Hello in your next review if you write one can you please let me know if you can see your own and other reviews on the page I am getting them but it is not going on the page for the devises I check.

I might not be able to put one on tomorrow as I have to go to year 10 revision 10-1 and then I am meeting family. 2 reveiws or no chapter like normal. And the chapters will be small but regular.


She was going to have to take her mum to work as she could not leave her at home she would forget something and she didn't want her mum to have her life at stake so she took to work.

All the way to her work her mum kept asking her different questions but what really got Serena was when her mum forgot ellies name.

"When is my granddaughter coming over?" asked Serenas mum in curiosity.

"Ellie mum." Said Serena telling her mum.

"Who is this girl?" said Serenas mum forgetting who she was.

"She is your granddaughter." Said Serena.

When they got to the hospital Serena got her mum to go into a room where she could learn different things to keep her mind stronger.

Serena left her mum and went to work she could not think and she dropped a cup of water that she was meant to give to a patient. No matter what she tries she could not do her work.

Later guy self came over and told Serena to go home but she refused she was not going to her house where she would be thinking about it.

Her mum was better at the hospital and she needed her money she did not want to put her mum into a care home. It was safer for her mum to be there.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxsssssssssssxxxxxxxxxxxssssssss

Jacs life was about to get worse not only did jonnie get their daughter on weekends he is aloud full access through the week.

Jac went back to work really angry at what happened her lawer did not help by saying Jac was struggling with jonnie and Bonnies old relationship.

"from what I have heard I will have to give jonnie weekenwd to his daughter and has full time access to." Said the judge a male,.

"yeah that is good." Said jonnie.

Jac coulnt belive it.

What will she do she thaught.

This is rubbish but I wanted to put a chapter on.

I have a head ache so that is why sorry.