize a good thing
Now that you got a chance
Tell me what it's gon' be?
You don't need another lover
Don't you let it go
I already got it covered,
Let the others know
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, jump...
I keep dancing and singing.
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
If you want it let's do it
Ride it, my pony,
My saddle is waitin',
Come and, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump on it, jump-jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump, jump, jump on it
Jump on it, jump-jump on it
As the music fades away, the lights come back on and everyone cheers. I jump off the table, out of breath, and walk back to my table.
"Wow Tris! You have an awesome voice and you totally showed Four who's boss. You certainly aren't that little abnegation girl I met 4 years ago!" Christina shouts at me with a huge smile. Everyone agrees and we all get up to leave.
Kitty and I walk back to Christina and Will's apartment and chill there until Kitty is ready to go to bed. When she is asleep, Chris and I gossip and chat about everything and nothing- something I haven't been able to do in years. Spending quality time with friends is brilliant. At about 11pm, I carry a sleeping Kitty back to our apartment and tuck her into bed, before climbing into my own and falling asleep- awaiting the next day.
Hiya. So that was chapter 2, I always pictured Tris coming back to Dauntless and being a really good singer, so hope you liked it. Please review and let me know what you think.
.turtle