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Another thing, I am glad you all liked the main character, but he isn't made by me, all the four main characters and their background are made by 4fireking, and the idea of the story is made by him, since it was a challenge story, I only write the story and make the events, again thank you to all the readers who read the story
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Opening his eyes David found himself in a big castle like building. It looked weird and unfamiliar to him, but from its size he concluded that it must be a castle or a palace.
"Come on, let's go meet Koenma-sama," said an overly happy Botan as she entered the building. David followed the girl inside and stopped dead in his tracks when he saw the devil workers. Screaming, he rushed out trying to get away from the place, only to find that it was floating.
"What's up with all that noise?"
Turning around, David thought he would see another monster, but when he saw a floating toddler he laughed. A hit on the head made him shut up and then he fainted.
"Yare, yare."
Opening his eyes, David was greeted with the sight of the same toddler and he screamed again.
"Stop!" The shout made the blond stop immediately and the toddler looked at him wearily. "Will you scream again?" asked Koenma and David shook his head, scared. "Good, now let me introduce myself, I am Koenma, Enma's son, and I will be the one to test you since my father is busy. Did you get the first part?"
Nodding to the toddler, David pinched his cheeks to make sure he was not dreaming. The act went unnoticed by the small god who continued his speech.
"So now you are going to receive this egg, and you will have to do good deeds until the egg hatches. If you do good deeds the egg will hatch a good creature and you can return to life, but if you do bad things, the egg will hatch a monster that will eat you whole; not even your soul will be left, so do you understand?"
David nodded again and thought about the process of the things that were happening to him. He accepted the things as they were and decided to start doing good deeds.
"So where do I start?" he asked.
Koenma said around his pacifier, "You will start in the Human World, boy."
"Ok, but how do I get to the Human World again, Kouenmasma?"
"It is Koenma-sama!"
"I am sorry. I mean Ko. Enms. Ama."
"It is . .MA."
"Koenmasama."
"No! Koenma. SAMA."
"Ok, Koenma-sama."
"Finally you got it right, and to answer your question, Botan will take you."
David paled at the mention of the blue haired girl and her broom. He didn't want to ride on that thing again, it scared him.
"Come on, David-kun, let's go."
David smiled and decided not to correct his name. It had felt awkward trying to get the toddler's name right, and so he didn't want to put the girl in the same position as him. He hoped that he could do good deeds as soon as possible and be able to live again to thank all the people who had given him a good burial.
Five Hours Later
Arriving in the Human World again, David looked at the building in front of them. It was an old building which was in a bad shape; a sign was on the mail box that read "Blue House Orphanage." The teen gave the blue haired women a questioning glance and she smiled at him.
"You will have to convince a spirit there to move to the next world."
David looked with a horror filled face at the women who laughed at his expression.
"Ah don't look so shocked and sad; it is not as bad as you think."
David nodded and then turned to the building and gulped, but before he could enter the door opened and a blond woman came kicking out a man wearing a black suit. The man flew off and hit a tree while the women stood, proud of herself. Behind her a bunch of kids were watching in awe.
"That was awesome, Lora!"
"You looked like a superhero!"
"Do it again!"
"You are strong!" the kids cheered for the woman who smiled shyly at them, and David saw the ghost kid smile with them.
"Take that!"
"We won't hand the orphanage to you!" some of the older kids shouted at the man who got up and dusted his suit then turned to the other direction and moved away.
'Could it be?' Nodding to himself David hid behind the bush and waited for the group to go inside. Botan looked at him questioningly then smiled.
'He is starting to get the hang of it, good thing his first case is a small one that doesn't involve any demons,' thought the blue haired woman happily.
After watching the group go inside, David asked Botan if he could enter alone and the girl agreed, with the condition of telling her what happened in details.
Entering the building David watched the kids play around. He smiled at them but then remembered his objective and moved to the hall. Walking along he reached the director's room and entered. There he saw the blond woman and the director talking.
"This is the fifth man, Lora, we can't keep avoiding the payment, and the government won't wait for us any longer."
"I know, Mother, but we can't close it."
"I know but where can we get the money?" Both women then quieted down and went into deep thought. David felt his eyes nearly tearing, but a voice brought him back.
"I can't go to the other world with things like this," said the ghost boy and David looked at him startled. He let out the breath he was holding and gave the boy a big grin.
"You scared me," he admitted and the boy looked at him weirdly.
"Are you the one who is supposed to get me?" he asked and David nodded.
"THEN HAVE GUTS! YOU CHICKEN!" shouted the boy and David apologized.
"S-sorry."
"DON'T APPOLOGIZE!"
"I am so sorry."
" I SAID-OW!" the boy's ears were pulled and David turned to see Botan holding his ears.
"You kid, show some respect to your elders!"
"Ow! It is the demon women!"
"What?!"
"Miss Button."
"It is Botan!"
"I mean Miss Botan, you said you will be waiting outside so why did you come inside?"
"I couldn't leave you alone; you seemed like the type people push around so quickly, so I thought that you will have some problems with the kid here."
"Ah, ok."
"Hey, let go!"
"Not until you say sorry."
"There is n-"
"Ok! I am sorry! There, happy?! Now let me go!"
"You don't sound so sorry!"
"It is fi-"
"I am!"
"Say it in a good way!"
"You don'-"
"Ok fine! I am soooo sorry!"
"Not like that!"
Sighing David looked at the ceiling feeling completely out of place. 'Guess nothing has changed, huh?'
Five Hours Ago
On a high mountain a figure looked at a cage made out of rocks. It laughed an evil laugh and began to prepare for a ritual. He was not going to waste any more time, he would free the ancient demon and see him wreck havoc in the Human World and only then would he get his revenge.
After the whole 'apologize' incident, both Spirit World agents sat with the boy and talked. Hearing the story of the orphanage from him David felt sad while Botan felt pity.
"So if you want me to come, you will have to save the orphanage first. That is my only condition," stated the boy.
"And how are we supposed to do that?"
"You will get the necessary money and pay the government! Do I make m-"
"Boy," warned Botan in a scary voice.
"I mean, that is my condition mister, please accept it."
David wondered what Botan had done to make the boy so scared of the cute looking girl.
"Ok so now we need to gather the money." Both spirits looked at David and he blushed, he wasn't used to this much attention.
"We can't do that, we are invisible to humans," stated Botan.
"Oh." Both boys got depressed and the girl tried to cheer them up.
"Hey, don't feel down, I am sure if we explain the situation to Koenma-sama he will help," said the blue haired woman and both spirits nodded to her.
'I hope he does,' thought Botan.
"What! Pay for the orphanage!" said the angry toddler who was sucking on his pacifier.
"But, Koenma-sama! He says he won't come until the orphanage is saved."
"And where am I supposed to get that kind of money? I can't compromise my food money!"
"But, Koenma-sama!"
"No!"
"But we won't be able to finish the mission."
"Let the boy work."
"But he is invisible!"
"Ok! Fine, but I will put it on his tab."
"What tab?"
"THE ONE I AM CREATING NOW!"
"Yes." Closing the spirit communication device Botan sighed.
'Koenma-sama is can be such a baby'
The next day the money was paid to the government and they managed to save the orphanage from closing. The kid had passed in peace and David felt really happy, but suddenly Koenma called Botan.
"Botan! Come back quick and bring David with you, there is an emergency!"
