"TALKING"
Thinking
"Kyuubi talking"
Kyuubi thinking
'Exasperation or emphases'
Updated...(meaning fixed some errors.
Here's ch2
Naruto was sleeping when the sun hit his eyes.
"Go away." The sun seemed to shine brighter as if saying 'make me'.
"Damn it, I said go away." There was a poof in his room, but naruto didn't hear it.
"Go away bitch" A vein popped in some ones head.
"WHAT DID YOU CALL ME!?"Naruto fell out of his bed and stood up like kyuubi was a general.
"Noting I was just talking to the sun." Some how the sun shown in naruto's face temporally blinding him.
"Let's go naruto. After naruto dressed in his orange jumpsuit he met kyuubi at the training grounds.
"Ugh. Don't you have another suit?" Kyuubi hated orange so she relly let naruto have it. $56 to exact.
"Go into town and buy new cloths."
"What's wrong with this?" Asked naruto seeming confused.
It's offending to my eyes
it makes you stand out which is bad unless your bait
It says I'm an idiot who can't dress himself. And
It screams 'Here I am come kill me cause I'm to stupid to where ninja cloths,' to all your enmies.Which is the entire village. Naruto weighed his options and found she was right. And he could buy ramen when he went for cloths
"Alright I'll get new cloths." He started to walk away when
"AND DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT RAMAN"
DAMN, DAMN, DAMN, naruto mentally cursed for not running from her right away.
In town naruto sees a clothing shop. He also sees the owner glaring at him. He goes to the next one and the owner glares. That routine go on till he passes the academy and just his luck there learning how to due henge's. After seeing a few kids due it he transform into a dark haired boy who scowled at him before the adults said to get away form the 'precious' boy.
(Can you guess who it is?) Naruto then pulls out all his sorrow to put up a good act. Then he starts crying as he enters the shop.
"What's wrong sasuke?"
"Sniff some guys beat me up and tried to steal my money sniff for cloth snort but then they threw it in my face and sniff sniff said I'm a dirt bag like my brother."
Shopkeeper: what monsters would hurt the Uchiha I'll ask him later?"
"Don't worry sasuke-kun you can have everything in the store half price"
"Th-thank you" naruto said still sobbing. He picked out a few cloths and left in:
A blue shirt with flames on the edges. Fingerless gloves with gold and sliver ying yang symbol. Black pants with an orange dragon on the left side (It's orange cause he still wants a bit of orange on his clothes.) and regular sandals.
"Thank you kind sir I'll be sure to let other know of your business.
Such a sweet boy unlike that demon naruto
"Bye sasuke come back anytime." Naruto went back to kyuubi who also brought him clothes. She had forgotten he was hated and would be kicked out of every shop.
" hey naruto I though you were going to get kicked out of the store so I brought you some equipment, but it looks like you did good so I'll teach you 2 new justus.
"Really, Alright!!"
Okay first one is Katon: Kitsune Fouke Bakushin (Fire Type: Fox Mask Dash Technique) it makes a fox head at the end of a rope that'll keep going till you stop it or it's put out with water or earth or another katon attack.
"How do I do it?
"First take charaka and compress it. Then release it to get fire. Focus that into a fox head and then blow it out.
"Alright I'll do this in 2 hrs." and naruto tried to due it. It took him 1hr to get the fire and 2 to get it in a fox head shape. 4hrs later.
"I remember some one saying something about doing this in 2hrs." As kyuubi was talking naruto had done the attack. Now that he had it done he gloated witch was cut short by the fact that it took him 4 hrs instead of 2. And that he was covered in black soot which made it hard to breath.
"Anyway the next move is Rasengan. You focus your charaka into a ball that is swirling. She showed him it on a tree and it left a perfectly sphere hole with twist marks.
It takes him 5 days to fully learn the Rasengan and naruto is happy he's finny learned it...even if he can only hold it for 8 seconds.
"Nice naruto. And the day before your birth day. Well tomorrow I'll tell you about your family."
"Finally! One more day and I'll know about my family."
Yeah I just hope you're still the same after words. "So now for a justu you can use while training."
"Another. YA!!"
"This isn't an attack; you can use it for holding an enemy in a confined space or for secret training so no one can copy your training style. The justu is already on so you don't have to worry about using it right now. It's very easy to do. It's called Transportation barrier no jutsu! When you use it make sure the outside is blurry. If it's clear that means it's not working. When it is on, anyone who tries to enter will have there memory erased and get transported to the other side."
