ya i re-did the 2nd chapter. didnt really like it so hope you enjoy it now! (I just changed some things)

"…Yong?" I looked at him a little suspicious, "YONG!" I hugged him

"I thought you were dead Mulan." I stopped hugging him and backed away.

"you left me here. No one ever came looking for me! Why didn't you come to save me! What did I do to deserve this? Did you know what they put me through?" I was starting to get hysterical.

"Mulan we did search for you, but there was no sigh of you for miles. Until a couple of months after the last ransom, we got another letter that said we took to long and that they killed you. Mama wasn't the same when she heard that you died." Yong sighed and put his hand on my shoulder, "she was never the same. She was always depressed and never left the house. She died a month after she heard that you were dead." I started to cry and Yong held me tight. After about 10 minutes of me crying he raised my chin, "you look so thin. Do they feed you?'

"yes, but not much, only the leftovers they had from their meal, which isn't much."

"Come back to camp with me and eat some food there."

"no I can't the Huns will be waking up in a couple of minutes"

"I doubt it, its only 2 o'clock. I promise if you want to go back, I'll have you back before they wake up. Now please come with me to get something to eat." I obeyed him, not because he was my brother, but because I was starving. I didn't have anything to eat for the past two days.

When we got to the camp, there were only a couple of men up.

"Captain," one of the other captains called, "who is this that you are bring to the camp? You know we can't have anyone here except for soldiers. We can't risk the Hun people seeing us."

"relax Shang, it's just my sister"

"… sister? Umm I didn't know you had two sisters Yong."

"I don't, this is Mulan."

"Mulan? Isn't that the one that went missing and was presumed to be dead?"

"I was presumed to be dead because no one came to find me!" I yell at him.

Shang looked at me and then at Yong, "are you sure this is her? When I last saw her she was more delicate and pleasant to be around."

"I WAS! You try being a prisoner of the Huns for three years and still have a pleasant attitude towards people that were supposed to be looking for me!"

"Woh woh, did you say the Huns captured you?"

"Yes I did."

"Crap!" He turned towards Yong, "WhAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING? SOMEONE COULD HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING HER!"

"That wouldn't be possible Shang,"

"and why wouldn't that be possible little princess."

"because they trust me not to run away."

Before Shang could say anything else Yong told him that he was going to get me some food.

"I'll take her Yong, you've been working all this time, go get some sleep."

Shang and I walked into the mess tent, we were talking or should I say he was talking and I was daydreaming. I was just watching his lips then his eyes. He was perfect in every way, except he was very serious.

"Mulan," he laid his hand on my, "I've missed you so dearly." We have known each other for quite some time now, I met him when I was younger and Yong came back from the academy on break. Shang lived not to far from us. We liked each other, but knew it wasn't allowed, but it didn't matter to us. I was ten then and he… well lets just say he was older.

"When you were taken, I was lost."

"Shang," I pulled my hand away from his, "I have changed, I now know who cares about me, and it's not you. YOU the one person I thought loved me, deserted me." I got up and turned around. He came up from behind me and hugged me.

"It wasn't like that Mulan. I looked everywhere for you, and so did everyone else. I knew you weren't dead and when I could I would come looking for you. oh I wish I would have known you were here. Mulan I'm deeply sorry for everything that happened. I would have taken your spot if I had the chance. I loved you three years ago, and I still do."

I turned around and looked at him, "everyday, every night, every time I was beaten I only though of you. you were the only thing that kept me alive. All I thought was returning back to you." he leaned down and kissed me passionately. I know it was against the rules, and it was forbidden between two unmarried people, but we didn't care, no one knew it either because everyone was asleep. I broke away a little later.

"Shang I have to go back, they'll kill whatever I have left of a family. I will return whenever I can. I am considered a Hun there, and they now trust me. I am part of their family now, but not by choice. I will come back every so often."

I started to leave, but he grabbed my wrist and pulled me back into a deep passionate kiss, and then I left. I got back before anyone woke up, and in a few hours I would be working.

In the morning my Hun mother woke me up, and told me to take a bath and get dressed, and to meet her in the main quarters. I did, but I was a little confused. What was going to happen, did someone know I left camp? But when I walked in the Hun leader was waiting there and his wife, my Hun mother was standing next to him smiling.

"You wanted to see me sir?"

"Yes my dear. You have been somewhat part of our family, and it is only right to make you entirely a part of the Hun family. I have found you a husband." I was shocked, what was happening, he called out my future husband. Shan-Yu. He was tall, masculine and gentle looking, but scary. I turned to Badivano (bed-i-von-o), "please sir, I do not wish to marry." He got angry and yelled at me, "YOU SELFACE LITTLE BRAT! I have spared you life, raised you as my own and you refuse to accept this offer I have made for you? well I'm sorry too, because you will marry Shan-Yu whether you like it or not! he is your husband to be!"

