Alright so here's chapter 2. Remember you can comment good or bad I don't care. I'll use both to becone a better writer. Anyway last chapter we learned of a prophecy and metal warriors come to finish what they started. Wonder who these Thirteen could be? Or on the battlefield for Primus and for Unicron? Well before I become a spoiler lets get on with the story! Oh by the way most of this story will be in third person until we actually get into Brianian's Path.

"Ancient prophecies, curses, and last words before something"

"SHOUTING"

"mute bots speaking" probably won't be any of this for a very long time but we shall see

thought"

The ancient arrival

As Selene looked at her fellow moon diety she gave a very small snile and spoke "Artemis to truly understand this warrior you need to go back. Through time, through memories, through the legends. Ask the demigods about the Myth of the Undefeated. Find your proof of him and then start your hunt. Learn about him, find out how he thinks and then only then will you be able to start your hunt. But even if you can track him, if he doesn't want to be found he more than likely will not be forund."

Artemis looked at Selene worry flashing in her eyes before it turned to sheer detemination "Selene I am going to find this boy and bring him before my fellow Olympians in Chains! Even if I have to kill him."

Selene looked at Artemis almost sadly but nodded and spoke softly "Then look through my mind, into the ancient past and find him. Watch what he does and how he works. Then begin your hunt for the Warrior of Myth."

Flashback around 7000 B.C. Start of early Ancient Greece

The Greek council were in the middle of a discussion for what they should do now that Greece seemed to be safe after the wars. In the middle of another great argument between the Big three Zeus, Poseidon, and Hades the throneroom door burst open. In strolled a warrior with no armor and only a sword and hammer that glowed with a dark purple lining around the edge. He was tall at around 6'6 and had dark brown hair and eyes. But what caught the attention of everyone was the long jagged scar over his right eye which was glazed and gray, and the fact that he was fighting of several mosters with a grace that very few warriors could achieve. Ducking in between the claws, clubs, arrows, and swords of the dracnae, cyclops, and hellhounds before striking with heavy blows from the hammer and swift swings from the blade. The Olympian Council could only look on in facination as the warrior shredded the monsters.

When the last monster was defeated Zeus being the ever drammatic boomed "Who are you and why do you disrupt the Council of the Gods!?" When the young warrior didn't respond for a moment then started to chuckle Zeus became enraged and roared out "And why do you think its funny that you have disrupted the council of the gods? This is a major crime one that can put you to death if not treated correctly."

The young warrior stopped his chuckling almost instantly straightening his posture he spoke in a calm voice all influence of humor gone "I wish to pledge myself and my sisters to the protection of Greece against its enemies. Be it the Titans or any other threat." Unknown to many the warrior before them had been alive for far longer than them and had already fought against the Protogenoi and the Titans.

As Zeus thought about it he looked over at his brothers, sisters, and children and spoke "what do you all think of this... warrior?" Zeus was very quickly met with several "I do not trust him" from Hera, Artemis, and Hephaestus.

Poseidon, Hestia, Hades, Apollo, Hermes, and Demeter spoke up that 'they will trust him but he must take a oath on the styx' Then we had the oh so glorious Aphrodite looking at him in lust and Ares looking at him for a fight.

Zeus finally spoke "It looks like you have the councils trust. But you must swear on the styx not to betray us."

When they looked to the young warrior he simply nodded then spoke "I Brianian Dark pledge myself and my twelve sisters to the defence of Greece and Olympus unless we are given reason not to. I do herby swear this to be true apon the Styx" Faraway the gods could hear the deep rumble of thunder signalling the oath was done. But while listening they didn't catch Brianian's eyes flash a radient blue in his left eye and a full lifeless red in his right eye as he watched them. Before long though he grew bored with the meeting and asked to leave to find his sister with the council nodding for him to leave.

As soon as Brianian stepped out of the throneroom he was assulted by twelve girls that while younger looked remarkably like him.

"Hello sisters, How has your day been?" Brianian asked

His second oldest sibling Uni spoke up " Why always the gentleman Brother? You know better than anyone of us the chaos we were born from."

Smiling slightly he spoke with a teasing glint in his eye "Why yes sister I do. That's why I have to keep it in check. Am I right or wrong?"

The twelve sisters looked at each other having a silent conversation before they turned back in a horrifying show of coordination and spoke together "No, no you don't brother." before slowly walking forward.

Only one thought went through Brianian's mind as he looked at the sight before him 'uh oh'before he turned and took of with twelve angry girls following behind him at a quick pace.

Five years later

The Olympians sat back and watched as a army was raised an army was trained and a army grew. They watched as the army trained and evaluated the thirteen generals of the army. The Dark siblings as they liked to be called and anything that happened to them went through the head Brianian. He was not amused by gods hitting on his siblings or him. Something was off about them though. They only seemed to drink this dark purple liquid that seemed to thick to be a drink but to thin to be food. They also trained and fought until early the next morning then were always up at 5 to work the army and kept up with fully rested soldiers. They also never seemed to age or gain stress lines like they were already completly prepared for the challenge. But Olympus felt something approaching a new challenge. Maybe not a big one but a challenge for their army. Then the raids began the small raids turning into City-States burning from the barbarians to the North.

The first challenge for the new army and its generals.

Okay so I really like this chapter. Still a little small for my taste but what can you do. remeber review no matter good or bad I won't burn you for it and I will use it to get better.