well this is in dire need of updating. XD so hre it is!

and thank you to al the reviewers.

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Fate has a funny way of working sometimes. Because the first person she saw stabding above her, who didn't even yell out to defend her, was Naruto. She blushed as he smiled and tried to help her up. The two were busy talking to notice Neji glaring at a certain Shikamaru. That is, until Shikamaru yelled again.

" Ino, Sakura!" he thought,

' how do i know their nbames anyway?' he shook his head. Sakura turned and asked,

" what?" He yelled,

" get Hinata away frok her cousin!" Ino looked confused until she saw that the Hyuuga heiress was crying. Sakura pulled Ino towards her and both took the girl to Sasuke's home. It was safe there and they wanted to visit anyway.

But Hinata wasn't sad. She was very, very happy. All her life this girl was treated so badly by other people and here was someone who didn't care she was an heiress or that somebody as rich as her family was could supposedly "defend herself" He helped. And she didn't even know him all that well. She turned once more to look at the boy she was talking to. Naruto-kun.

He smiled once mo0re and turned to yell at Neji and hold him back. She turned around and her eyes went all: O.O'' she asked timidly,

" W-where are we, Ino-san, Sakura-san?" They simply said that they were at Sau-kun's house and to not use suffixes unless it was chan. They were friends, after all. She blushed and nodded. Why were these people so nice to her? Nothing like at home.

Ino saw the Uchiha boy first. And then Itachi, who was talking to him about some jutsu he had learned today. Sakura and Ino ran up.

" Konichiwa, Uchia-san, konichiwa, Sauke-kuuuunnnn." You could practuacally see them melting. Hinata simply said,

" K-konichiwa, Uchiha-san's" Hinata bowed gracefully and lifted her eyes to see Itachi and everyone else staring at her like she was crazy.

" W-why...?" Itachhi was wondering why call them both uchiha-san. didn't she like Sasuke like all the other girls? Sasuke was the first to ask.

" one: why are you here and why weren't you saying sasuke-kuuunnn or something. Dont u like me? those 2 do." The first was explained by Sakura and the next by Hinata.

" Father has always taught me to be respectful in another's home, Uchiha-san. I can understand why other girls may like you, but I dont." Itachi just looked at her and smiled. Finally, some normal girl in Konoha Sasuke's age! he started plotting.

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back at the school

Neji smirked. It hadn't been easy to beat an entire classroom of boys, but now Hinata was gonna get it. He frowned, somethin thta seemed rather permanent since his father's death. He shook his head and made way to the Uchiha's home.

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Sasuke POV

" Hinata-chan!" I heard Shikamaru running towards the little heiress. She was adorable as she flinched and blushed t least 30 shades of red in under 3 seconds. wait did I just think adorable?!

The heat rising up to my cheeks, I turned and hoped my brother would help. He smirked but frowned at shikamaru. Hinata seemed to like him. Which was a problem.

Hinata said, "Hai, Shika-sama?" He reminded himself to worry about name calling later and said,

" go hide! your cousin is looking for you!" Hinata looked at Shikamaru and his bruises adorning his body. What had she done?! she shook her head feverently and said,

" I-iie. I hurt you, everyone. He's going to hurt everyone..." Itachi said to her quietly, so that nobody would hear him.

" I'll help you. But do me a favor first." She nodded but didn't hahve time to ask what the favor was. Neji was already bursting through the Uchiha gates.

He said in a sickeningly sweet voice,

" Hinata-chaaaannnn, come here." Hinata shivered and was about to simply comply when Sakura grabbed her arm and pulled her behind Sasuke. Sasuke looked at her and said,

" don;t worry about a thing, Hinata. My brother is going to help us." At this, ino and Sakura swooned. Hinata smiled and said,

" I really can't... Look at how I hurt shikamaru..." Ino ssaid to her,

" you didn't hurt him. Your cousin did." Sakura finished for her,

" and he's gonna pay." They all smiled at her before pulling her into the Uchiha home.

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" Itachi give me my cousin." The older Uchiha shook his head.

" Fine then. Byakugan!(sp?)" The Hyuuga said,

" Sharingan!"

and so it began.

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Ok i am not good fer the rest of the story line. so lets have a vote! what will the favor be?

How will the fight turn out?

what should they do?

what could make them forget?

and would that make it an M rated story?

ok so vote on that! the next votes decide the story line!

please R&R thnx