Hello, this is the second chapter, thanks to all who have made an effort to read and thanks to Jessica; she was the ONLY ONE to review! Thank you, I appreciate what you said ^^ anyway, enjoy chapter two, and tell me if you ABSOLUTELY DETEST the Hiei Keiko.
Blood stained the smooth skin and the white shirt, his cheeks had a well defined five-finger mark, and he gaped at his ex-lover in disbelief and anger, the detective was as surprised as the fox. He raised his voice, "what the hell did you do that for?!"
"You want to know?" Hiei snapped.
"You think?" Yusuke added sarcastically, rolling his eyes.
"Hn" he handed to him, the piece of paper that he had received.
Meanwhile, tears trickled down Kurama's cheeks, "if this wasn't for a good reason, you're going to pay for it"
Good Friend,
You would be quite disappointed to know that your lover has been back-stabbing you, with the detective. They used to 'hang out' at times.
Don't believe me? Go check it or yourself!
Yours truly,
Well-wisher
"That's NOT true!" Yusuke protested heavily.
"And why should I believe you?!" Hiei
"Well, why should you believe this 'well-wisher'?"
"I have seen it or myself! Hn reason why I ditched Kurama"
The redhead looked away, "not true" he mumbled yet again.
"But at that point of time," Hiei continued, "you were just dating..."
Yusuke raised a brow, "I don't remember dating Kurama"
The jaganishi ignored him, "But now, you have CROSSED THE LIMITS!" rage clearly visible I his eyes.
"Even if I did date Yusuke," Kurama added, "and as you say, 'Cross the limits', what's it to you?"
Hiei snapped, "you're my..." he bit his lip to stop discontinue his sentence.
"Hiei, you have no right to tell me what to do," His next utterance caused him much pain deep in his heart, but he went on saying, "you mean nothing to me..."
Hiei looked like he was about to spill his tears, he could never as much as imagine that the ox could ever stop loving him. While Yusuke's jaw dropped, he didn't think Kurama would lose his calm that day, he's usually not so angry.
The fox let the parking area with a frown and let the two raven haired boys gaping at him.
Hiei entered the party with a "hn", his rage and trauma wad effectively affecting the spectators. And while in such rage, a mishap in inevitable, the same happened in this case.
He went up to a place where he could attain the attention of all and grabbed the brunette by the wrist and closed the gap between their lips. Keico blushed wide-eyed; she searched her brain for an answer when she finally decided to kiss Hiei back.
But as she did, yusuke entered, his entrance time couldn't be more perfect but couldn't be as imperfect either.
And what he felt then was not describable with mere words, he felt not only rage, but also trauma, like all he had was lost within a faction of a mere second, he felt like a victim of treason. And finally he felt that if the monster in black lives, life could not be called life again, the reflex action followed:
He picked up the nearest flower vase and aimed at Hiei, but a thing happened which no one foretold: Keico was the victim.
Yusuke's very blood refused to flow through his veins, his heart wanted to stop. And his brain wanted to give in. he gathered up all his courage and fled from the scene.
And at the door, he uttered, "What have I done...?"
Hiei was the one to call the ambulance.
He held her hand all through the route to the hospital. It was a case of coma.
Of course Kurama heard of the 'incident' and he was deeply concerned too, but his pride stood as a barrier, he could never speak to, or even lay eyes on Hiei, not after what he had done.
The other day I was reading a fanfic called "the crow's call" by 'Yami no kokoro', she writes so awesome that it makes me feel like such a looser, you guys should try reading her fics they're awesome!
And please tell me if this fiction does sound like one written by a sleepyhead at midnight (because I wrote it during history lessons at school) if it does, then I would discontinue writing until I am good enough TT_TT
Anyway, hope you enjoyed it ^^