Yo wassup, that people for commenting, those ten. I hope i stisy your needs yo. Please review My spelling aint that good and neva is my writin skill nAH MEAN. I'm alittle rusty so if you see anything I or you would change please comment and i will answer. The firstchapter, OH and i need help picking the three poeples teams, nah mean. Put who you would like, why i should, and how would they compliment eachova, and i'll tell you later in the story, and maybe you'll have an apperance in my story ;]
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Chapter one: You decide
"A-ag-ag-aga-again." The little girl "A-ag-ag-aga-again." The little girl wheezed. She knew all her tenketsu were closed every part of her body ached. She stood up and dashed at the dark brown hair girl with long bangs, and stone cold white eyes. The other one simply brushed off the attack. She instantly took her two fingers and thrashed it into her stomach. The other meek girl flew back hitting the wall with a loud thud. Blood erupted from the timid girl's mouth.
"ENOUGH!" the man said with the long dark brown hair and aloof white eyes like all members of his clan. His Myrtle traditional, loose fitting robe and the trim of the robe being a celadon color. The man got up and walked out of the room, while the winning child began to follow him. The eight year old timid girl stood up as blood rapidly flew out of the wound, her black eye was throbbing, and her body was on the edge of giving up.
"a-ag-aga-gain." Hanabi stared at the timid girl. She ran up to the girl and kicked her ferociously in the stomach, full of hatred, full of pride, full of everything. The blow sends the timid girl's body into shock. Her head, ringing of pain, she bent over and coughed blood splattered on the mahogany wood paneled floor .
"Han-han-han-bi…why?" Hinata whispered the last part, grasping for air that wouldn't come in. "You-your hi-hit-ting to-too ha-ha-rd."
"Father never said I should take you lightly." Hanabi scoffed and continued icily, "I wasn't even trying, so maybe you're too weak." Hanabi bent back her head in laughter, "I don't see how mother gave birth to such a weakling like you. If she was alive she would be ashamed…so consider this a favor." Hanabi walked up to Hinata and grabbed her by the hair; she pulled her up to her level.
"You're a failure, and your fate right now….IS DEATH!" She dropped Hinata and started kicking her until Hinata was brought into darkness.
O.o.O.o.O
A blue eyed boy with blonde wild spiky hair, the whisker marks on his face running to school with his oversized orange tracksuit with blue on the upper shoulders area as well as up and down the front, a white swirl with a tassel on the left side, a red swirl on the back, a big white collar, orange pants, blue sandals. The frighten boy was running for his life, another angry mob wanting to kill for something he wasn't in control of. The dead end alley way was the place of his death; he could smell the death aroma ready to strike on him. They began to beat on him, some Shinobi, like certain silver headed one wanting to exact his revenge on the blonde haired boy, for taking the only thing that he had left of his family. The little boy was engulfed by the darkness.
Halls, with dim lights, the blonde boy got off the ground and walked thru the nearest hall. The hallway was dark with the door way seeming as though it was too far away.
'what is it,' He paused, 'This feeling.'
He reached out for it, but it seemed to have run away, he ran to it, and it stopped. He went inside, just to get a cage with a beast with a sinister smile, the chakra was so large you could see the chakra glowing, almost radiating off the fox. The fox stared at the boy with hatred, yet sympathetic, for it's his fault of this bad treatment that he got. He went closer to it and he clawed the little boy, She gave a swift kick and stood a little father than the cage.
"I want o devour you, but the cage won't open." The Kyuubi started squinting, " It's the damn despicable seal."
"Y-YOU-YOUR'RE THE N-NIN-E TAI-TAILS!"
"You have guts, you blackmailing me like that." The chakra began reminiscing out of the cage onto the blonde boy. It went around him and then engulfed him, he tried to scream but he just couldn't.
"It's a reward for coming all the way here! I'll give it to you." The Kyuubi stated, " I will teach you how to use my powers, but at this moment I will destroy those filthy bastards, so you SHUT UP if you want to stay alive." The blonde boy closed his mouth before saying anything that could make the beast angry, because one thing wrong and the thing could snap his neck in half… with his nail of his pinkie. It's not like he didn't try to do it 3 seconds ago.
The boy's eyes went pitch black, he began crouching down as his animal instinct took over, the red cloak swathed. The fangs grew out and the crowd began to feel the mincing wrath radiating off the little boy. The bright blue eyes turned blood shot red and he growled, a growl that could be heard all over the world. He grabbed the throat of the man in the front and squeezed until he heard a snap. The smell of blood brought an adrenaline. The woman he ripped the leg off the women and the blood showered the people in the gang.
"CHIDORI!" K. Naruto turned around and snapped the silver headed man; a bloodcurdling scream erupted out of his mouth. He grabbed him by the throat and started squeezing. The blood made the kyuubi happy; he wanted to see them suffer. For too long they had their fun, now it's his turn.
ANBUs came out of the dark try to contain the little boy, they could see the tail beginning to pop out and sooner or later if this didn't stop, the day would come again.
