Guys, I am back... thanks for the tips :) Im only ten and this is my first story soo... okee :)
I walked into the ShadowClan camp with Moonshadow. I saw other cats muttering to each other, especially a black tom with white flecks and blind green eyes- which is weird, considering he can't see. Then a huge russet brown tom padded out of his den. " Moonshadow, why have you brought this RiverClanner here? Is she a prisoner? " He asked. " No- No she isn't, Birchstar, she DID attack me, but, I was on her territory, and I... almost killed her, so I kind of have to take her to see Hawkshine. Her wounds are very deep. " he replied, looking into Birchstar's eyes without flinching. " Very well," Birchstar said, " But afterwards, she goes immediately home. " he said. I was lead in the medicine den. " Oh! A fish-face- her throat looks like it's halfway torn out! " Exclaimed a dappled light brown she- cat. She but some cobweb, celandine, comfrey, and other herbs and poultices all over me. I also had to swallow stuff, but she sweetened it with honey.
After I had gotten the herbs, I went back to camp. It was dawn now. " Streamtail! I didn't see you in your nest, so I assumed you woke up early. But you know how I'm meeting Swiftheart of Thunderclan? I'm... I'm expecting kits! " My friend Briarheart told me. All from that, I was shocked. " Your in the prophecy, though! You can't do this! " I exclaimed. There was a prophecy, The heart of the Briar must beware the Dark Shadow. " You are so hateful! You know, I'd like to love who I want and you can't judge that!" She said. I ran away sobbing, towards the High Peek, a tall cliff. I was sobbing so hard, I fell over it. I Grasped on the edge. "HELP! " I yowled. Nobody was here to help. I felt my paws slip. I fell from the peak, rocks tumbling down with me. 20 feet below me there was a fast stream, but I would crack my head on a rock and die. I was ready to be take for StarClan.
Hehe clliff hanger :) BTW it isnt the end! 10 reviews = next chapter.