I ran out of there crying. I will never be able to go home. I didn't know where I was going, if I was being followed, all I knew was one person that would hold me and comfort me, my one true love… I saw Shan working with the troops, and I didn't want to interrupt, so I went to find my brother. I found him in the mess tent, I stood there while he was laughing with his buddies, he didn't notice me until one of the soldiers looked up at he. Yong turned around and ran up to me and embraced me. He led me out of the tent to talk. I truly didn't want to talk. As soon as we got out of the mess tent and a couple of feet away I just broke down and cried. Shang saw in the distance, and told Ling to take control of the troops and he'd be back. He ran up to me and Yong, I just looked up and fell into his arms.

"They-They are marring me off to the Hun Leader's second in command." I said. Shang pulled me into a tight embrace; there was no way he was going to let me go without a fight. I knew in my heart that I had to marry the Hun; Shang had no chance against Shan- Yu. Yong took over Shang's training knowing that we love each other. He knew that there was something between us just before I disappeared.

"When are you married Mulan?" choked

I stared at the ground for a while and then answered him; "tomorrow" I could tell he was upset. We were supposed to be married as soon as I was old enough, and now it will never happen. Our fathers knew each other from the war. They were best of friends and then my father was wounded. "Mulan," he broke me out of my trance he lifted my chin, "I lost you once, and that broke my heat, if I lose you again it'll kill me. I refuse to lose you especially to a Hun."

"Shang even when I marry Shan-Yu I will always be your heart and soul."

"But what happens if that's not good enough? What happens if I want more than your heart and soul?"

"Shang, stop it. You're just making this harder for me. You think I want to let you go? You were the only thing that kept me alive." I turned away from him to go back to my home, I turned my head, "all I know is that tomorrow during the wedding, and after I will pretend it's you." I started to walk away when he yelled, "wait" I turned around and he walked up to me and smashed his lips onto mine, he held me as close as possible and passionately kissed me.

"I'll get you back before he does anything to you. I promise."

"Please Shang, don't come to save me. He'll kill you." he was about to say something when I put a finger up to his lips and kissed him one last time, then ran back.

"Where were you Mulan?" asked Badivano when he saw me returning. "You have been gone all day."

"I'm sorry sir, I had to think. It is my wedding tomorrow, and I-I just need to think."

"you know if you decide to run, we will track you down."

"Yes sir I do. I have no intensions of running, I tell you now."

"Good, now go in the kitchen and make us some food."

I bowed my head and left. While I was boiling some dumplings Shan Yu came up behind me as close to me as possible and started to kiss my neck. He started to touch my breasts and then his hands moved to unbutton my clothes when I started to struggle and told him to get off of me.

"Now, now is that how you treat your husband?"

"your not my husband yet, so keep your hands to yourself" I spat at him

"You'll soon be mine." He yelled and walked out.

The day sadly came, and there was no way I could get out of it. When I walked up to Shan Yu I knew my life came to an end. I thought of killing myself many times, but decided against it. If I killed myself there would be no way I would be with Shang.

The last part of the speech came up "You may now kiss her"

Shan Yu said, "Now my precious your all mine." He smiled

"You only have half of me. You may have me physically but you'll never have my heart and soul. I will never love you." I spat back at him.

"Ha I don't care! You're my wife I can do what ever I please, and I will eventually get you to love me." He pulled me close to him and was about to kiss me when I heard a familiar voice yell, "DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH HER!"

it was Shang, all I heard was, "Seize him!" and then Shan Yu pressed his lips hard on mine. The ceremony was complete. Shang saw that and he was hart broken. I stared at him, and then one of Badivano's men disarmed him, I yelled, "NO!" and tried to run to stop him, but Shan Yu held me. They knocked him out.

Everyone cheered that Shan Yu was married, and that they caught an imperial soldier. They tied him up in a tent and Shan Yu dragged me off to his tent.

It was late that night when I left my husband's tent, the entire camp was passed out from all the partying they did. I knew that if I didn't do something they would kill Shang the next day. I snuck into the prisoner's tent and there was Shang tied up. He looked so sad, almost this betrayal expression. I touched the side of his face, "it wasn't my fault. If only you listened to me, you would be safe. My life is over, but yours has begun and I cant let you throw it away for me." I kissed his lips and he awoke to find me smiling.

"Did-Did he touch you?" he asked, I ignored the question, "Your hurt Shang, let me clean up your wounds." I cut the ropes off and I was about to leave to get some medical stuff to clean his wounds when he grabbed my wrist and made me look at him. "Did he touch you, Mulan?" in a stern voice, I just turned my head and tried to catch some of the tears before the fell, but they disobeyed me. And worst of all Shang saw, "not yet thankfully. They were drinking all night. I was able to postpone it due to this celebration of capturing an imperial soldier. They drank themselves silly. He pulled me into a embrace and I cried into his chest "please forget about me and leave."

"I'm not going anywhere without you, I lo-"

"Awww having another reunion I see" I turned around to see Shan Yu standing in front of the entrance.