O.o.O.o.O
The grey haired man with several wrinkles, and very few liver-spots, he just didn't have the patience that he had a younger age. Ever since the death of the Yellow flash he had to become Hokage again, and things has gotten worse, for Naruto was beaten and called everything that Minato had feared to begin with. They didn't honor him as a hero that stopped the rampage of the kyuubi, but a low life demon who killed innocent people and deserve to die. People didn't understand that he was the jail for the kyuubi not the kyuubi himself, and so what if he was. He wasn't attacking everyone, because if he was Naruto he would kill all the people in this village, and watch it burn in his hands. With age it would seem that he has also taken on smoking a pipe, he took a long drag from the tobacco, he just had a a feeling today was going to be a long felt a burst of abnormal chakra from the far side of the village
"HOKAGE-SAMA, Naruto (wheeze) he has (cough)(wheeze)lost control and is (cough) on a kil-ling rampage." Sarutobi quickly took off his robe and Hokage hat. Under was a black jumpsuit with grey shoulder armor, a gauntlet on his right arm, a Konoha forehead protector bandanna with long straps and a ninja helmet which he wears under it. They both leaped out the window and continued
O.o.O.o.O
Was she going to die? Would anyone care if she suddenly disappeared? Thoughts jumbled into the timid girls head, she was lying in her blood, and she would die in a couple of minutes if no one comes to her rescue. It's not like that mattered they were going to kill her, she knew the elders never liked her since she was born, she knew they wanted to put the cage bird seal on her when she first came out of the womb of the once alive mother. They knew she would be weak, they knew she would be useless, they knew it all. And yet she tried to prove them wrong. And that's where it got her. Dying slowly, pitiful death, Had they not realize she was in this room, dying? It doesn't matter; it wasn't like they were going to help. They never helped anyway.
O.o.O.o.O
"Kukuku…Kabuto-kun." Orochimaru said in a sickly sweet tone, "I'm growing impatient."
"I'm sorry Lord Orochimaru, but we need to find the right subordinate to be yours."
"Kabuto, you don't understand, I need someone who is hopeless and is on the bridge of driving on hatred, and I don care, I would either want an Uchiha or an Hyuga, and if I don't get it soon I will go after it myself." Orochimaru splattered. Kabuto stared at him in disbelief.
"But why can't you use me Oro-sama at this time to see if it works." Orochimaru looked at Kabuto.
"I will get what I want and I will kill if need be, and I'm not afraid to kill you if I have to understand Kabuto-hime." Kabuto looked appalled but quickly took that emotion from his eyes and nodded, not trusting his voice at this moment. He was frustrated. Why couldn't his master use him? Is it because he doesn't have such powerful bloodlines like the Byakungan and Sharingan? Or was it because he cared for him and didn't want to lose him? All he knew what that he needed someone like those, and when they come. Will he just be there? Will Orochimaru ignore him now? He wanted to be used but Orochimaru wouldn't take it. Was he not valuable to him? It wasn't fair, why could he just use what he had, but that Orochimaru for you. He wanted nothing but the best.
O.o.O.o.O
"Good to see you again." Sarutobi stare at .
"What's going on here." Sarutobi said in shock, seeing all these people lying on the floor with blood. Many were in trances screaming for the demon to take them out of their misery, just to kill them. Many body parts lying there fresh blood all over and the kyuubi giving a roar while tearing apart more.
"They put the brat into a coma and I will not sit here and let him die. After all they broke the Fourth's law and the penalty is Death." The kyuubi snarled as he stared at the people who was shivering.
"Take all that is left to the Interrogation chamber." The cloak began go back and the boy fell to his death, or coma.
O.o.O.o.O
"We found her in the Hyuga compound dying of blood loss. I could only hear a faint heart beat."
"What is the MEANING OF THIS!"
"Your child was about to die in your house."
"I have no idea of what you are talking about, she is not my daughter. I do not have such weak children under my wing."
"YOU left YOUR own child TO DIE."
"YOU SON OF A BIT-"
"We have an emergency about a little boy going in and out of the border line of death." The voice of the mysterious person finished with," I'm not done with you."
She tried to open her eyes, but that was quite a battle she was losing. She could hear the wheeling of the bed as they put the bed next to hers. They left her in there. She could finally open her eyes. An IV strapped to her arms gave her quite the shiver; she couldn't see in her left eye, apparently she was wrapped in bandages; she felt the sting when she tried to move her neck. Everything hurted, She looked to her right to see a boy with sun kissed hair, his left arms, his right eye, his chest, was covered in the same as her bandages. She could feel the pain. She wanted to cry, but no tears came out. She wanted to hug him, but she couldn't move. She was paralyzed in fear… for him she couldn't handle such a thing she just couldn't even look into his closed eye. She walked to him, and she cried on him. She crid for her family, she cried for her sanity, she cried for what's going to happened.
She cried for him.
