A/N: Here's another chapter for The Girl from Alderaan! Sorry for the long wait!

This is the betaed version of chapter 2. I hope that chapter 3 can come soon. Just have your fingers crossed!

I'm done talking now. Here's the chapter!


After my conversation with Mom, Lena showed me around the rebel base. I was amazed by it. When I saw the ships they had, I freaked out. I really wanted to fly one of them!

Sensing what I was thinking, Lena spoke up with a nod. "You'll be able to fly one if you pass the flight simulator," she informed me as we were walking.

"A what now?" I asked in surprise.

"Flight simulator. I can take you to it," Lena said as I followed her. I was still a little confused. Was it like a test? Because I suck at tests.

Lena took me into a room where a bunch of computers were. She beckoned a guy wearing an orange jumpsuit.

"Hi Wedge. This is my friend Brenna Rini. She wants to be a pilot," Lena introduced me.

The guy, or Wedge as Lena called him, looked at me. "Ok. I'm Wedge Antilles. I'll train you to be a pilot, but we better work fast. There's going to be an attack against the Death Star. We could use all the pilots we can get," he said. I nodded and followed him to a computer. It was basically just me flying around and shooting some ships that looked like bowties. I only died three times.

"Good job! We could use you on the Red team. You could be Red 12," Wedge said. I smiled at him.

"I can't wait!" I shouted excitingly.

...

I was dressed in one of those orange jumpsuits the pilots were wearing. It felt so soft.

While I was walking to my ship, I saw a hot brunette guy arguing with a hot blonde guy. There was also some furry guy behind the hot brunette guy. The hot blonde guy was wearing a flight suit, so I figured he would be up with us.

I saw Lena and walked up to her. She smiled when she saw me. "You better not die out there, you hear me?" she ordered.

I laughed. "Come on. No one could get rid of me that easily!" I proclaimed. Lena laughed and hugged me and I hugged back.

I walked to my ship and boarded it. I put on my helmet and took off.

...

All of the ships flew towards the Death Star. "All wings report in," a guy said over the radio.

"Red 10 standing by."

"Red 7 standing by."

"Red 3 standing by."

"Red 6 standing by."

"Red 9 standing by."

"Red 2 standing by."

"Red 11 standing by."

"Red 5 standing by."

"Red 12 standing by," I said once my turn arrived.

"Lock S-foils to attack position," Red leader said.

We flew closer to the Death Star. "Look at the size of that thing!" Wedge shouted.

"Cut the chatter Red 2! This is it boys!" Red leader said.

We started to attack its surface. The cannons started shooting at us.

"This is Red 5. I'm going in," Red 5 said. I recognized his voice. He was the hot blonde guy! I saw him go in, but there was an explosion!

"Luke! Pull up!" Red 3 shouted. I saw the ship get out of the explosion. "Are you alright?!" Red 3 shouted.

"I got a little cooked, but I'm okay," the hot blonde guy, or Luke as Red 3 called him, reassured us.

We kept on advancing the cannons. I then saw a ship explode. "Kriff," I cursed with an alarmed tone.

"Squad leaders, we picked up a new group of signals. Enemy fighters coming your way," the base reported back to us.

"My scopes negative! I don't see anything!" Luke shouted.

"Pick up your visual scanning's!" Red Leader shouted.

"Here they come!" I said nervously. I was not ready to die! "I'm only 14!" I shouted for my despair.

The bowtie ships came out of nowhere and started attacking! I shot four but one of them was on my tail. Luckily, Wedge came and saved me.

"Thank Gods!" I shouted. "Thanks Wedge!"

...

Red leader had just fired his shot, but missed.

"Good job," I said sarcastically. I couldn't help it. My nerves were getting the best of me.

Then Red Leader got shot after he put Luke in charge of attack.

Luke, Red 3, and Wedge both went into the trench. I came above to watch. Wedge had to get out when he got hit a little. Suddenly, Red 3 got hit!

"How many of us are getting killed?!" I shouted. I came in the trench to help Luke. There were three bowtie ships behind us. One looked different than the others. He started to shoot at me but I dodged. Then suddenly, I got hit! I nearly crashed, but somehow I didn't.

"You ok Red 12?" Luke asked.

"I'm fine. Somehow," I said. I was really confused. How the hell did I live?! Don't get me wrong, I'm thankful I did, but I was sure I wasn't supposed to.

Luke then turned on his targeting computer from what I saw. Then a few minutes later, he turned it off. I got more confused.

"His computers off! Luke, you switched off your targeting computer! What's wrong?!" I asked him.

"Nothing! I'm alright!" he reassured us. I was still worried. Then I saw that his R2 unit got hit. Suddenly, the odd looking bowtie ship shot at Luke, but one of the bowtie ships got hit!

"Yahoo!" someone shouted over the radio. Then a weird looking ship zoomed into view. It then shot the other bowtie, sending the odd looking one into deep space! I sighed in relief.

"You're all clear kid, now let's blow this thing and go home!" the guy shouted. I recognized him as the hot brunette from earlier!

Luke then fired the shot. I had my fingers crossed. "Please go in. PLEASE GO IN!" I shouted.

IT WENT IN! Holy crap! We are saved!

"Great shot kid! That was one in a million!" the hot brunette shouted.

We flew back to Yavin IV, a great feeling of justice taking over me. I felt that wherever my parents were, they were proud.

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I landed back on Yavin IV, where Lena was waiting for me. I came out of my ship and hugged her. "Thank the Force you're alive!" she smiled.

"I'm okay! That was amazing!" I laughed, "I swear, I never felt so alive!"

We then walked towards Luke's ship, where everyone was congratulating him. I even thought I recognized someone else. It was the Princess of Alderaan! How is she alive? I thought she was on Alderaan when it blew!

"Is that Princess Leia Organa?" I asked Lena in shock.

Lena simply smirked as we both went to congratulate Luke. Then we walked away.

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There was a ceremony for the heroes of the battle. The heroes got a medal. I didn't get one. Sadness. Hopefully someday. The people who got one were Luke and the hot brunette guy called Han. Even though the furry guy was up there, he didn't get one. At least he knows my pain. Princess Leia gave them the medals and we all clapped for them, a feeling of joy taking over the Rebel Alliance and every single one of us.


A/N: What do you think? Do you think it's better than before?

I really hope that the betaed version of chapter three will come soon. Beta? If you are reading this, please make it soon!

You guys can still guess on the mysteries. The mysteries are who Brenna's mom is and who Lena really is. I'm sure you guys will like the answer to the Lena mystery!

I hope you enjoyed this chapter! Please review!