A/N: thnx 4 da revue my fren is helpin wif da spellin!
Plz read n tell me if its good! Its based on a frend's life 3
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"Oh no!" I cried "what are you doing!" I said as he tore my top off like in the Cinderella movie. He bit my huge chest and I cried out seductively in pain. Then he was about to put his you know what into my thingy when I grabbed a candle wick and stabbed him in the eye with it.
"you little bitch!" he said as he passed out. Falmes started to burn the house so I got 5 dollars and my clothes and went to my best friend maya's house. She was often raped and stuff. "we need to run away!" I said and we took the greyhound to our money ran out and they kicked us to the desert. We were walking down a road kind of like in sonic but dry and then a rattlesnake bit maya!
"oh no!" I said but I sucked the poisen out because I know things from watching anime like get backers and then she was okay but she was still hurt and tired. "im going to get help don't move okay?" I said as I went to the nearest town. Suddenly 3 native Americans came out of the nushes! Oh no!
They were dressed in dirty rags like dishrags and had ugly greased hair. They stole my money. Then one introduced himself. "Hi my name's Navaja and my friend Cuervo and Trazos will steal your virginity!" they took off my skirt and then played with me like a guitar but all hard and it hurt. I was screaming like the girl in elfin lied when…
"stop you guys!" a blonde boy burst through on a skateboard. He threw some fireworks and the guys ran away. They thought it was a gun or the border patrol.
"hey, are you allright?" he asked me as he handed me my things. But I recognized his blue eyes instantly (A/N:they looked like edword's).
"Oh my god!" I cried passionetly "You're KILO!"