I rewrote it.
Chapter 2 Left behind.
"Hey guys doesn't Anthony come home today".A man with orange hair ask his sister and friend."Now that you mention it yeah what gives he should have been here by know!"The black rough looking man answered his best friend."Do you think he's hurt or dead Seth?The young beautiful women ask her older brother."I don't know but he should have come back home by now!" "Well Seth I bet he's dead or pissing himself one of the two!"The rough man answered with a cold voice."Noah he can't be dead he's too young." "Rachel no offence but I think Noah might be right."Rachel started to cry on the couch."Well you two can morn him without a reason or we can see if he's okay'. Noah made Rachel stop crying with his idea."Noah let's see if he made it." Seth grabbed his car keys on the dresser."Noah don't you think Anthony's alive?"The red head ask her boyfriend."Sure baby now no more tears lets find that maniac." Noah answered her even though he wasn't sure.
The three friends drove off toward the army base."Hey guys." "Yes Noah".The two siblings asked at the same time."Don't you guys ever have a bad feeling about this?"Noah asked his best friends."Sorry Noah but no".His girlfriend answered."Noah are you sick."Seth asked with concern."No never mind".There's something wrong here I could feel it or am I just crazy Noah's thoughts occupied him for the entire trip over there,while Seth concentrated on driving Rachel was sound asleep in the back of the car soon they arrived at the base.
"Okay you two don't cry on me now."Noah told Seth and Rachel while entering the base."Excuse me do you have a appointment here?"The patrol guard ask we want to know about a friend he was suppose to come home today."Seth told the guard a bit nervous."Which unit is he in?"The patrol guard asked without warning."Um do you guys know which unit he was in?" "Unit 13 Seth god pay attention."Noah said a little pissed off."Oh unit 13 is to the right of this building."The patrol guard points to a large brick building."Thanks."The group said at the same time.
"Excuse me Commander there's three people who would like to see you." "Send them in Private Jones."The Commander was in no mood for losing his only son to those damn me Sir but do you know the where abouts of Anthony Destine?"Rachel asked in a lovely tone."Can you come back later?"The Commander asked."No just tell us now where the hell Anthony is dammit!" "Noah settle down!"Seth told his friend."Sorry about my boyfriend we just want to know if he's okay." "How do you know Anthony I thought he was a orphan?" "Were like family but he's just a friend that lives with us."Seth told the Commander."Well Anthony is still working sorry I'll tell him you came by." "Thanks Sir tell the kid I said hi."Noah told the Commander. The three left the base and went home."Private Jones prepare a rescue chopper for tomorrow."The Commander ordered."Yes sir."Private Jones replied.