Second chapter!! And I still don't own Naruto only my OC's.
I know its bad again first fanfic ever so please be nice…er Criticism is welcome I'm 100 American and I still can't spell to save my life!
"What if He doesn't join?" Pein asked "We would need to find someone else to train her" I know, but she is our daughter …I'll train her!"Konan Yelled "besides," she said more calmly "he will join he has no choice about it."
"Rinoa, honey we have something to tell you." Rayne said "We…You… weadaptedyouwhenyouwerefiveyourparentswerepoorandyouwerestarving .Theydidn'twantyoutodiesotheygaveyoutousthe onlythingtheyaskedwasthatweputyouinninjaacademy" She said really fast "WHAT! I'M ADOPTED! AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME SOONER BECAUSE…? I'M GONE!" Rinoa yelled as loud as she could "Hun…" "NO!" she started crying "I hate you" she said so calmly it was scary. Then she ran as fast as she could out the front door past her school and out the village gates and into the forest until she just couldn't run any more. She fell to the ground sobbing before she passed out.
Konan was running through the forest to mist to pick up her daughter. (Pein had given her the okay to get Rinoa)When she heard a faint crying so she stopped to locate the source when she saw her, her daughter lay unconscious on the forest floor "What happened" she whispered softly to herself as she picked up the girl and brought her to the Akatsuki headquarters. Then she went back to mist to find Rinoa's adaptive parents house for a little chat.
"What the heck happened? I found Rinoa unconscious in the woods!" Konan Yelled at Rayne "We told her she was adopted and she ran," Rayne said just above a whisper "I couldn't stop her I'm sorry, we told her you were poor and that she would have died if hadn't taken her hoping that would help but…" She said more boldly
I Know its short but im tired and not good at writing