Let's me say this first: IMO, Sherry was the one with a COLD character, not Haibara and Shiho.

Sherry was trained by Black Organization to erase all her emotions and be a hard-hearted killer (though she was only a scientist).

Haibara was tormented by her guilt and her fear. She didn't trust anyone and always kept a distance from the others (Dr.Agasa, the childrens and Shinichi), feared that the Black Organization would harm them in searching to her. She even thought that she did not deserved their pity and envied the pureness of Ran (she called her 'the Angel').

Shiho was a character that alwas be hidden in Sherry's heart. Thank to the childrens and Dr.Agasa, Haibara slowly opened up and revealed her true self. She liked to tease Shinichi, enjoyed being with the childrens and sometimes even show cares for them.

So, I don't want you readers to be confused by the total change of these late chapters from the first one. It was her overwhelming emotions at the end of her dark past and now she had the chance to start a new life. She was free.

Of couse, this was only my opinion so you can see it as an OCCness if you want!


Love Theme 2: Meet You For The First Time

Character: Shinichi/Shiho

(Unfortunately no! He did not already love her in this chapter, I tell you. Did he?)


"Hello."

He stared at her. Do I really know this girl, he wondered. It wasn't like he hasn't seen her true form before, yet it was the first time he actually met her real self. He didn't expect it to be so…

"What? See something you like?" Even her smirk was different. It was no longer arrogant, sarcatic as he always thought, but truly relaxed and playful. Not mentioned cute.

Cute? Where did that odd thought came from? That was something so unlike the Sherry or Haibara he knew, while it undoubtedly suited this young woman in front of him. In her full grown feature, she wore a red shirt and a simple white skirt, which were borrowed from Ran. The dark sign of her past was nowhere to be seen, her strawberry-blond hair pratically glowed, her blue eyes showed hope and light, the scars were slowly fading in her pale skin. All make her looked like a normal teenager girl.

And he surprisingly liked this one.


"Why didn't you tell me youwere just 17 years old? You're even younger than me, you liar." He smiled.

"But I already said that I were around your age, didn't I?" She smirked, "Don't you forget that I am a genius."

The total change of air around her amazed him. He felt light-hearted.

"Your appearance may be different but you're still a brat, Haibara."

Silence.

He wondered if he has said anything wrong.


"I'm not Haibara anymore." She said, looking directly at his eyes.

"Then who are you?"

She smiled brightly and he blushed.


"Shiho Miyano."


God, my note is even longer than the chapter! Don't worry it's just a break and I'm afraid that this chapter was worse than the first one > The next one will be much longer and I'm trying to make it not too sappy! I'm still new so if you guys have any idea or suggestion, don't hesitate to tell me: I will very appreaciate

Thank everyone for your useful and lovely reviews! Please keep review!

Momo CiceroneYou think so? Me too! Haibara is so much much much better than Ran in every ways (well, maybe except the violent side ). The only problem is even though he is the main character, I don't like Shinichi much. So Suichi/Shiho, Gin/Shiho, Hakuba/Shiho (if that possble, I like him ) is fine with me too.

nakhodchivost– Thank for you advice. I will try to write better and it would be nice if you can drop me some more suggestions. English is my bad point you know TT

SN 1987A – Wow! I'm so honored! I really like your stories, especially 'Galatea' and 'The Antidote'. Keep going!

AnnithaAnother great author! I've read your story 'Gratitude' and it was good. I hope this story won't disappoint you and if it unfortunately does, could you kindly give some advices? I still have so much more to learn.

Claude le noctambule - It was a serie one-shots. I hope that you will like the others too! Keep reading will u?

KaitouKudou - I know, English is actually my, mind you, third language beside French as the second . So please bear my horrible grammar or can you teach me a little?