"ASWOME!! Now I know why this place always looks weird." Naruto had always seen the blurry area, but he thought it was from exhaustion. And the fact that that it confides people means loads of black mail.
I can take pictures of people doing embarrassing things in front of them and they'll never know. Oh the black mail I can due. Naruto mentally snickers while kyuubi screams for him to pay attention.'
"What?"
"I said there's another justu."
"Oh. What is it?"
"It's called 'Kitsune Bi no Kowaku! (Enchantment of the Fox Tail 1'"
"Level 1? There's more?"
"Yes infact there's four. 1 is activated with pain. You gain heightens senses. Ears and eyes become fox like. Nails grow to claws and teeth grow to canines. She then notices his eyes were dazed and it was getting dark out.
"It's late can I go home now?"
"Yeah. I need to pre pare for tomorrow. Bye naruto-kun." Kyuubi had realized what she had said and blushed. Naruto caught it to and blushed.
"Well see yah kyuubi-chan" that time was intentional and kyuubi left so naruto wouldn't see her blush even more.
Man I can't wait till tomorrow. I'll find out about my parents at last. The thought of finding out about his parents even if there dead it's still nice to know what they where like. Naruto was happy. Not the fake mask happy, but the, it's raining money I'm rich, happy. In fact he was so in thought he didn't notice the guy he bumped into. Let's call this guy……..Tom Nook.
"YOU FUCKING DEMON WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TRYING TO DO." I don't think I need to put in explanation points in his sentence.
"I was walking and didn't pay attention so I bumped into you" Gone were the days when naruto apologized.
He's relished that they'll hit him either way because they hate kyuubi. They hate him.
"HOW DARE YOU SPEAK WITHOUT PREMMISSION? (PAUSE) THAT'S IT FOR NOT APOLIGIZING YOU'RE GETTING A BEATING BRAT!" Tom Nook instantly punched naruto in the face sending him back 5 feet which really isn't far. Many adults watched in interest and a few kids, (hinata her father were present hinata still has her crush on him but is too scared to stop his beating.) Also were present and did not understand why naruto has to be a trouble maker.
The man threw another punch. This time to naruto's gut which for a spilt second naruto felt Kitsune form begin to activate. He knew another punch would finish him off so he made an attack.
"Transportation barrier no jutsu!" Naruto appeared to have disappeared, but he just altered the justu so he could run.
"Not bad kyuubi you trained him well he was able to make a variation." The not so unknown voice said.
"Thanks, but he still has a long way to go till he's ready to be the next king". The adult ninja were surprised that the boy could do a justu. And the fact that the the justu could only be preformed by mid level genin. He was about to run when he relished if he went home he'd just be followed. Punch he'd stay still to long and lost concentration for the justu. He just got punched when it let down
"LITTLE BRAT. THINK YOU CAN HIDE BEHIND A WEAK THING LIKE THAT YOU UGLY PIECE OF SHIT!!" PUNCH. Naruto was now sure the next hit would revile his kitsune form. When he relished he was back in his mind.
"Hey kyuubi, Think I could get some help?" he said with his sly fox grin. Wow, he looks cute like that.
"Naruto, Sigh, I leave you alone for 5 min and look what you get into."
"Actually its 6 min and how I did I get here?"
"I pulled you here so I could show you a justu to stop that man because the crowd sure isn't."
"Thanks kyuubi-chan I owe you one."
"Don't thank me naruto. I love helping. I mean... Anyway the justu." kyuubi was embarrassed she almost told naruto her feelings. She didn't want him to know till he was told about his family.
Kitsune BI, Make sure you don't burn him to death. Your low on charaka and I don't want you passing out in front of murderous people.
"Alright. Thanks kyuubi-chan."
Naruto reappeared to take the rest of the punch.
Ouch. Damn I thought he hit me already. Oh well I've, got worse. Naruto "Hey UGLY"
"WHAT DID YOU CA-"
"KITSUNE-BI" A blue flame came out of naruto's mouth and burned the guy's skin, It didn't burn his clothe only heated them to the point of burning stinging the man further.
"AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" The man slumped unconscious on the floor. Every looked free fully a naruto.
"Well that was fun, but I think I'll fight wild animals and not drunks from now on." He said with a grin. Some people sweat dropped for naruto. He started going to the hokages office knowing he needed a location away from the village.