Dear reviewers: I've read you're reviews and have taken your advice into account, I'd like to thank you, because most of my writing has gone without critics that knew alot about writing, so here is a well planned chapter, I hope you enjoy!

Chapter two

R.I.P Kasey

"So you've been able to see spirits since you were young huh?" Rukia asked as Renji withdrew his Zabimaru into its holder as Rukia reached in her pocket and pulled out a pez like dispenser and put it in front of Kasey.

"Is that gikongai dispenser?" She asked as she saw chappy the bunny staring back at her.

"Um, not quite" Rukia said as a flash came from the bunny's head and Kasey fell to her knees, "There, now she won't remember the hollow attack or meeting us and telling us that we're just some characters in a comic book, the nerve of that girl!" Rukia said as she and Renji disappeared form the scene as Kasey sat there as a the memories of her encounter with the soul reapers faded into dust and she soon regained thought and went on her usual way.

"I gotta get home and finish my homework!!" she realized as she ran her fastest down the street and around the corner and right through her front door up the stairs and stopped right in front of her desk, a hair away from a catastrophic crash that would have ruined her entire room, but with that crisis averted she calmly sat down at her desk and finished her algebra homework and relaxed for the rest of the evening.

Later than night…

"Kasey wake up dear, we have to go now!" Her mothers voice rang in her ears as she slightly opened her eyes to see that her mother was frantically shaking her as a bright orange light shone behind her. Kasey, now with a high sense of urgency sat upright and saw that the hallways leading to her bedroom was on fire and it was racing fast towards her room, "We've got to go, NOW!" her mother screamed as they ran half way through the hall and some of the ceiling fell down. Kasey's mother dove ahead of the falling ceiling, but Kasey was not so lucky and got struck in the head with some falling debris and knocked backward and off of her feet.

"Ouch, I have to get out of here, and now" Kasey thought to her self as her vision was starting to blur red from the blood running down her face. She began to feel for another way out of her house, but the heat and smoke made it harder for her to breathe and she began to fear the worst. She closed her right eye due to the blood seeping into it and now could see a little clearer and saw that there was a small opening into the family room, "I've got to make this" and Kasey knew that this was a life or death situation and she stood on her feet, and sprinted towards the living room and dove head first and made it into the opening to the living room, which was untouched by the fire. "I made it!" she celebrated, until she saw that there was a small creature in the living room with her and Kasey looked at it and in an instant it blew out a massive burst of flames that ignited everything around her, and before she could move the roof collapse on top of her and the rest of the house followed suit.

"Are you just gonna take that!"

"A hollow, just taking down you and your mom and destroying your house? I think not!"

This unrecognizable voice rang throughout Kasey's head and when she opened her eyes, she saw a woman standing in front of her with her arms crossed, her auburn hair making it's way down her back. She was wearing a dress with a flower pattern running from the right shoulder down to the bottom of the dress.

"On your feet Kasey" the woman said, and Kasey's slowly made her way to her feet, not knowing who the woman was, or even if she were still alive, all she knew is that she wasn't wearing her school clothes, but what looked like a black gi and loose matching pants. "What are you waiting for, draw your sword and go fight that hollow!" she yelled obnoxiously in Kasey's face and Kasey flinched.

"But I don't like fighting, it's wrong, can't I just reason with it??" she said timidly as the woman backed away and placed a hand on Kasey's shoulder and smiled.

"Well, since you put it that way…NO!" the woman said as she put a katana in Kasey's hand and shoved her back to reality.

"What happened to my house?" Kasey shouted as she saw the flaming wreckage of her house, and saw the hollow in the middle of it all; her school clothes now back on her body and the katana shaking along with her hand, she made her way up to the hollow and it roared violently at her and lunged with the intent to kill her. "NO!!" Kasey yelled as her blade wielding hand moved upward fast and the tip of the blade went from the chin of the hollow right through the top of it's head, killing the hollow in an instant. "I did it…I DID IT!" Kasey said as she jumped up and down for joy, "Ichigo would be proud!" she said, but then she realized what wielding a Zanpakuto and coming out of the rubble of a burned down house meant…she was dead. She began to dig through the debris and found her body. It was burned on the arms and legs, and her upper body had a piece of would going right through the left side of her chest, which meant that her heart was punctured, and would now be a permanent resident of a place that was not even supposed to be real, the Soul Society.

Ichigo: "Wow , did oyu have to kill her?"

Me: Well you didn't want her story to be exactly like yours did you, a human in the real world with soul reaper powers, seems like a copy"

Ichigo: "yeah you're right, I cna't wait to see what happens next, read and review people!!! Please just say good or bad!!!"