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recap of previous chapter
"Mommy! Mommy! Mommy!" Marie shrieked as she was somersaulting in midair "heheheh dying tickles" Ana said with a grin and continued to float through the vortex as it closed. The door opened as Ana's mother looked into the now messed up room, she pursed her lips in displeasure at that and looked around the room for the girls, she couldn't find either girl while the T.V. came back on, the scene was showing Kira working on a computer. "Ana?...Marie?" she scratched her head in worry and wonder at Ana and Marie's disappearance.
with the girls
"Ow...Ana? Where are we?" Marie looked around to see a desk with a computer on it. Ana sat up and looked around as well "Um...I have absolutely no idea" She said as they both got up from the floor. Then they both heard the door open...or slide...whatever and turned to see a man with blonde shoulder length hair and a mask covering his face "Who are you two?" he asked all to calmly, Marie's eyes widened slightly and then "Marie?" she looked at the taller girl "What?" Ana flushed slightly "I need some new pants" Marie looked at her for a second before realizing Ana's problem and shook her head "Ana...Ana...Ana..." she put her face into her hands.
The man looked at both girls and pressed a botton "What the hell did you press?" Marie glared at him, then six soldiers wearing white and green uniforms came inside the room, Ana gave a mean look to the soldiers while Marie sighed, deciding not to cause trouble and get hurt, she co-operated with them and followed...Ana sounded like a cat in heat. They put Marie in a prison room, while they threw Ana in "Ow! Bastards!" she cursed at them and sat down near Marie who was sitting on a bed, which was rather hard "Jeez! Might as well make us sleep on the frickin floor!" she complained out loud. Marie went to lie down, Ana gave her a look "how can you do that?" Marie ignored her and started to sing.
Marie: Lonely im so lonely,
I have nobody,
To call my owwnnn
Im so lonely, im mr. Lonely
I have nobody,
To call my owwnnn
Im so lonely
"Shut up in there!" yelled an oh-so familiar voice, Marie rolled her eyes and smirked maliciously; she began to sing once more.
Marie:Teen drinkning is very bad
yo i got a fake id though
yeeah, yeeah,yo, 2 step wit me, 2 step wit me
1, here comes the 2 to the 3 to the 4
everybody drunk out on the dance floor...
"I SAID SHUT THE HELL UP!" yelled the voice, Marie chuckled silently "Yzak, leave whoever's in there alone" said a calm, gentle voice. Ana smiled and called back to Yzak "I heard you say 'shut up in there', but not 'I SAID SHUT THE HELL UP!'" Ana giggled "Gah!" he cried out in frustration as laughs could be heard and them leaving. Marie and Ana laughed out loud as they left. Marie settled down "ah. we're horrible" Ana was still trying to calm down "I think he's gonna kill us after" Ana finally stopped..."meh." was all she said, Marie shrugged...the door opened to reveal a soldier. "La Klueze wants to see you both" the girls got up and followed the soldier to wherever the hell his office is, they entered. He was looking at them...hopefully Ana didn't need new pants this time.
"Now, are you girls coordinators or naturals" Ana stayed quiet "Well, we wouldn't have snuck in here if we weren't coordinators" La Klueze looked at Marie and smirked "I suppose so" he pressed another button "oh god. What did you press this time?" Marie looked at him "I'm just calling your escorts" Marie shut up. "Escorts?" Ana thought out loud "yes, I can't have you both wandering the ship so freely" Marie sighed hoping Ana would cooperate so thewy wouldn't have to manhandle her again. The door opened to reveal our favorite elite ZAFT pilots.
"Who the hell are they?" asked Yzak "Well, I'm Ana and this vertically challenged midget here is Marie" Marie death glared, Dearka just blinked, Athrun gave them wierd looks, Nicol chuckled and Yzak laughed right out loud. "I trust you girls don't need introductions to these boys, do you?" La Klueze looked at them "Hell no. How could we not know the sons of PLANTS council members" Ana stated proudly of her vast knowledge Gundam SEED's own ZAFT pilots. Yzak smiled haughtly at his status in society, Nicol blushed, Dearka grinned and Athrun gave a forced smile. "Right then, I'd like you boys to escort these girls to their room" Marie looked at him from the corner of her eye "I truly hope you don't mean that monstrousity with the rock-like bed?" he shook his head.
"Wait a minute aren't you the girls who were singing?" asked Dearka, Yzak glared "no, that was Marie, I'm the one who just smart talked" Ana explained. Yzak looked at the shorter girl "Never ever sing again" Marie rolled her eyes "and you never talk to me like that, ever." Yzak threatened Ana, who in return stuck out her tongue "and I suppose you sound better than me?" the three boys laughed...Yzak couldn't believe what he just heard, A girl who obviously was a lower class in society than him just mocked his ability to sing, well he wasn't going to stand it. "Shut up! You little bitch!" Yzak gave a death glare that could even match Heero Yuy's, Marie sighed deeply and ignored his comment.
"Well, enough of that please escort them to the room" La Klueze rubbed his temples out of frustration. They nodded and motioned for the girls to follow them. "So, how did you both get on here?" Athrun asked "We snuck on board" Ana replied "Why would you do THAT!" Dearka looked at her "Dunno...something to do" she shrugged half heartedly "where's the other girl?...Marie, right?" Nicol asked noticing that she was gone. "Yeah, that's her name and I have absolutely no idea where she is" Ana then inhaled. "What are you doing?" Yzak looked at her, then..."YO! M-CAT! GET YO ASS OVA HERE!" the boys jumped slightly then they all heard footsteps "wazzup?" Marie was beside Athrun in a second.
"Where were you?" Marie smiled "I had to take a wicked 'yes' and on the way back, I took these" she held up a donut, cheesecake and a strawberry shortcake, both of the cakes were wrapped in plastic. Ana snatched the donut from her hands. "Marie! What did I say about these things!" Marie blinked "They'll go straight to your ass!" Yzak, Dearka, Nicola and Yzak looked about ready to cry and laugh at the same time. Marie looked at her tiny butt "meh. Needs boosting up anyway" Ana gave her a "WTF!" look and shook her head "let's go" Marie smiled happily as she took the donut from Ana and took a bite.
BrokenImmortal: Well I'm tired and I'll stop there, I know I make short chapters but I promise that the next one will be longer, until then I hope you enjoyed the chapter and review. Thanks and I'm sorry for any spelling mistakes